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Awesome update API...šŸ¤—
sry wh main UNI mein thora busy thi toh comment karne mein late ho gayi...
Awesome update API...
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Beautifully written part...
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i srsly loved it...
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awesome updt mehak
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nice update

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Lovely Update Mehak!!...Totally loved it!!😳
I m liking the Miss Flirt Nupur bhushan a lot!!!šŸ˜‰...Its good to see a girl flirting with the guyšŸ˜†...and the way Mayank trying to resist her...šŸ˜‰
But through the last lines it seems good time ahead for usšŸ˜
Sorry for not able to comment regularly but I m loving itEmbarrassed
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wow amazing. mayank is fighting with his feelings. waiting for next part
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Finally he has realized that he has gone too far to return.. Now just waiting for him to accept..
Brilliantly written Mehku 😊
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Sorry! I have been reading this FF since the time It started, but I never got a chance to comment! So here I am commenting, from the beginning :)

Chapter 1
I love how the FF just started at a normal place, him as a HOT arrogrant tutor and her as a beautiful doll-ish student! I love the setting, and the characters, I love how you portayed them both! It's truely amazing, and beautiful :)
& my favourite dialogue in this chapter would have to be:

No body except Mayank Sharma made Nupur Bhushan feel so helpless and defeated.

Chapter 2

AWHHH the friendship between Gunjan & Nupur is amazing! It sort of reminds me of my friendship with my best friend Mahwish! :)
I burst out laughing at this part:

I advice you to concentrate more on ur book next time, especially when u can't ever find anything interesting on my face". With this he handed her the book and stood up to take his leave announcing, ":I will take the whole book test tomorrow, *opening the door* until of course you have to go to another of yours' friends birthday party, in which case u can tell me YOU CAN'T"

With every ounce of strength nupur held back form throwing the book at him, she said, "I will be ready tomorrow"

Chapter 3

I really like the friendship between Mayank&Samrat, It's different than other FF's! :)
Favourite lines:

Nupur smiled and cuddled in her blanket, flowing in the feel of the song, it made her forget her stress and anxiety.. it made her forget everything, except for the underlying dreams in her heart. She closed her eyes to bask in the feeling more.

Somehow you found a way

To see the best I have in me

As long as time goes on

I swear to you that you will be

Although not a believer, the words made him smile, although not a dreamer, these words made her sigh.

Though the distance that's between us
Now may seem to be too far
It will never separate us
Deep inside I know you are .. Never gone, never far

Chapter 4

Nupur quietly held out the page to him and smiled with satisfaction when she saw his surprised expression followed by,

"r u already done?"

" I was done 5 minutes ago but then u were busy studying my scar (she glanced at her arm) so I thought I shouldn't intrude."

Another content smile appeared on her face when she saw him flustered for the first time since they have met.

It wasn't unusual for Nupur because people kept on asking her about that scar. It was a few inches long scar on her otherwise smooth, beautiful arm, which she had had since she was a kid of 10 and had fallen from cycle.

Mayank was indeed caught red handed and the worst part was, he was already disturbed by the way his heart wanted to ask her, whether that scar hurt. he frowned realizing , it may matter to him if it did.

This part was SOOO sweeet! :) Literally, this part was the part they actuually felt something other than arrogrance towards eachother for the first time! :)


Chapter 5

Yes he had a huge fight with his conscious in that momentary moment, but still he did turn, and what he saw made a fiber of his heart ache. Although he could not keep on standing there, so stealing a glance, he quickly moved out, but taking the scene in his eyes, he couldn't move on from what he saw.

She was collecting her books from the table, wiping tears from her face.

If only this happened in real life, it would be so cute! Seriously, you both are doing an amazinggg job of wiritng this FF togetherr! :)

Chapter 6

It wasn't until he took his leave and was at the gate of the large mansion when his mobile vibrated.. He was surprised to see Nupur's name flashing with a new message notification.


Thank you.. :)


Just that smiley brought smile to his face and he sent,

ur welcome.

I thought Mayank would be rude, and tell her off but he replied saying ''your welcome'' it was so sweet! :)

Chapter 7

"nupur".

Nupur turned and her opinion that he was handsome changed a bit. His wet hair and a few water droplets lingering on his face, his jacket and clothes being a slightly wet made him look VERY HANDSOME. Almost killing.

I love the rain! and Nupur must have skipped a beat seeing Mayank in the rain, her two favouriet things! :)

Chapter 8

Nupur: "u will catch cold.."

