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vaishali

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Posted: 13 years ago

#411

very nice part 👏waiting 4 next part😃

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ekta15

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Posted: 13 years ago

#412

NICE ONE HARI. story is so interesting .but when are u going to make our radev union ,is there still intezaar written in their destiny?
great going,keep it up!!!

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harianjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

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now who wanna have an update that too Radhika confessing to dev

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 27- Bringing up together

Radhika watched out from the court gate the movement fo the cars to the Purohith Bhavan she took the photo of Mohan from his bag and holding it said "Baavuji aaj aapka icha poori hogayi, aap kush ho na, Shayad ab mera kaam poora hua tha"

Asmitha came from back and said "No, tera kaam abhi adhoora hain"

Radhika looked at Asmitha and she kept hand on Radhikas neck and took her Mangalsutra hiding underher dress and said "Ye kaam abhi adhoora hain"

Radhika rubbing of her tears "Ye kya bakwaas baatein kar rahe ho"

Asmitha:Bak waas tum kar rahi ho, main nahi , till ow many days will u pain urself. Say me one day when u slept wiht out crying. U are the princess of a vast empire, are u forgetting it, till what obligatiosn do u have."How many days will u hold these tears in u? han, Jaa, Jaao aur apni Dev ko paa lo

Radhika looked around worriedly and keeping her chain inside her colered outfit looked at asmi angrily and said "Asmi!Ye zindagi hain, koi praise nahi yaa koi gift nahi, paane ke liye"

Asmi:But that's ur right

Radhika:But what abt vishaka didi, haan, she is ready to die for him

Asmi:What abt u?

Radhika giving a hopeless smile said "I will be fine"

Asmi:Fine?U, I am seeing u crying since last 3 months and u are saying I will be fine

Radhika unable to find words "Now stop this, I had to go to office"

Asmi:U know what, U wanna prove ur self to be a mahaan hence doing all this

Radhika ;If u wanna think that u think, now leave me I has to go

Asmi:Radhuuu

Radhika going off not listening to her waved her hand bidding her bye.

Asmi nodding of her head went off to home.

Radhika reached office and went on checking with her files.

Aadi came in to cabin and saw Radhika engrossed in her files wiht two pens attatched to her hair. Aadi smiled and called Radhika.

Radhika looked at him and asked "Haan aadi bhaiyya"

Adi:Radhika aapko maaloom hain Maan sir yeah Geet maam kaha hain

Radhika:Wo wo log kuch family trip pe gaye the

Adi:What!! Kab aavoge.

Radhika :I expect it to have one week

Aadi:shit!

Radhika looking him tensed : Wat happened aadi sir any problem

Aadi:My job will go to sky. Now Maan sir will hire me off

Radhika:Ye toh bolo ki hua kya hain

Aadi:Radhika wo actually next week maan sir ki ek trip hain na U.S ki tha was preponed for day ater tomorrow

Radhika too shocked and asked "What"

Adi:Yes, Now Maan sir should leave

Radhika:But sir won't be able to go

Adi:That was prob now

Radhika:But How come they announce this sudden

Aadi bending on her knees "U have to forgive me , They informed before a week itself I forgot to say to sir"

Radhika keeping her hand on her head "U are gone"

Adi:Please radhika help me pleaseee

Radhika:Don't be tensed eb cool, I am thinking

Adi:Idea mil gaya

Radhika with interest "What"

Aadi:U will go

Radhika:Me???

Aadi:Haan u

Radhika:Nonononono

Aadi:Yes

Radhika:no

Adi:yes

Radhika:No

Adi:No

Radhika:Yes

Adi:Got u, u only said yes now, u will leave

Radhika:But mera projects ka kya hoga?

Adi:Pinky,will manage okay, U leave

Radhika:but

Pinky came in and said "No buts maam, are leaving here are ur tickets for todays eveening flight

Radhika seeing them Asked sternly "So it was preplanned"

Pinky:Haan

Radhika got serious with eh talk aske d"Kuch bhi bolte jaati ho. Mujhe kya pasand hain, is se aapko koi maamla nahi. Par u will deciede what I need. Don't u even mind t ask me"

Adi and Pinky got a serious and felt hurt , Adi came forward and said "Sorry radhika maam, I thought u won't mind. really sorry for taking the lineance of the friendship"

Radhika who turned aside realised her mistake and turning forward said "Sorry bhaiyya, sorry. I didn't intend to hurt u, but Majboor mein hu,. Really sorry bhaiyya, I will leave. Waise ye boliye, what u want from U.s"

Pinky and Adi again smiled and wished her all the best for meeting

Pinky coming forward said "Maam, U need to go for another event too"

Radhika asked "What pink"

Pinky:Maam There is International young achievers awards in Bombay on 13 feb. U need to atten that

Radhika:Me?Why?

