Dooriyan bhi hai jaroori !! THREAD 3 pt 47 pg130 - Page 31

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Part 43



maan kept looking at geet motionless...geet noticed it n made a question face at him like asking 'kya huva..'
maan shook his head wid a smile and again payed his attnesion to others...

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geet kept looking at d calm water as she on d stone nearby d lake...she thought and rethought about maan's behaviour..she alwz how possessive he is about her..let it be as best frnd..but he could handle her giving impotance to sum1 else dan him and idiot he is taking out all his frustartion on poor suzeill..she shouldn't av snapped at her like dis...she knew..he was not liking her being so frndly wid sameer..but he needs to understand..he just cnt suzeil for granted..she is neive and very emotional person...maan just pruposed her ystrday and 2day he just snapped at her..just wats wrong wid him..when vil he understand..he should give importance to suzeil n not her...

I've learned a lot of lessons
In the short time I have lived
I've learned how to appreciate
And I've learned how to give.

But in these past few months
There's two I'll remember most
I've learned how to live
And I've learned to let go.

You entered my life with such a force
And left it with one as strong
And though we tried to make it last
We both knew it wouldn't be long.

I lie at night and think about
How I'm the one to blame.
If only I would have trusted you,
I could have missed this pain.

And so I spent each day of my life
With my heart in pieces
And when I thought it could never be cured,
Something happened; I expected it least.

I guess my soul was all cried out,
And it was tired of being used.
And even though I know I'm guilty,
I was tired of being accused.

And so I've learned to end this
Without an urge to cry
These are my final words to you,
"I love you and goodbye."

a tear rolled out of her eyes..never on d earth she had ever thought of dis moment where she vil need maan make understand d importance of sum other gal in his life...for old days..she alwz thought only she is maan's best frnd.he wud never need sum1 else..n when she realised her love for maan..she smiled wid tears as she remembered just how beautifull dat moment was...but den nothing is same now..things has changed so drastically dat she is feeling miserable about d entire situation..maan loves suzeil...but cnt see me wid sum1 else..does maan understand, dis behaviour of his vil hurt suzeil so much...i hav to make him understand..he like it or not..he vil hav to admit d fact...

she was lost in her thoght when she felt a finger wiping her tear...n from d simple touch she knew..it was not maan..startled she looking beside only to find sameer sitting beside her wid his smile...

sameer wiped of her tear completely, "ansun insan ko kamjor banate hai geet..aur jahan tak me tumhe samajh paya hun..GEET HANDA kamojor nahi hai..."

geet smiled at d way he said GEET HANDA in attitude n stared back at d calm layer of water, "humesha chize jaisi dikhati hai..waisi hoti nahi..ab isse dekho..(she picked a small stone n threw in water..breaking its layer..sameer looked at her confused)..dekha tumne..kitni shant tha ye pani 1 sec pehle..par bas ek pathhar (stone) ka tukada hi kafi hai ise badlane ke liye..."

sameer stared at d water for few seconds..trying to understand her point of veiw..

geet smiled calmly, "humesha cheeze jaisi dikhati hai..jaruri nahi ke wohi sach ho...hasi insan ke chehre par nahi hoti..hasi ankhon me hoti hai...kisi ki ankhon me jhank kar ye saaf dekh sakte ke uski hasi asli hai ya nakli..."

sameer sighed n put his hand on her dat was laying on d ground...

litle uncomfortable...she looked at him..sameer eyes were serious..she could see...

sameer looked deep in her eyes, "aur tumhari ankhon me mujhe etna dard kyu dikhata hai geet...tum etni successfull ho..tumhare paas etni achhi family..etne acche dost..sab hai...par fir ye dard kyu.."

geet didn't even blink her eyes..his looking deep in her eyes didn't even matter to her...

sameer was shocked wid dat possessiveness of dose ees..not able to keep it..he closed his eyes n looked away...

geet smiled coldly at dat, "bas aishi hun me..."

sameer almost giggled at her reply n so did geet...