Mayank was touched by the concern in her voice but he himself wanted to have the coffee standing infront of the open window with the cool breezes touching his face..
Quietly getting up he went to the window and threw it open. Leaning at the wall beside the window he turned to look at Nupur and announced,
"I prefer my coffee this way.. so will u be joining me?"
Nupur grinned and quickly picking her coffee joined him at the window.. unfortunately the window in the study room was far smaller then the one in her room and so they stood pretty near and with the slightest movement Nupur's free hand brushed past his'

Yet again the wave that went throughout their bodies at the slightest touch, took them offguard and they looked up at each other'

Kuch khas hai , kuch pass hai' kuch ajnabi ehsaas hai'

Nupur realized they had been standing their staring at each other for a long while and trying to ignore the warmth emanating from her cheeks, she tried to move away when she felt him lean closer. She felt butterflies in her stomach and knew this much physical intimacy wasn't right, but she couldn't help but stare at him, while he raise his free hand and softly tuck her loose hair behind her ear,
" do u think I can take the truce as an excuse to tell u , u are very beautiful Nupur Bushan"

Seriouslyy!! A guy like Mayank can make you melt at his words, I don't know why I love guys with Short Temper! :) Mayank Sharma is TOP .<3 awhh he was touched my her concern, she blushed as there hands brushed, the staring session and then he called her beautiful! THAT IS AMAZINGGG :) EEEK :D


Chapter 9

"Nupur I do not form relations, because with relations comes liability, and I don't think I can take the responsibility of a friendship of a sensitive girl like you, I am sorry", he smiled but yet again Nupur felt her eye pockets getting wet, "but we can remain a friendly teacher and student duo", he smiled fully and turned towards the rain while Nupur took a deep breath to swallow that tear, making a note of one thing. This person can break her heart even with his smile.

Mayank is so nice, yet he can be nice and mean! :( and she cried, and it's hurting him, but he's sitting silently like... I don't know. Gosh mayank can't you feel?
BTW amazingglyy writeen! :)

Chapter 10

and what about the next hundred questions? Do u think u can complete them in 2 days Nupur?"
Mayank looked up at not receiving any reply for a while, and was greeted with a pair of the world's most beautiful eyes looking at him as if they had no wish to look anywhere but at him..
Taken aback he was left staring back at them and wouldn't have dared move his eyes but Nupur blinked and in that nano second, Mayank realized what he was doing, regaining his composure he coughed and repeated as if nothing had happened, " so 100 questions 2 days, is that okay Nupur?"

They are so cute! :) I don't have any words to form, besides how adorableee they aree! :)

Chapter 11

"are you sure it is not infatuation?", gunjan asked softly rubbing her back

"gunjan I answered you that day that I feel much more than liking and infatuation", she replied coldly.

"so do you want to say that you love him?", she softly stroked her hair and nupur moved away to look in her eyes.

"I don't know about love ", she said slowly.

"then who knows it nupur?",

"gunjan please stop it!, I told you I don't know!!", she almost shouted and gunjan pressed her hands, "then get to know it, you need to know what u feel for him, call him up!"

"what?", nupur was amazed at her suggestion.

This DEFO reminds me of my friendship with my best friend! Gunjan and Nupur are an amazing DUO in this FF, I love how your portrayedd them!! :)

Chapter 12

Nupur: "you don't have to be sorry.. u can't bring her back just like I can't bring your mother back but I just wanted u to know that I'm here if u want to talk.. and I know how incomplete u feel not having her in ur life'but u know what? I cant say this about my mother but can do it about urs- she will be proud of her son for what he is where ever she is'"

Mayank was unable to hold back the tears of anguish any longer and let them flow hearing her voice break but she continued , he knew they both were crying, they both were sharing the same loss, the same pain..

Nupur: " I never saw her' atleast u have her memories, I don't remember anything about her.. but still sometimes when Gunjan's mother hugs me I feel a warmth emanating from her and wonder how was my mother.. sometimes when dad sits infront of her picture hanging in his room and look at it for hours and then when he looks at me and kissing my head says , "you are like your mother princess" I always wonder how was she' atleast u knew how she was that sir, right?"
Mayank nodded his head and then realizing she couldn't see him, he whispered n a hoarse, tears filled voice, "yes, I know her, she was the world's best mother Nupur."

He didn't know how it happened but first time in his life he talked, he shared, he let out his grief.


"she always cooked my favorite meals even if dad groaned and shouted at her, she always came to wish me goodnight even if she was in too much pain because of the beating my father gave her.."