Pinky hesitatingly said "Maam U were nominated under best employee category"

Radhika again frownd "Who nominated"

Adi:Not from our company, but the members who did business projectc with u nominated u

Radhika:Is it necessary

Adi nodded his head

Radhika:Okay pehle is meeting ki batao

Adi said "This is one eek trip maam, u will return by 12th february and we booked ur tcket directly to Bombay, there u can take rest in our quarters."

Radhika smiled and she thought of going home to have her clothes packing
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Radhika went home fearing to catch any pf members but for her luck none were there. She went upstairs and saw the hall filled with her photos with Shankar, Maan and geet. Reality touched her ans she removed all those frames from wall, She kept all those in her wardrobe and locked it. Late she picked some dresses and packed them. then she went throught the whole building(Palace) to make sure abt her things not to be found and after making sure that no marke of her were there in the building, went back to her room and taking her phone called Geet.

Mean while in PB Geet was busy talking with her juniors (Dev's friends soniya,piya,) who introduced Nikki,Riya,aanchal to her. They were into their girls talk while Maan was busy with dev and others in their Boys world.

Geet saw her phone ringing and seeing Radhika's name on caller id she onned it and started to speak "Hi, bol chudki"

Radhika:Bhabhs, is every thing fine there

Geet:Yeah

Radhika:I understood ur problem, I will tell my word quickly., Bhabhi I ha to go to U.S on a meeting

Geet smiling asked in a low voice "What, I don't remember u assigning any U.S project na"

Radhika:Its maan bhai's project and explained every thing

Geet after listening to every thing "Okay yaar, chal aal the best, d it good, but adi said me abt Bombay"

Radhika:Haan I know, he said me, will be there

Geet:Okay bye chudki

Radhika:Hold on old on

Geet:What

Radhika:Babuji kaisa hain

Geet:Which one

Radhika smiling :Donom

Geet:veyr happy engroseed in their talking. Koi susheel chacha bhi hain

Radhika:Oh then Arjun,Deepika, sab hain na

Geet:Haan, its like a festival. i liked it

Radhika all once becoming gloomy "Daadi, mrinu didi kaise hain"

Geet:Daadi was really week and Mrinalini didi was okay

Radhika having relief "Once dad ko de na"

Geet:One minute.

Geet went to Shankar who was busy in talkign wiht RP, and susheel . She called him "Paapa"

Rpji when listened that Paapa call reminded "Radhika calling him but smiled

Shankar turned round ansd asked "Kya hua geet"

Geet:Phone

Shankar:Koun

Geet:Ra ... Chudki

Shankar :Chudki !!! Idar do

Radhika:Dad

Shankar:Haan bol

Radhik said every thign and Shankar listened nd found it was better as he doesn't want PB to disclose Radhika's real identity

Shankar:Okay

Radhika:u will wear medicines on time

SShankar:Okay

Radhika:U will do pooja in Mandir

Shankar:Okay. What????

Radhika:Bhabhs don't know those rituals correctly, but u will knwo, U are studied in gurukul na, so atleast light diya

Shankar:Okay

RadhikaBhuloge maty

Shankar:Okay, by the way Bombay waali

Radhika was abt to answer when geet coming forward said "She is coming, by the way Give me once dad."

Geet took phone from him and was talkign to Radh but can hear the questioning of RPji and susheeel abt Chudki and Shankar answering Chudki as his daughter and RP expressing his grief on not able to meet him

Geet ut the phone and went to her girls world

When they were preparing to sit for food Maan came and asked Geet who was talking with girls "Geet wo"

Geet who was tensed of him taking Radh's name"Chudki hain na"

Maan:Haan, wo khana kha liya,

Vaishali:Ye chudki koun hain geet beti

Get:Vo aunty ji, she was Maans sister.

