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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ff
loved it
uss sameera ki toh main
haiii maaneet song was awesome
waiting for more
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sukklover

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: hinal_maaneet

awesome ff

loved it
uss sameera ki toh main
haiii maaneet song was awesome
waiting for more



thanx dear😊😊
iam glad that u loved song seq
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Posted: 13 years ago


[banner credit goes to stutz and shivu]

PART-15

maan:Hum ne decide kiya hai ki aap log hamare diye huye saza bhugtenge kyun ki aap log har gaye'aur hum log aapki condition ke saath saath saza denge'

[we have decided that we'll punish u as u people lost the game...but along with ur condition which u kept for us..]


Nupur:matlab???

Mayank,maan and sid says in unison'.aaplogo ko ride par le jaa rahe hai aur wahi aap logo ko saza milegi'saying so..three of them lifts their respective partners in their arms and starts running towards car''..


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three of them scooped their respective partners in their arms and headed towards their cars...

Maan and geet,mayank and nupur,sid and ridz go different ways...

Geet:maan hum kaha ja rahe hai?

Maan:hai ek jagah jaha mein tumhe sazaa doonga..

Geet(st):saza??hey babaji ye ab kya sazaa denge muje..

Maan:geet!kya soch rahi ho

Geet:ha..kuch nahi kuch bhi tho nahi.

Maan:tum ye soch rahi ho na ki mein tum he koun si sazaa dene wala hoon

Geet gasps"aapko kese pata?"

He smiles and takes her hand in his...kisses it.

Maan:mishty tum shayad bhool gayi ho ki tumhara maan bina kuch bole hi tumhari man ki baat padletha hai...

Geet smiles at him..."hmmm..jaanti hoon"

She rests her head on maan's shoulder hugging his arm tightly...

After few minutes they reach their destination...

Geet:maan ye kiska cottage hai?aap muje yaha kyun laye ho?

Maan comes and hugs her from back..places his chin on her shoulder."tumhe pasand aaya?"

Geet:ha maan ye tho bahuth sundar jagah hai..par ye cottage hai kiska?...





Maan:ofo..mishty tum sawaal bahuth karthi ho..ek baat batao geet tum 5 minute bhi chup nahi reh sakthi hai kya?

Geet frowns...she hits maan's chest with her elbow...

Maan:ouch...geet ye kya hai...

Geet:aapki sawaal ka jawab..kya kaha aapne mein paanch minute bhi chup nahi reh sakthi..hai na..ab dekhiye mein aapse bilkul baat nahi karungi..mein jaa rahi hoon.

Before she could move maan instantly encircles his hands around geet's waist and holds it tight..he pulls her close to him holding her waist tight .he then raises his hand and began to touch her lip gently..geet shivered with his one touch on her lips..he then starts caressing the corner of her lips .geet is anticipating to feel his warm lips on hers..but maan is in mood to tease her..he continued caressing the corner of her lips with one hand where his another hand is caressing her waist he cups her face and starts caressing her cheeks with his thumb..he kisses her both the cheeks,her eyes and then forehead he then starts kissing corner of her lips .geet is breathing heavily and she holds maan's shirt tightly .their lips were just few inches away.he moves close to her lips but kisses her nape instead of lips this makes geet more restless .he starts kissing madly on her nape the touch of his lips on her milky white skin were sending shivers through out her body she immediately hugs him tightly maan also hugs her back and caresses her waist he then start pouring wet kisses on her neck,on her cleavage geet moans..maaann...

She again hugs him more tightly...maan smiles at his mishty..kisses her cheek and says huskily to tease her.."tumne tho kaha tha ki tum mujse bilkul baat nahi karogi aura ab kya hua mishty hmm..

Geet instantly opens her eyes...breaks the hug just to find maan smiling silently...she frowns at this act of maan..

"maan...aap na.."before she could complete maan starts laughing loudly by seeing cute puppy face..

Geet frowns...aap has rahe hain..you..dustdanav...chaddo muje aapke saath nahi rehna hai mein jaa rahi hoon she pouted her lips and is about to move but maan instantly pulls her close to him by holding her waist this made geet to land up on maan who also lost the balance..both get lost in each other's eyes maan encircles his hand around her waist he smiles at his mishty who is totally lost in him..."dekha mishty tum chahkar bhi mujse door nahi reh sakthi ho..hai na"says maan huskily..geet just smiles at him but soon realizes that she is angry on maan..she tries to free herself from maan's arms but he already tightened his grip..."maan chodiye muje..warna"

Warna kya karogi mishty?

Maan plz chodiye na..agar koi deklega tho...

Don't worry mishty yaha koi nahi hai sirf hum dono hai...

Phir bhi aap chodiye kyun ki muje aapse koi baat nahi karni hai...