Nupur didn't miss the emphasis on the word dad and father and she realized that she atleast didn't have to face any such haunting memories about her mother, how helpless Mayank must feel now'

"she was the best mother Nupur and I still know she is still somewhere around looking at me' but why did she had to go Nupur?"

Mayank knew how unjust this question was specially done form Nupur, but he wanted an answer, so very badly.

Nupur: " who said she left Mayank? Who said that? My mother never left me.. I still feel her presence.. just the way I feel someone is supporting me even though I can't see anyone.. Sir mothers love their children too much to ever leave.. they always stay in our hearts.. my mother does!"

Mayank had no idea how she had achieved it, but suddenly he felt a warmth in his heart, as if his mother was trying to tell him Nupur was right..
After a pause in which both tried to pull themselves together, Mayank whispered, "thank you Nupur'"
Nupur: (smiling through tears) friendship mein no thanks and no sorry.. kaheen suna tha maiine.."
Suddenly realizing he haven't accepted her friendship she added, "I meant'"
Mayank: "well I heard that too.. so I will take my thanku back.."

Very softly, Mayank had taken his "thank you" back and simultaneously given her his friendship., for now that was all Nupur could ever ask for.

GOD! They both shared their sorrow! and Cried together! :) *sigh* they are meant to be together! I really hope this FF has a happy ending or it will KILL me and take your time, I don't want it to end anytime soon! It's an amazing FF which I don't want it to end too soon! :|

Chapter 13

"and thank u for being there "

"ok ..

Suddenly her pen stopped because what she wrote down was, "thank you for '", she kept on staring at those words and then she looked up, he was leaning on the table, arms folded and placed on the table, eyes intently looking at her, and lips curled up into the most heavenly smile of the world.

"thank u nupur", he smiled again, this time his smile reaching his eyes made nupur sigh, she even forgot to respond in the selfishness of embedding his smile in her heart. This was a seriously serious matter. She just realized that she could do any damn thing in this world to earn this smile. Any damn thing!.
This had to be one of my favourite parts of this FF! I don't have any words to explain this part! :)

Chapter 14

With her breathing rate increasing sharply, she felt her body do what her heart desired even before her mind registered it and it was only when her lips touched his that her mind registered that Nupur Bushan was kissing her tutor and somehow even if she did feel any guilt, the way his arm moved to her head to keep her in place and kissed back, all her inhibitions were lost.. this was all she wanted' to kiss this man .. with all her heart


AHHH THEIR FIRST KISS?!?!?!?!?!
YAAAY!! :) Now I am even more excitedd to readdd the next parttt :)
EAGEEERRR ;P

Chapter 15

And before he could further present those weak arguments of his heart, Nupur placed her lips again and kissed for a moment, leaving Mayank in a daze this time, "it was not a mistake", she kissed again and the softly pulled back in a moment, "it was the most beautiful moment of my life", she whispered and looked up in his eyes , smiled a bit, and ran away from the drawing room, leaving Mayank with no option but to close his eyes and accept that indeed there was no way back now.

MY HEART RATE HAS INCREAAADEDD READINGG THIS :D

Chapter 16

The shy butterfly inside her, was opening her wings wide, about to fly off.. to fly to that flower and embed herself in the flower's petals forever..

I like this description of how Nupur is falling in love .<3

Chapter 17

They both looked at each other ' shyness and hesitation at it's peak. It was pride and regret at its height. It was love at it's brink.

I love the description you used here, ''love at its brink'' it's reallyy amazingg!! I love the way you gusy write and describe things so... perfectlyy!! :)

Chapter 18

Mayank wasn't deceived by her innocent expression and was cursing because the sofa was two seated which meant he could still feel her slender body beside his. However this way it wasn't a chance of ending up kissing her so he nodded and started solving question, dictating the formulas and methods.
He knew her eyes were on him instead of on the paper and it was making his resolve weaken but ignoring it he concentrated on the question, until he feel her shift and now her body was directly in contact with hers, feeling his muscles tense at the contact in an effort to keep from turning towards her and taking her in his arms, he kept on working on the question, however when he thought she had finished teasing him, she whispered to him, "you know Mayank.. I can still feel the taste of your lips on mine…"
With his jaw tightened he turned to her only to find her face too close to his, and before he could react she leaned closer and placed her lips on his.. yet again trying his best not to envelope her in his arms and kiss back, he thought of a way out when she took his face in her hands and deepen the kiss.. Lost in a daze, Mayank almost had his arms around her, when summoning all the courage he possessed, he moved away from her…