Vaishali:Oh Maan beta what wiht her food.

maan was abt to answer when geet came in middle and said "Wo aunty ji, maan won't eat till she eat"

Maan gave her a thanking look and she said "Maan she ate, she had flight now:

Maan:What

GeeT explaine that Radh had some meeitng and she left. Maan asked Geet "When was flight time"

Geet:Maan

Maan:When was flight

Geet:3:30

Maan:I am leaving, U eat bye

Geet:Maan maan

By the time Maan left. Geet started to mumble to herslef "Ye maan bhi na, ab behen aagayi toh, biwi chal gayi, I will see him"

Dev came back of her and tried to scare her "Caught u"

Geet turned around and found Dev there "Dev tum"

Dev:Hana sis, ur rackie brother

Geet:Aha try to tell alesson to ur jiju that biwi comes first than behen

Dev:U know how much he loves imarti right

Geet:Its not Imarti

Dev:What

Geet:Imarti died 3 years bac itself Now its chudki Imartis twin

Dev:ye sita -gits kahani kya hain

Geet:hey were twins and now Maan forgot Imarti completely, it was nly chudki

Dev:Ohhh

Mrinalini came there to call Geet and seeing them emotional she tried to light up mood.

She came and gave a banana to Dev

Dev asked her "What for this is"

Mrinalini:We will feed monkeys with bananas only

Dev:ohhh, then why didn't u bring a banana for u too

Mrinaini:Whattt, she tried to hit Dev

Dev:Bhabhs, why hurt ur self. Leave na

Geet laughed seeing all this.

Dev:Thank god, didi has gayi, good keep it up sis,

Geet:Mrinalini bhahi, u here

Mrinlaini:I came ehre to call u for lunch geet Bhabhi

Geet:Mrinalini bhabhi, I am smaller thanu call me Geet

Mrinalini:Well U too calle me Mrinalini. Bas

Geetnodded her head and they left in. Get thought to her self "Kitne pyaari log hain, no woder why Radhika felt that much loneliness"

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Maan came into Airport and saw Radhika sittign there in waiting place. Maan wen to her and stood infront of her. Radhika was lost in her thoughts looking at pics of Dev in computer. She was thinkign of him. Radhika felt some ones hand on her and looked up. She saw Maan. She looked at him unbleievably and closing off laptop she said "Bro, U"

Maan:Whats this, why u are leaving

Radhika:Nothing I wan u to enjoy wiht them, I enjye wiht them for 23 years na, I want u too enjoy wiht them now, so

Maan:But

Radhika's flight was announced and she stood p to leave

Radhika:bro leaving, will call u later bye

Radhika left giving him a hug and Maan stood there,
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Radhika reached U.S and got busy in her meetings, she tried to spend most time in work there and when found time she used to do her work here, through video conferences. She had not even secons thought , while here PF was enjoying with Sharma's family and they ot well with each toher, and Maaneet too started to feel the free ness.

One mornign Dev came in wiht tickets in his hand

Maan who was drnking coffee along with vivek "What's this Dev"

Dev called every one and said "Friends and brothers and siters, as Valentine day si fast approaching, why dn't we al enjoy a picnic. Me,Maan,geet di,VivekBhaiyya wil any howlevae for the Awards function in bombay on 13th, as its already 10th why don't we all leave together and enjoy."

Every one accepted and they went into their preparations.

Vivek:Whats this sudden decision Dev

Dev:Bhaiyya, nothing some surprises to all here.

Vivek:What

Dev smiled and said :U will know soon

Dev went to prepare his bag too and all got ready for picnic.

List was

Maan-Geet,Vivek-Mrinalini,Deepika-Arjun,Dev,Eshwar-Nikki , aanchal-varun,Ria-rickie,Asmitha-Arshad,Armesh-soniya,Manoj-Piya, Birju, shalini,..

They all left for bombay, leaving some time for ole eople tobe freeliy chatting. Dev sat in his seat and he was remained single as all couples chose to sit along and he was viewing out from window thinkign fo Radhika. "Radhika,i alway thought to propose u on this valentine day, but U are not there near me"
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Radhika was workign with her laptop when she heard some fire crackles out and came to the window and found people preparing for Valentines day, she remembered of Dev and thought to herself "Dev, Ek baar aap muhse ye bolo ki U love e, I will be urs forever"

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Days carried on and Radhika was preparing herself to leave toBombay a her project completed.
Dev was busy in preparing for the valentines pat and for the special surprise too. Radhika came on the roads and saw couples there airing balloons for valentine and doing preparations for teir valentines part. All the way she was thinkign of Dev holding her mangalsutra in her hand. She called Maan meanwhile and was happy to know that they were enjoying well. Maan to kept it secret abt their picnic on request of Asmi and Geet.

Radhika took her flight toIndia and sat beside the wndow lost in her thoughts.

