Unfortunate Love (MG-RN) Part 5 30/06/13

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What happens when your best friend falls in love with the person you hate the most?

Character sketch

Maan Singh Khurana:- A cheerful person who's never upset + a popular cool dude who's very rich, handsome and a Casanova

Naina Singh Ahluwalia:- A beautiful hot chick and popular girl whos very rich & a best friend with Geet

Geet Handa:- Naina's best friend, not so popular girl

Rajveer Singh Shekhawat:- Maan's childhood friend, a very cute/handsome boy who respects other


Rahul Sharma:- childhood friend of Geet and Naina a sweet and shy boy

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Part 1

Part 2

Part 3

Part 4

Part 5

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 1

We see a big hall beautifully decorated, as we enter inside we see there's an engagement of Maan and Naina, everyone's enjoying and having a wonderful time except, Geet, Naina's childhood friend

Meanwhile, Naina and Maan are talking and the house maid comes up to Naina and

says: Tumna Geet ko kahin deka hai

Naina: Nahi lakin woh yahan kahin hogi'. kyun?

House maid: uska phone ayah hai

Naina: uske ma baap ka phone hoga, meh dek ka athi hone

* Phone conversation *

Naina: hello

Mystery caller: bahar tumhare liye ek parcel hai

Naina: thiek hai lekin m'.

* Phone conversation over *

Naina: ajeeb hai'. Kath diya phone

* Naina exits through the main door to collect Geet's parcel,

But she see no1 there.

On the other hand, Naina's mother had been searching for Naina and she bumps into Maan

Naina's mom: ohh sorry '.. Tumna Naina ko kahin deka hai?

Maan: kya yaar aaj sab gum kyun ho rahe hai

*He whispers*

Lagta hai lost and found kholna parega 😆

Naina's mom: huh 😕. Tum ye kya bol rahe ho

Maan: kuch nahi'' Naina yahin kahin hogi mein uuse dhoond ke lata hone thiek hai?

Naina's mom: thiek hai '.

Maan walks off to find Naina when Naina's mom stops him and says

Naina's mom: aur u se kehna ki maa bahut hi gusay mein hai

Maan: thiek hai

And he walks out the main door to find Naina

Meanwhile Geet is lost in her dreams when suddenly shes interrupted with Naina's scream.😲


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Edited by cutestar12 - 11 years ago
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PART 2

Geet rushes in the direction form where she heard Naina's scream she trys to find her when suddenly she sees Naina unconscious she runs to her but she was shoked to see Naina like that and that's when Maan comes and sees Geet sitting next to unconscious Naina.

Maan goes next to Geet and he holds her by her shoulder says

Maan: Geet, Naina ko kya hua'. Geet'. GEET!!!

Geet: ma'.maa' Maan (stemmers) 😳

Maan: tum yehi ruko Naina ke paas mein gadi le ke ata hoon

Meanwhile, Naina's parents continue there search for Naina when they bump into Rahul

Nainas mom: tum ne Geet, Naina aur Maan ko kahin dekha hai

Rahul: nahi auntie maine un logo ko nahi dekha hai '. Kyun

Naina's mom : oo ho Rahul mujhe aunty muth kaha karo .. meri image ke sath match nahi kartha

Rahul: giggles'' theek hai aunt''. Oops sorry :D

Vasi app Geet, Naina aur Maan ko kyun dhund hare hai

Nainas mom: main Naina ko kabse dhund rahi thi or phir main ne Maan ko pucha Naina ke bare main tho voh usse dhund ne ke chaker main chla gaya aur ab maine un dono ko khodiya ' aur ab muja lagtha hai muje Geet ko dhund na chahiye ' shayad muje voh dono uss ke sath milja yeh

Rahul: ap chintha mat kijiye varna ap ke chahre par wrinkles ajaiyen gay

Naina's mom: theik hai lekin ab tum plz ghum math ho jana varna muje tum he bhi dhund na parega

Rahul calls Maan to find out where he is and if he knows where Naina is

On the other hand Maan and Geet admit Naina in the hospital

Geet and Maan wait for the doctors to come , and suddenly Maan's phone rings and it was Rahul

* Phone conversation *

Maan: hello

Rahul: Maan ' yaar tum kaha ho tum yh ha sab log pareshan ho ra ha

hai ' aur kyh Naina tum hare sath hai

Maan: hum hospital main hai ..

Rahul: tum hospital main kya kar rahe ho ' sab theik ha na?

Maan: umm ' ha sab theik hai voh .. actually muje Naina behosh milie thi to main usse hospital le ke aya

Rahul: voh theik tho hai na

Maan: doctors usse check kar rahe hai

Rahul: theik hai .. main sub sambalonga tum Naina ka khayal rakh na aur muje inform kar te reh na

* Phone conversation over *

As Maan turns around to inform Geet about Rahul's call he sees'😲


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Edited by cutestar12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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superb start...nyc concept...
update the next part soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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nice update...

why naina screamed...
wht happened to geet?...

really loved it...

thank u fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: sindu555

nice start ...


continue soon

love
Sana


I am glad you liked it will continue soon


I am glad you liked it will continue soon

Originally posted by: monikaseth

continue soon
Awesome start


I am glad you liked it will continue soon

Originally posted by: awesumsonia

superb start...nyc concept...

update the next part soon


I am glad you liked it will continue soon

Originally posted by: love2_soma

nice update...

why naina screamed...
wht happened to geet?...

really loved it...

thank u fr such a lovely update...

waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...


I am glad you liked it will continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 3


As Maan turns around he sees Geet fainted and he runs towards her and quickly holds her before she falls down,

Maan:- Geet...Geet.. ankee kholo ...nurse...doctor

As he tries to pick her up he sees blood dripping down her shoulder

A doctor comes and admits her, Maan was really worried for Geet

After sometime the doctor came out Maan rushed to the doctor to ask was Geet

Maan :- doctor how's Geet is she alright

Doctor:- i am sorry

Maan:- i am sorry what do u mean by i am sorry

Doctor:- she slipped into coma

Maan was so shocked he dint no y but felt like his whole world had been stopped

Maan:- can i see her

Doctor:- ok

He goes in and sees a pale Geet he goes and sits on the chair next to the bad and holds her hand but he see there was something she was holding.
It was a scrunched up piece paper it had something written on it
Maan I don't know what's gonna happened to me but please don't tell anyone about this I know you are wondering how I knew something was going to happen to me. When I was waiting for you to come with the car someone from the back stabbed me but don't worry about that, I don't have much time' and I need you to do me a favour'. Plz get the keys 2 my apartment from Naina and take all my stuff (luggages) and shift it into another place and if Naina or sum1 else asks about me just make an excuse and tell them that u have dropped me at the airport ''..
Precap
The secret is revealed (Maan gets Geet's secret dairy)


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Edited by cutestar12 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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lovely update...
i really loved it...
thank u sooo much fr a lovely update...
waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...
continue soon plz...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Awesome start

What is geet's story

please update soon and pm me

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Nice storylookingforwardfor the next part

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