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beautiful updt mehak
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nupur is crazily in love with mayank. mayank should listen his heart. he cant hurt nupur like that
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Mehku... what shuld I say??? Everytime he loses himself in her and fights back his own urge... the last line was especially painful.. do u really regret what we just shared?
I hope Express writes the next part a little lighter, its getting hard to see both of them bottling up their feelings ... Wonder how you both write like this???
Do I still need to say, how much I loved the update... 😃
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thank u so much people! .. and naina .. 🤗
and mehaku jaan .. if i am surpassing limits the you are just creating wonders!! 🤗

Chapter # 21

She took a step closer to him and placing a hand on his heart and still looking in his eyes asked, "do u really regret what we just shared?"

Mayank thought if there was any way he could make up a believable lie, if there was any way to satisfy his stance by anything, if there was any way to calm the ragging storm in her eyes, if there was any way .. but that momentary ponder gave him the conclusion that no words in the universe can make up a lie to satisfy her truth demanding eyes.

"No I don't", he uttered with all the sincerity that reflected in his eyes, and suddenly feeling overwhelmed, Nupur let the clinging tears to eyes pockets, flow down her cheeks.

"but that does not mean this is right", he added quickly and Nupur opened her eyes, with an urge to listen to him, to know what he wanted to say, what he felt, because after his confession of not regretting, she was sure he will just say the truth.

Mayank took a step towards her and made her sit on the chair and sat down on his knees, "listen here Nupur", he held her hands and within a second Nupur entwined their fingers and looked into his eyes. "you need to understand that it is NOT right", his words were harsh but voice was gentle as a soothing breeze, Nupur realized that she could spend all her life just looking in his eyes and listening to his voice.

"You and I have committed a mistake, of crossing the boundary which we were supposed to maintain, and this boundary will not only affect us, but so many people related to us, it will affect people related to YOU", he held back her hands tightly, and their entwined hands were securely placed in her lap.

"You and I are no match Nupur, you are like the illuminating sun and I am just the dark moon, I can reflect your light, but we can never be compared, because when sun and moon are brought face to face, the moon is seen nowhere", he blinked and resumed again with a deep breath, "you are in a very innocent age Nupur, just one kiss makes you feel attracted towards me and I UNDERSTAND, I do, but you need to stop okay", his voice turned more gentle, as if handling a kid, making the kid understand that the fantasy she is dreaming is unreachable, while the kid was just staring at her fantasy, not at all paying attention to the explanations.

"You need to realize the effects of this mistake, you need to foresee the future Nupur, we live in a society where relationships are not played with, you and I just cannot go against the norms, you cannot go against the norms, there is no way on this earth a person like me can handle a delicate princess like you, you have been treated like flowers Nupur, and I can just offer thorns, try to understand and step back .. okay?", he looked at her hopefully and Nupur took a deep breath and looked down at their entwined hands, which she gripped more tightly, sinking her nails in his flesh.

"You know I feel like a flying butterfly when u kiss me", she raised her head smiling and his jaw tightened, "Nupur I ..

"Mayank", she interrupted his strict voice with an equally firm tone, "you talked and I didn't interrupt, now you need to listen to me as well",

Mayank took a deep breath and sighed, he knew she was right and the determination in her eyes made her point more valid, "okay", he said softly and she smiled, "so I was telling you that I feel like a flying butterfly when you kiss me and thus, you are the flower of my life, the fragrance of my life, the nectar of my life, you beautify my life Mayank", her smile was constant, now accompanied by moistness in her eyes, and eyes pouring out honesty.

"What norms do you want me to follow and for whom should I follow?, for whom should you follow?, for me ' only my dad and my best friend gunjan matter, and those two people will be over whelmed to see me happy, do you think being with you will hurt those two people?, if yes .. then I may think .. but otherwise, I am not at all staying away from you .. If I feel happy than there is no way I am going to step back .. no way .." , her voice was constantly stiff, and she was even holding his hand very tight.

"nupur I am an ordinary person .."

"not according to me .. for me you are the most special I ever met, for me you are the only person who made my heart flutter, only person who can guarantee my smile .."

"this is just a teenage crush", he pulled back his hands stiffly and got up, "I guess talking politely is not helping," he got up and so did nupur, still looking in his eyes,

"you need to stop all this do you understand, we both cannot be together and that is IT!", he said stiffly and Nupur took a step towards him and before he could react, her lips were again on his lips, and his face gently in her delicate fingers. She was kissing him with so much tenderness that his heart contracted with involuntary affection, but this time before he kissed back, she moved away, "don't do this to me Mayank ..", she whispered breathlessly and kissed him again, this time her salty tears drowning in her lips, and he was tasting them, "you cannot be so heartless to crush my heart like this Mayank", she again whispered in a teary voice and kissed again. Mayank was just exercising all his constraint to keep him from kissing back and melting, "you cannot move away Mayank .. main mar ja..

This time her sentence was cut short because he placed his lips one hers' and kissed her deeply and kissed until they both had to move away in ardent need to breath, "don't ever talk about dying again", he whispered hoarsely, gripping her waist tightly, with her body pressed against his', "then you don't ever talk about moving away from me", her eyes were dilating with imploring and Mayank shook his head, "you know I am not allowing you to get your way every time", he pulled her more close, tucking behind a loose strand of her gorgeous blackish brown hair and she placed her arms around his neck and moved more close, with their displaced breaths playing on each other's cheeks, "I have always got my way", she smiled naughtily and Mayank smiled back, "well .. same here", he smirked and pulled her in a kiss again.

This kiss was different from all others. Equally passionate by both sides, with will, and without any inhibitions.

"You have entered a dangerous relationship nupur, don't tell me I didn't warn", he whispered after moving away and Nupur looked in his eyes, "I am looking forward"

Chapter # 22 - Page 70 - mulan.

Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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As usual it was very beautiful,infact i would say the most beautiful and magical update.

Edited by mayurlove - 14 years ago
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so much kiss and tell hehe...loved it!...damn this got pretty serious...as in their relationship...so happy mayank finally gave in...the story just got interesting 😃
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god soo many kisses ..hehe ...but amazing prt ...
Thanxx fo pm
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THIS UPDATE WAS PURE MAGICIAL...
TRUE MAGIC..
AMAZING..
LOVELY...
BEAUTIFULL..
OUT STANDING...
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Nice update. Thanks for the pm.
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as always it was beautiy...

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