"tum jaisi bhi ho geet...i like u for wat u r.."

dat was a direct hint...

geet smiled sadly n stood up...

sameer felt litle scared thinking if she upset wid his words, "geet..wat happened..im sorry agar mene.."

geet just smiled away, "its not dat sameer..i know u like me...n i want a favour from u .."

sameer was delighted listening dat, "han bolo na.."

geet turned a bit as both started to walk around, "it might hurt u.."

sameer smiled a bit, "i can atleast try.."

geet stopped n took his hands in hers surprising sameer to d core...

"sameer i know wat u feel for me...d gal who vil marry u..vil be lucky 1..but i...VIL U MARRY ME..?"

WATT

sameer's eyes widened in delight as he looked at her motionless...

"i mean..shadi ka natak.." continued geet..wiping of dat happiness from sameer's eyes n he looked at her confused n hurt..wat did she mean by natak..i..

geet sighed, "i know..i dnt hav any right to play wid ur heart..but im doing dis for d sake of suzeil..i mean..she loves maan a lot..n maan is too possessive of me..hum dono apni adhi zindagi ek dusre ke sath guzari hai..aur wo mujhe lekar thoda insecure hai...uska behaviour jane-anjane me suzeil ko hurt karta hai..i want to make him understand dat suzeil should be his 1st priority n not me..dats why i want him to show dat i hav got sum1 who can fill my life n take care of me.."

finished geet as she waited for sameer to react...

sameer carrased her hands dat was in his, "me samaj raha hun geet..tum apne doston ke liye etna karti ho..ye dekhkar im left speechless.ofcorse i vil help u..par ek sawal puchhna chahta tha..ke natak kyu..kya hum sach me.."

he looked dat coldness in her eyes n assured her, "mera matlab hai..kya me etna underving hun ke tum mujhe ek mauka tak nahi de sakti..?"

geet smiled weakly, "mene tumse pehle bhi kaha hai sameer..meri zindagi me pyar ke liye koi jagah nahi..abhi bahot se kaam bache hai jo mujhe khud hi pure karne hai..dere is no normal life for me.."

wid dat she pulled out her hands from his..

"thik hai..i vil not ask u anything..i trust u n believe me im ready for dis.."

geet smiled n was about to leave when she heard dat damn..

"do u love maan ?.."

geet looked back to sameer n den sameer knew wat it meant..not able to hold back..he pulled geet n crushed her into his arms..

geet knew..d hug was just to share her pain..she smiled weakly and hugged him back...sameer carresed his hand on her back n assured her silently..not be a lover but atleast as a frnd..he vil alwz be by her side..

dey both hugged for few seconds n pulling away sameer left from dere...

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geet smiled watching him go to his sleeping bag n turned to leave hers when she collided into sumthing strong..

startled she looked up only to find maan staring at her wid anger ..frustartion and sumwhere pain...

she was about to ask him wat is he doing here..

but maan held her both wrists and pinned dem behind her back painfullu..slamming her body on d nearby tree..pushing himself on her

shocked at his sudden action...she looked at him only to find him starting at her wid red peircing eyes from few inches away...

"maan tum.."

she was cut by his frustarted voice, "how dare u hug him ?.."

geet stared at him blankly for a sec not understanding wat is he talking about but den guessed d hug she had wid sameer a min back..she wanted to answer right dere but hs painfull hold on her both wrists was really hurting her..

she tried to free her wrists but instead maan twisted dem more harshly..

she looked at him confused, "maan u r hurting me.."

his eyes were bright red as he moved dem closer to her eyes n breathed harshly, "answer me now.."

not able to bear d painfull hold, geet winced, "maan chhodo..u r hurting me.."

he loosened his hold a bit n thrashed himself on her so dat she could not move..his body posture..his eyes..his frustartion was just making her scared a bit..

"mene kuchh puchha geet...how dare dat bloody sameer hug u..n how dare u let him do dat.."

geet knew..his insane possessiveness and her mind drifted back to part..