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Mean while in Bombay, Geet was talkign to Asmi "Asmi why ae u trying to hide it."

Asmi:Bhabhi, Radhika was becoming a sacrificing lamb, for others. for her i am doing this. Time came for her to complete her intezaar

Precap:Dev:"I had only one girl in my heart fom very beginign. It was u "

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harianjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

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hayafan

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Posted: 13 years ago

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10 q harianjana. waiting 4 surprise😊

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harianjana

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Part 28- Radev ki intezaar hua khatam

Radhika opened her laptop feelign bored and found a mail from Geet

The mail had

"Hi Radhs,
Missing u dear. These people were very veyr lovely and u know I and Maan we both are really feeling home, But there were some nautanki's as usual from that Vishaka or some thing like that. But another woman some ambaji like that came , she said herslef to e a huge lover of Dadji and she asked for forgiveness from all, and now she was living at PB. Well orthodox woman but good. Vishaa did some nautanki but Dev gave her a good slap.

Many more to say u, will say whnen u come to Bombay.By the way we will meet u directly in party as we are at Maan's friends place. U has to wear the sarree which I sent u. Its a rule

Lots of love to u -Geet"

Radhika closed it and felt happy fro Sharma family. As her flight landed she saw around and found driver waiting for her, she went to him and they drove off to home.Radhika went into the room which servant said to be hers and saw a packet on the bed there. She opened it and found a Black colour sarree. Radhika liked it but she felt odd to wear it.She fall on her bed to take rest and slept sound for a while"

Geet came out from her room and saw Radhika sleeping. As she planned wiht Asmi they made all left off t meeting and making sure she was okay they too left. Geet asked asmi "Dev was there na"

Asmi nodded and Geet asked "Are u sure every thing wil be okay"

Ami nodded and they both left.

Dev came from Bathroom then only and found some one wiht a fre long hair lying on his bed. Finding it weird he tried to wake them up but as they didn't wake up he called the servant asking him abt the girl for which servant said "She was Maan sir's sister, Please don't wake her up, "

Dev found it odd and he went into other room to change.

Radhika woke up after some time and found some male clothes in the room, she called servant and asked abt it for which he answered abt Maan's friend being here and later Radhika felt sorry for him and asked abt him. Servant answered that he left off. She felt forry for him and left to change her self.

Radhika came out and saw the srre to be semi stiched with a full back opening giving a hot feel. But she doesn't wanna hurt geet so she wore it and ame out. watching time to be over she left to the awards function,

There were many big industrialists and officials entring there. Radhika for a minute felt a bit shy but she took that courage and came out of the car.

Many eyes were focussed on ehr because of her look,and she became the cente of stage

Dev came wearing a black colour suit,
and many girls found him to be more attractive and try to grab his attention. But he left it off competely and proceeded to Vivek and Mrinalini

Finally the awards started and they continued to give in various categories. Finaly the category of buisness came and they first announced the category of best emerging employee and it was announced RadhikaSharma as winner.

Radhika who doesn't now abt Dev being there went on to stage to take her awards. While the cameras are clicking She took awards and Dev for a while shokced seeing her and same was vivek

Radhika was asked to speak when she said "All the credit goes to My family, and my freidns" And left down.

Later they annonced best emerging Buisness man of year for which Dev was called for his excellence in bringing up a company which had a crash again back to its posision is short time

Thsi time The part was of radhika to get shocked and she completely lost. Vivek came running to him and found her standing with Maan.

Vivek:Maan, Radhika wiht u

Maan:She was our emply only

Vivek:U know who was she, she is mrinalini's sister

Maan and Gee gave a nod of surprise and Dev grabbing his award quickly came down to Radhika.

Vivek:Radh what happened to u, where are u all these days

Radhika kept silent

Dev was glaring at Radhika wiht a mixture of Anger, surprise, pride and everything.

Vivek:U knwo how Daadi was Mrinalini was.

Vivek was busy in askign Radhika but Radh kept silent,Geet asked them to come home to tak further as it won't be nice to create a scene in public,

Radhika was really dumb like a statue and she was protected by Maan from all press meetings and they left home

As they left home Maan and Geet opened the doors and Balloons falled on them.

Geet and Maan looked up and All the pals wished them Happy valentines day.

Vivek and Mrinalini to have same scene but they didn't spke a word. ALL were wondering abt what happeend and Then Dev came in along wiht Radhika.

All were shocked except for asmitha.

