ArHi Marriage FF: His to take? Part XIII: pg 83 - Page 6

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Posted: 13 years ago
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I love the approach you've taken!! I feel like it's very true to the actual show. Their feelings for each other are wayyy too intense for them to just hate each other. There's always going to be that love, that passion, that worry for each other.

Please add me to your PM list!! I love reading this SS!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: princessnida

I love the approach you've taken!! I feel like it's very true to the actual show. Their feelings for each other are wayyy too intense for them to just hate each other. There's always going to be that love, that passion, that worry for each other.

Please add me to your PM list!! I love reading this SS!


Thanks much, so glad that y'all get what I'm setting out to do... hate is such a strong word given the intensity of their emotions..
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Her lips opened to welcome the thrust of his tongue. She moaned softly as their tongues met' his was confident in its ability to do what it set out to give her' pleasure; her's, slightly timid in its exploration' discovering what it is to give, and take pleasure.

Is this what it's like? Wo'aa'ooow!

Caught up in the moment, she ran her fingers through his hair' and yanked him closer. Arnav's right hand downwards, to her blouse' seeking a clasp, zip'

Damn! Where's it? Whatever it is that was holding the flimsy garment in place' damn these cholis!

There was a knock on the door that neither of them heard. The knocking grew louder'

"Go away," Arnav muttered under his breath, as he paused, and then bent his head so his lips could focus their attention on her neck.

They heard a voice in what seemed like a distance. "Arnav bitwa' zaraa darwaazaa kholiye. Hum Khushi bitiya se baat karna chaahat hain," Naniji called out.

They sprung apart, as Arnav lifted his head and straightened up. Khushi pulled away, her hands clutching her blouse that was nearly off her shoulders. She wiggled, and felt the hardened length of him against her thigh.

Uh oh!

Her eyes opened wide, and her jaw nearly dropped and just as she was about to talk'

Arnav muttered, "What the'" frustrated.

She giggled as she heard his favorite phrase' "Arnav ji, aapne abhi'"

"Stop it, Khushi!" he snarled, causing her to stop mid-sentence.

Clearly he doesn't share my amusement. I'd better not laugh, no I'd better not even smile.

He still held on to her so she wouldn't fall, but quickly put some distance between them.

The knocking persisted. "Khushi bitiya' Arnav bitwa' aap log so to nahin gaye?" Nani asked.

He glared at her, and then in one swift movement, stood up taking her with him. He planted her firmly on the floor, and yelled back "Nahin naani' ek minute... aa raha hoon," as he straightened his clothes.

"Apne kapde theek kar lo Khushi," he commanded as he looked at her choli and dupatta in disarray, before turning towards the door.

His hand moved toward the latch, and just as he started to open it, he heard a faint plea in the background.

"Rukiye Arnav ji, agar Nani ji ne mujhe iss haal mein dekh liya to!"

He heard the jingle of her anklets and turned quickly to find Khushi's face, all flushed, still looking back in his direction as she rushed towards the bathroom, her lehenga folds in one hand as the other held the choli in place.

His lips involuntarily curved into a smirk, one that he desperately tried to hide from Nani ji, as he opened the door.

It wasn't going to be so bad after all' this marriage thing!

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I feel they can't be upset with each other all the time, and the passionate souls they are, they are going to have many such occasions where they umm... get caught up in the moment! It's going to be fun! 😆

Please like and comment, would love your thoughts!

Part I

https://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=2793839&PID=53266234�

Part II:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/53288436

Part IV:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/53368855

Part V:

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/post/53391292

Edited by adeeti10 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#54
wow.. now this is somehting i would like to see in the show :)
Edited by sukri - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#55
I'd really like to see something like this in the show!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#56
That is just the sugar fix we need to keep us going in the upcoming *ugh* track. I loved it. May I get a PM, Pretty Pileej?
-MC
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@Sukri, @Wisegirl... I know!!!

Unfortunately, it's prime time Indian telly where:
1. couples at 7:00 PM sleep in the same room, but not on the same bed
2. Couple at 7:30 PM is goofing around, and doesn't have time for bed since they last snogged each other I-can't-remember-when
3. Couple at 8:30 PM hasn't got much action since the chhoti behen fell ill

(No offence to anyone, I watched these soaps until the end of last year.. I don't really know what's happening on any of these, and I could be horribly wrong!!) 😉

On a more serious note, I so hope they give us a censored version of this!! 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
#58
LOL! this is funny. arnav's what the HAHAHA!
xxx
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Posted: 13 years ago
#59
Sizzling romance going on there! Great job with writing the passion between the characters, very few achieve the effect that you have published here. If only Indian television allowed this type of on-screen romance ... had this been a show like Gossip Girl, Arnav and Khushi would have already consummated their love! LOL!

Anyway, I can't wait to read more so please continue to keep me on your PM list :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
#60
This is so awesome. The 3rd part was YUMMY!! LOL Update soon hun!

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