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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
oh so this is the lan
ha ha loved how meera n yash finally agreed to a thing
n loved how meera answered back to brij n his men
hope the operation was be successful
waiting for it
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Posted: 13 years ago
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4 Pming me..šŸ˜›.
ur updates r just ,
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u done a dear..šŸ‘šŸ‘.
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keep the job up dear..šŸ‘..
keep ing dear...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey
gr8 part..
cont.sooon
thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 13 years ago
SO UR ENDING IT.😭.LOVELY UPDATE MONA
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome ss
loved all the parts dear
superb!!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

thank u soo soo much for supporting us in this ss...love u all guys and we are here with the last part..plz press like and comment for one last time..give long comments this time plzzz



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: uteem

me waiitng




want positive ending



just 5 minutes dear...coloring it...wait and watch oops!readšŸ˜‰
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: maneetlover1



just 5 minutes dear...coloring it...wait and watch oops!readšŸ˜‰




warna i will kill u if ending not good
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Posted: 13 years ago
plz silent readers comment for the last time...
hope u all guys liked this SS.. thanku very much for ur support and love...
because of u guys we r able to complete this one..
hope u all liked our joint SS...
here is the last update of this SS...


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-jyothi, mona.

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Posted: 13 years ago
THE JOURNEY
PART-10[LASTPART]



Oh u stop it guys and think how to pass this message to passengers told geet to yash and meera who were arguing again…


Geet started thinking about the way to pass this message..meanwhile,she saw pari who was helping an old man to drink water…geet thought that it is the good way to pass message to passengers..she instantly called pari and requested to give her some water..pari also understood that something is going in her mind..moreover she too knew half of the the plan….geet pretended as if she is really drinking water…she noticed that no one is observing them and slowly whispered about the plan to pari…pari nodded with smile and went back to her seat…


Pari's seat is very next to raj's (film hero)..she slowly passed the message to him at the same time pretending as if she is asking something…raj was shocked first but nodded..then slowly he passed message to the next seat in the same way pari did….there geet also passed message to their neighbour seat people very carefully..in this way maan's plan about commando operation is passed to all the passengers in the flight…pari also tried her best to pass the message to piolets while supplying food packets and she suceeded too..now everyone in the flight know about maan's commando operation..they were also said that they should lay down on the ground as soon as they hear the church bell….everyone nodded slowly when geet looked at them as if they understood the plan and are ready…geet took a sigh of releif and prayed to god that everything should go well..


Here maan and his team is ready with their plan…they were waiting for the message from geet that they are ready…finally messaged arrived from geet and it viewed as "we are ready"..maan smiled and showed thumsup to aadi and shashank..finally the time arrived which officials promised to release dev..there are only 10 minutes left for the time to finish..


Brij and his people were also ready with their own plan..he came to his members and raised his eyebrow for which one of his member nodded in yes..

"now there is only 10 minutes left for the flight to arrive and dev will be with us….they are going to send dev in to this flight…as soon as a passenger move out from this flight..our count down begins..says while showing a remote control in his hands…


"but sir..they are releasing dev na..then why all this??" asked one guy confusingly…


"huh!!we cant believe them blindly…we should be ready to face any situation….i'll die but never accept defeat..if anything goes wrong in this 10 minutes then I'll operate this as remote is with me..i'll blast the flight if they try to act smart"says brij

"what if everything is right and handover dev to us??"asked another guy..

"that will be easy..i'll handle"said telugu guy(south indian guy who talked with that little girl) with a smirk…

Brij then connected a call to shashank.."only 10 minutes mr.shashank..i think u remember ur promise…if u try to act smart then…only 10 minutes just 10..remember"said brij and disconnected the call without giving shashank a chance to speak…

Shashank immediately ran to maan who stood at the window with crossed arms and observing the flight…

Shashank:maan…we have only 10 minutes..brij again warned us…we have only 10(stresses)minutes..he almost said in trembling voice…

"good…it's enough"said maan confidently with a smirk still looking at the flight..

Shashank:maan can I ask u one thing??

Maan:hmmm

Shashank:u said to all the officials that they only have some powerful weapons and bombs..is it true??plz tell me…

Maan nodded in no and looked at him.."no sir..they have 1kg of plastic explosives….just one click will blast the whole flight..no one will survive..even u and me…

Shashank is shocked to hear this…"what??????maan isnt it risky??what u'll do know??oh god we have only 10 minutes now..how can u…

"sir relax!!just relax…I know it is risky and u know very well that we don't have any other option..but sir trust me..i wont let anything happen to a single passenger now..it's my promise and plz ye baat kisiko bhi mat batana..plz sir it's my req..

Shashank placed his hand on maan's shoulder and nodded.."I trust u maan…I know u very well..ismein tumhari bhi jaan jaa sakthi hai but u don't have any complaint.."he gave proud smile to maan for which maan smiled back…

Maan soon got ready with his team and explained his plan very clearly to them..now his team is ready and there in the flight everyone is praying god..geet is only the one who sat confidently as if she know that victory is her maan's…


Maan came to kumar(urf dev) to take him out so that they can show him as dev..before moving out he stopped for a while..