All made a gathering around Radhika asking abt her. But Radhika kept silent and she managed to spak words "I am fine and was happy"

Wel they were Happy that Radh returned and Mnaaged their anger no to show her. Radhika was happy to meet her friends back and she wished all f them happily.

She tried to talk to Dev but he never intend to talk to her. Radhika became gllom bt manatined her happiness not to dissapoint her pals.

Finally how ever Maan convinced Vivek and he too came donw and forgive Radhika.

Vivek intoduced Maan and Geet as her cousins and she smiled inside but pretending to knw it. Geet winked Radh and she too gave that mihevious look.

All were engrossed in v.d celebrations and thought to play some games. They all sat donwn for truht and dare.

First Maan turned the bottle and it stopped between Maan and Dev.

Maan asked Dev "Dev u never said the name of ur dream girl to us atleast now will u say"

Dev who was in a firm decision to blurt out looked at Radhika and said "Vuska naam hain Radhika Sharma"

Radhika looked at him in shock, Maan asked "Are u joking Dev"

Dv:No Maan bro "Its ur employe Radhika sharma"

Radhika looked at all there, all were in a shocked position except for dev's friends.

Radhika got up and went off runing inot upstairs,

Dev not knowing what to do sat there,

Maan:Dev very god choice, she is really good.

Mrinalini:Devar ji, u know what for first time today I felt really very veyr happy.

Viek:Ye kab se

Asmi was also shocked to know it.

Armesh:I will say

Dv:Armu

Armesh:Ek minute Dev, let me speak. Vivek Bhaiyya, Dev loved her from very beginign at ties f ur marriage it self, but he hide it rom her as she never had the thought of marriage in her mind. she always had buisness nly in hr mind, so dev dare not to say her,

Radhika was listening it from upstairs, she was crying heavily.

Geet:Dev, vusse mana lo, jaao

Dev went up and saw Radh crying there.

Dev:Radhika

Radh was crying heavily.

Dev:I didn't intentd to hurt u, but I said my truht out, I still can't bear it in me

Radhika stood up and asked him "Then what is it."

Radhika showed the paper of "I hate u " to Dev

Dev:Ye tujhe kaha se mil gaya

Radhika:ye kya hain

Dev:Vo main meri 13 saal ki umr mein likha kyun ki, I don't know who are u and U used t disturb me in my dreams, hence I did this,

Radhika for a moment smiled.

Dev holding her hand " I alwayd loved u only Radhika, I never had nother girl in my mind. That day too with the fear of losing u only I kept the sidoor in ur forhead, I am nothign with out u Radhika"

Radhika happily hugged him and said "U know what I too love u. But this one paper made me to hide it from u always."

Dev and Radhika hugged each other and remained like that for some time.

Geet came up calling "Chudki"

Radhika relasing hug immediately "Haan Bhabhi"

Dev was shocked to listen this, "Tum Chudki ho"

Geet came in and said "Thank god, u knwo it. Yess she was chudki. U knwo what, when she left ome tht day, she got an accident, I some how foud her and took her home. That's why all this happened."

Dev:Abhi main paapa se batavungi. He will be very happy

Radhika stopped him "Ye baat aappaapa ko hi nahi, kisi se bhi nahi batavoge. abhi samay nahi, when time comes I will nly sa it"

Dev:But

Radhika:Pleaseee

Dev understanding. left it off and came down holding Radh's hand.

Armesh:u said U will surprise us, really U surprised us man

Dev:It was a surprise for me too, Real surprise what I said u was aother

All asked him with enthusiasm what

Dev said :We have a silent couple here

Manoj:Whom

Dev pointed at Birju and Shalini who were standing there "These two"

Vivek:What

Dev:Yes bro, u only ask them I am observung them since when I returned India, they had that silent love in them when I further enquired what I thought was true,

Shalini firmly hold briju's hand and went to Vivek and said him "Haan bro it was true, I am Birju love eachother. Mere liye Birju ne apni M>B>A bhi compete kiya"

Vivek:Ye kya naya twist hain

Radhika:Haan vivek jiju Birju Bhai ne MBA distant se complete kiya

Birju:Vivek Bhaiyya, its all depend on ur acceptance only

Vivek:Arey yaar, when t was no for me. Its haan dear

All were happy

Asmi came to Geet and sai "Didi, Radev ki brason ka intezaar aaj katam hua tha"

Geet too nodded. her head with tears in her eyes

Precap;Dev proposing Radh

Edited by harianjana - 13 years ago