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Posted: 14 years ago
very very beautiful updt kinza
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thank u guys!! .. without doubt my princess had just surpassed herself in the previous part!
Chapter # 20

Nupur sat beside her open window the next day waiting for him. Her questions assignment was in her hands while she looked out waiting for him, even before she saw him physically enter the boundaries of her house, she felt her heat beat increase and knew he was near. As a young girl she had often wondered about the feeling of love, sometimes laughing it off while at other more touched moments, she use to think about the feeling of being in love. The feeling of having someone for whom your heartbeat, whose smile brought a smile to your face, and whose tears made u cry.. Someone who looked at u and made u feel complete'

The moment Mayank entered the room, and their eyes met, she realized, what being incomplete meant and the moment she felt herself move towards him and his eyes follow that movement as if craving for her to reach him, she realized she was heading towards the feelings of being complete'

Mayank was yet again shocked by what just looking at her did to him, taking a deep breath he pulled himself together and ignoring the way his heart was thundering against his chest when he felt her approach him and flash that smile of hers, he said, "Are you done with the questions Miss Bhushan?"
He saw her flinch at the way he addressed her and cursing himself he saw her holding out her hand to him and saying, "my name is Nupur'"
Taking the assignment he started going through the pages trying to avoid having to answer her or worst to look in those beautiful accusing eyes.
Yet again amazed by her intelligence at finding all the questions right, he quietly moved to their usual places and sat down fumbling with his own file and handing her two pages, "these are the words I want u to check on right now for the vocabulary test.."

Nupur didn't miss the way he was avoiding looking at her and feeling a poignant ache in her heart, she took the page and started looked at it knowing she knew all those words already, "when do u want to take the test?"
He looked up at her finally and regretted doing it because her eyes were shining and he knew they were unshed tears. He cursed himself some more but looking at the sad look in her eyes did nothing to lessen that pain in his heart. Nonetheless, taking the sheets back he said, "right now.."
She just nodded and took her register and looked up at him waiting for him to start it off.

He did exactly that and without looking at him or at the register at all, Nupur started scribbling down the words he announced and wrote their meanings while her heart finally falling apart and the shine in her eyes shimmered more as it became hard to hide those tears'

Find me here, and speak to me
I want to feel you, I need to hear you


She once look up at him and found him looking at her with his eyes filled with that guilty expression. Unable to move her eyes away, she realized he was unable to look away too..
They stared at each other for a while' one's eyes filled with accusation and the others filled with guilt.. but somewhere behind this shade of emotions both their eyes had just once emotion that connected their hearts' emotion of being in love'.

You are the light that's leading me to the place
Where I find peace again


Blinking Mayank looked away.. while Nupur just closed her eyes, letting the tears flow'

You are the life to my soul
You are my purpose
You're everything


Mayank knew she was crying, he could feel her sobs and he wanted to just take her in his arms and hug her, remove that pain which he was himself feeling, but he knew that was wrong.. how would he ever overcome the feeling of guilty and taking advantage of her innocence? And how will he ever face Mr Bushan?
The last thought made him stood up and for the first time he didn't find the correct words and thus just saying, "I should leave'"
He hurriedly move to the door but was stopped in midstride by her weak, teary voice, "Mayank?"

He looked up and she stood up as if in a daze and slowly moved to him, gently she placed her lips on his and kissed him with all the ardent passion she was feeling, with all the ache she felt when he moved away from her, with all the need to hold him to her and make that pain go away'

You calm the storms and you give me rest
You hold me in your hands
You won't let me fall
You steal my heart and you take my breath away
Would you take me in, take me deeper now'


Mayank was unable to fight the urge to hold her in his arms and so he did reach out and took her face in his hands, he did indeed kiss her back trying to steal away all the pain he had instigated in her heat, but he wanted more' above all this he wanted to just hold her and never let go'

Cause you're all I want, you're all I need
You're everything, everything...


But belatedly, he realized he had no other choice and thus he moved away from her, his breath rugged and his eyes stormy, his arms trying to untangle hers from his, "this is not right' Nupur this is JUST NOT RIGHT!"

In teary and husky breathless voice she looked at him and asked, "do u really believe that Mayank? Can u really say this from your heart?"
She took a step closer to him and placing a hand on his heart and still looking in his eyes asked, "do u really regret what we just shared?

Chapter # 21 - Page 66 - Fantasia.

Edited by mulan. - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
gosh its the third time he's lost his rational state to his heart's deepest need...he needs to accept it already that there's nothing left to do than to move forward!...lovely update 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely.. part..
nupur is truely in love with mayank...
but mayank thinks.. this is not right!!..
well amazing update..
very nicely.. you had potrayed the feelings of both of them...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Totally beautiful & enchanting...
Mayank really needs to listen to his heart's desire now...when he cant see a single tear in her eyes, when he just cant keep his mind straight to find her so close...how he'll be able to live his life without her...
Lovely part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
this must be very painful for mayank..
to accpet his love..
though he love her very much..
but still regret...

and here nupur.. is in just love..
not thinking anything else...
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Posted: 14 years ago

WHY????Mayank is regretting his love for nupur, can't he see how much she loved him...Terrific update


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Posted: 14 years ago
my god girl u r awsome...🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update.They r in love truly madly and deeply.There is no way to run away frm dis magical feelings.Mayank shuld listen 2 his heart.Both of dem cant live wtht each other.
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Posted: 14 years ago

Awesome update API...🤗

i loved it...i loved it to d coreee...its jst sooo perfect...dis is something u cant accept n not evn reject at Mayank's case...Both Nupur and Mayank is ri8 at der own POV bt love cant be hold in boundaries...it has to blossom...n in dis case it already blossomed...loved it to d coreee...
Truly Magical it was...sigh!!!
loved it API...
love U lodsss API...🤗🤗🤗
ps: i didn't say u dat time bt i loved dis song...a lottt!!! thank u for suggesting dis 1...love u API...🤗
Edited by 18anila1 - 14 years ago

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