Two people with passion flowing through their veins, and eyes emitting fiery sparks, and deep breaths mingling, the stared at each other, both trying to get each other back in their arms and kiss, as if there was no tomorrow…
However the knock on the door reminded Mayank of his position and getting up quickly while Nupur pulled herself together and asked Mrs. Vasti to leave the tea at the table, Mayank announced, " I can see whatever I tried to explain yesterday had not reached u, but I know what I am supposed to do.." picking his books he moved towards the door without looking at her even once and it was only when he had the door knob to hold tightly enough to hurt and dissolve the urge to go back to her, that he turned and said, " Miss Bhushan I expect u to complete the questions by tomorrow.. otherwise I will consider myself failed and will have to talk to Mr Bushan and resign from the post of ur tutor.. "

Saying this he left the room and was only when he was in the bus taking him back to hostel that he took deep breaths and realized he had fallen too far for Nupur Bushan to ignore this rebellious urge of his heart and body to go back to her and quench his desire to hold her in his arms and kiss her back until she realizes that all he ever wanted so much in his life that it's hard to fight it.

I loved how Nupur didn't give up and start crying like usually in the dramas, and she started acting and fighting for their love! :)

I love the part where he acts like an idiot and threatens to leave, and he feels this ache in his chest of lovingg herr! :)

*sigh*

so amazinglyy writeen!! well done to both of youu!! and continuee to writee!! :)



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I am sorry for updating late, actually today i had to take care of the kitchen 😳

Chapter # 19

Switching on the radio, what she always did in stress, she closed her eyes on the music, and so did Mayank, who had no choice but to listen to the radio of the bus.

Main uska .. woh mera ho
Sehra ho ya dariya ho..


Yet again kissing him made her feel like that free butterfly who had the power to enclose her herself in her desired flower, no matter the flower wanted or not, she could submerge in it's being and the flower will have to close its petals and embrace her .. It had just had too .

Main uska.. woh mera ho
Sehra ho ya dariya ho

The moon didn't deliberately block the sun, it was his path, it was an accident, it was fated .. and knowing he did it .. he knew he will block the sun again .. Because yet again .. it was fated .. It happened because it had to happen, it happened again, and it will keep on happening ..


Yeh faasla afsaana
Fasaana hamara ho

Moon & Sun

Flower & Butterfly

They knew how to cover the distance, they knew how to cross each other's path, they knew the distance between them is always covered, they always did it, butterfly with the flower at her own will, and moon with the sun, due to fate ' but they always covered the distance .. the distance between them was nothing more than an illusion.

Main uska woh mera ho
Sehra ho ya dariya ho
Main uska.. woh mera ho
Sehra ho ya dariya ho
Yeh faasla afsaana .. fassana hamara ho

They wanted to be with each other, no matter what circumstances, they wanted to be with each other, spread fragrance, illuminate, .. they wanted to love each other ..

The moon wanted to cross the shinning sun again, he wanted the sun, he had no light of his own, he wanted the sun to reflect light .. he wanted the sun to shine on him.

The butterfly wanted to hover on her flower, he provided nectar, the source of butterfly's life, she wanted the flower to stay alive.

Chandh aashiq hon .. ek pagal ho

The ecstasy and sanity of love ' celebrating together.

Chandh khanjar hon .. ek kaatil ho

The risk of being killed .. the risk of being destroyed ' facing together.


Chandh toofan hon, ek sahil ho

The hope of a colorful future .. weaving together.


Chandh ghoongroo hon .. ek payal ho

The melody of companionship ' enjoying together.


Chandh gazlein hon .. ek mehfil ho

The urge of expression .. boiling within them together.


Chandh ehmak hon .. ek aakal ho

Committing the mistakes ' together ..

Chandh mahzzab hon, ek aadil ho

Molding their beliefs for each other .. together..


Chandh jazbe hon .. ek haasil ho

Untangling the tangled thoughts ' together ..


Chandh aankhien ho, ek kaajal ho

Enlightening their sight .. together ..


Chandh jaahil hon .. ek kaabil ho

Refusing the rationality .. together ..


Chandh munkir ho, ek kayal ho

Rebelling the mind and heart .. together ..

Chandh raahein, ek manzil
Heading towards the unknown destiny ..

Ek manzil ..

Together ..

Chapter # 20 - Page 64 - mulan.


Edited by Fantasia. - 14 years ago
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It ws the most beautiful explanation of love i've ever read anywhere...
Hats off kinza api...
I can never think like this...The way u took butterfly-flower and moon-sun to define love,left me in daze...
Beautiful...Loved it...
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