FLASHBACKS..

geet 13 yrs old, maan 15 yrs old

it was a valentine day and she was sittng in d garden of school when a boy from her class came n sat beside her...

geet smiled at him n wished him happy valentine day..

a boy smiled widely n wished her wid a pink rose..

geet took d rose humbly n d boy left in delight...

geet looked back at d rose n took t close to her nose to smell it when sum1 just garbbed dat rose from her..

surprised or shocked she looked up only to find maan staring at her angrily and frustared...

she looked at him confused n stood up, "maan rose dona..kitna pyara hai.."

maan looked at her more angrily n threw d rose on d ground..smashing it wid his shoes...

shocked she looked at him n next she fund herself being slammed again d tree wid maan on her..

maan pinned her both hands behind her back n roared, "no1..n i mean no1 can give u rose samajhi tu..tu meri best frnd hai..aur sirf me tujhe rose de sakta hun..how dare u take dat rose from him..how dare u geet.."

geet looked at him making baby, "maan dard ho raha hai..hath chhodo na.."

maan pinned her hands more tightly n moved closer, "pehle jawab do geet..how dare u ?.."

geet made poor face, "he is frnd maan..claasmate hai..to agar me rose nahi leti to kitna bura lagta usse.."

he held her both wrists tight in his 1 fist while grabbed her closer wid free hand n stiffened, "usse kya lagta hai..usse tumhe kya karna hai..mujhe dard ho raha hai..isse tumhe koi farak nahi padh raha.. ?"

geet made cry face, "aise kyu bol rahe ho.."

maan too made cry face still frustated, "den answer me damn it..while did u take dat rose.."

geet sumhow managed to free her 1 hand n put it lovingly on his 1 cheek while kissed his another cheek, "m sorry maanu..fir se nahi lungi..promise"

maan gently freed her n took her in his arms, "i dnt any1 being close to my geet..u r my best frnd right ?.."

geet smiled delighted, "yes..only ur best frnd.."

FLASHBACKS ENDS

maan shook her angrily bringing her back to her senses...

"ab chup kyu ho..answer me god damn.."

geet recollcted her all courage as she let out, "bcoz i like him.."

d moment passed..

n den...

maan smacked his lips on hers...

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Edited by Angelic_mishty - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
me first
good one
sameer and geet shaadi ka naatak
maan seeing them hugging
maan kissing geet

I hope suzeil has not seen this

oh my god

maan may realize his love or his possessiveness will overcome his love



Edited by mishtib - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Ye kya, Maan really kissed her?
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Amazing updates!! *READING* 🤓
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Posted: 13 years ago
they are in so much love yaar...!
plz say it yaar...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome n superb n beautiful update...

plz plz plz...dont let geet do anything stupid like dat...plz plz plz...i beg u...

buddhu maan...apna yeh jo behchaini hai...yeh jo insecuruties hai geet ko leke...yeh jo jealousy hai...yeh sab pyar ki nishani hai...dosti k nehi...koi isse samjhao...suzeil ko samajh mein agaye maga jisko samajhna hai woh nehi samajh paye...dono k dono egoistic...

maan kissed her in anger...in frustration...dont knw wht will happen nw...

really loved it...but love more whn maan n geet will b together...

thank u very much fr such a lovely update n also fr d pm...

waiting eagerly fr nxt update...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG!
I m shocked...!
Hw much possessive is he..!
He can hug anyone he wants and geet shud not feel bad..
But geet can't hug or even look at anyone..
Y he s not understanding that she too has a life..!
He s so obsessive..
Sameer s such a good friend..
Hw easily he understood her..
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Posted: 13 years ago
geet want to do shaadi ka naatak for maan to make him understand suizel has to be his priority i have a demand from you if you are planning to make geet to marry sameer or suzeil to marry maan inform me because i can't bear maneet marry other maan kissed her



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Posted: 13 years ago
maan ne kya kardi yaar?? hope suziel sees this
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Posted: 13 years ago
OMG
maan kissed geet
know what geet reaction
loved it

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