Maan:accha tho meri mishty mujse naraz hai...

Geet turns her face away from maan and says..hmmm

Maan:kya mein jaan saktha hoon meri mishty kyun naraz hai mujse?

Geet:aap nahi jaanthe

Maan innocently nods as no..nahi mishty muje tho kuch yaad nahi aaraha hai..

Geet:accha ji...thodi der pehle aap...wo...aap..

Maan:ha...Ha bolo bolo mein kya kar raha tha?

Geet remembers the moment they spent before few minutes ago and starts blushing...maan aap bhi na

Maan pulls her more closer and their lips are just few inches away"mishty jab tum sharmaathi ho na tab aur bhi pyaari lagthi ho"says huskily..he brushes her lips gently with his he then kisses her cheek which is already turned in to red due to shyness..he is about to kiss her again but geet's mobile ring brings them out of their romantic world.

Maan:oh god!pata nahi is mobile ko mujse kya dushmani hai hamesha galat time par bhajthi hai...

Geet giggles.."ek kaam kartha hoon geet isse abhi ke abhi thod detha hoon phir koi problem hi nahi hoga"

Geet grabs her mobile from maan's hand."maan aap bhi na"

She looks the name of meera in her mobile"maan ek minute meera ka phone hai"

She gets up and attends the call.."ha meera kaha ho tum?jab hum anthyakshari khel rahe the tab tum kaha chali gayi thi?"

Meera:wo..geet mera sar dard kar raha tha isliye mein ghar aagayi thi...tumlog game mein busy the isliye disturb nahi kiya..

Geet:accha teek hai..tum aaram karo mein thodi der mein aajaaungi..

Meera:ok..accha maan se kehna ki o tumhe jaldi ghar chod de..kal se office bhi jana hai na...

Geet blushes"ok bye"

Meera:geet is really lucky to have maan in her life..and maan's family is also so sweet..they loves geet a lot...

Suddenly she remembers maan's father..amaranth uncle..muje aisa kyun lag raha hai ki mein ne uncle ko pehle kahi dekha hai...par kaha???muje kuch yaad nahi aaraha hai...

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Maan hugs geet from back.."hogayi baat"

Geet smiles..hmmm..

Maan:ab andar chale?

Geet nods...

They enter the cottage...

Geet:wow maan ye tho bahuth sundar jagah hai..sacchi I loved it a lot...

He hugs her holding by her waist ...

Maan:I know muje poora yakeen tha ki ye jagah tumhe pasand aayega and mishty guess whose cottage it is?

Geet looks at him with questioning eyes.

Maan kisses her forhead .."this cottage belongs to mrs.maan singh khurana"

Geet looks at him lovingly..

He cups her face.."ha geet ye tumhara hai"

Geet immediately hugs him tightly "love u maan"

Love u too mishty...

Maan:mishty... mein ne tho decide karliya hai ki hum hamare honeymoon yehi manayenge..

Geet blushes and hugs him more tightly...

Maan:geet tum apni sazaa ke bhare mein bhool tho nahi gayi nayi na..

Geet breaks the hug and looks him lovingly..."boliye kya karna hoga muje"

Maan:hmm...tum muje meetha khilaogi..

Geet:meeta..par maan yaha tho...

She understands maan's intentions and blushes...

Maan wont say anything but just stands holding her waist and looking at her lovingly...geet slowly moves closer to him and brushes her lips on his..now maan placed his lips on hers...geet encircles her hands around maan's neck pulling him close...first they kissed each other gently and soon their kiss turned in to a passionate one...maan bit her lowerlip...geet opened her mouth allowing maan to enter..he enterd her mouth and kisses her madly...after sometime they broked it due to lack of breath...both were breathing heavily...geet blushes furiously when maan looks at her...she instantly gives brone crushing hug to maan...both remained in the same position for sometime and then maan drops geet at her place and leaves to KM...


precap:

flashback..maaneet's first meet...


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Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome..
luved maan's sazaa for geet...
hmm curious to knw abt meera n maan's dad connection..
awww maan gifted her a cottage.. so romantic...
continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...
i loved it to d core...
thank u sooo much fr dis lovely update...
waiting eagerly fr d nxt prt...
continue soon plz...
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Posted: 13 years ago
itni sweet saza😊...liked it...

aww the cottage belonged to geet opps sorry mrs. maan singh khurana

do remember meera about maan's father soon

thnx for pm

continue soon

love rose😉
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow!luvd maan's gift for geet..
I hope maan's dad s not planning to marry maan with meera...
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Posted: 13 years ago


where has Meera seen Maan's dad...is there any other twist in the story...

amazing update...Maaneet moments were very beautiful...

thanx for pm...

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