"sir agar muje kuch huwa na..then plz inform my parents and take care of them.."

"kumar..nothing will happen to u I promise…."said maan for which kumar smiled and moved out…


Maan ordered everyone to take positions..he took out his mobile and called someone..after disconnecting the call..he smirked..

Maan's team is ready with guns and took their positions..maan stood at one place and watching the flight carefully through binoculars…brij slowly opened the door and watched out as flight arrived there in which dev is coming(it is also an arrangement…they arranged a flight to pretend that dev is coming from kashmir)



One of the officer came out pushing the wheel chair on which dev(kumar)sat[guys from now kumar is dev..so I'll name directly as dev]


Dev looked at brij and waved his hand not forgetting to pretend he is weak..for which brij waved back…he ordered the passengers to step down one by one..here maan is waatching all this and waiting for the time to execute his plan…officer is coming down the flight pushing the wheel chair in which dev(kumar)sat holding the breath but pretended to be serious…brij also sent pari and geet first followed by remaining passengers….maan is still waiting for the chance..he stood there silently to ensure that all passengers stepped down safely..once they come out he can carry out with his plan…so he stood there watching brij's every step carefully through binoculars..at the same time time he is looking at the entrance…



Almost all the passengers came out of the flight and nearly 5,6 members are left including the little south indian girl and her mom..she came out and remembered that she forgot her doll inside..without giving her mom a chance to speak she said"ayyo..na doll marchipoyanu..ippude velli techukuntanu"[oh no!i forgot my doll there..i'll get it now]and ran inside again…

Her mom tried to stop her but of no use..she reached her seat and picked her doll and turned to go back..but that south indian guy(brij's men) stopped her while smiling and kneeled down before her…he kissed her cheek and said"beta nenu neku oka gift techanu"

[I have a gift for u]


Here maan is watching the passengers through binoculars and his team is ready with guns pointing towards them(brij's men)who is walking along with passengers..dev is almost shivering but controlled his fear by holding the wheel chair tightly…maan thought that everyone is out now and he ordered to ring the church bell…the men who stood ready to ring the bell holding the thread pulled it but unfortuanately it is broken in to two peieces…half thread in his hand and another half handing with bell..when maan heard no sound"what's happening??common ring the bell"


Then all the officers briskly took position same like pyramids(generally military people build pyramids)..one of the officer stepped on them and managed to ring the bell..as soon as they heard the bell all the passengers laid down on the ground…brij and his men were totally confused but maan didn't gave them a second to realise what happened and shouted "fire"..soon the officers released the bullets and all the men got shot directly on their forehead…maan threw binoculars and jumped down from the place he was standing and ran towards them..aadi and other officers ran behind maan with guns…all the passengers n maan thought that all were dead and they(passengers)were about to get up but laid down in fear when they heard gun shot sound…oops!!!only south indian guy is alive and he got up aiming gun towards them.."don't move..dont move..warna I'll kill everyone"he almost screamed aiming gun towards passengers and they were screaming in fear..maan stood there glaring at that guy as he cannot move..otherwise he would kill anyone of them which he don't want…


He(guy) directed all the passengers to move one side and gather at one place and they(passengers) followed him..he took out the remote control from brij's pocket who was lying dead beside him.."don't move..otherwise I'll click the button and everything is over…no one will survive"he screamed showing them the remote…all the passengers are screaming out of fear and maan looking there with tensed expressions and thinking how to assault on him…here dev is shivering in fear and his grip tightened on chair…that guy is threatening them and shouting like a fool that he'll kill everyone..

Maan while brushing his hairs touched his blue tooth and remembered that dev had blue tooth with him.."kumar..act as if u are attacked with fits" said maan in low voice…

"sir muje dar lag raha hai"he replied..

"kumar plz..he wont do anything to u..plz make it fast"maan said in slow voice but anger is reflecting in his voice…


He said ok and started to pretend as if he got fits…"he is sick"maan immediately shouted….that south indian guy looked at dev and then maan still aiming gun towards passengers.."he is sick..common take him to hospital"shouted maan and about to move…


"no don't move..i'll shoot everyone.."he shouted again showing remote control as if he is saying that he'll click the button…


"are pagal ho kya??he is sick and he needs treatment warna o mar jayega.."shouted maan..


That guy looked at dev who is still pretending and shouted "nooo"

"stupid I have to take him to the hospital..dont act like fool..otherwise he'll loose his life"maan shouted again at the same time tried to move..

"paas mat aana..dont move"he shouted again…

"what do u want then??"maan shouted

"let me move in to the flight first…don't move..otherwise I'll kill everyone"he shouted while moving towards flight at the same time aiming the gun and guided passengers to move with him…


"ok ok k relax"maan said…he then used his blue tooth again(guys it is coonected to everyone..he he I created thisšŸ˜†) and asked the officer who is in his position aiming gun towards that guy.."do u have chance to shoot??is he is standing at gun point"maan asked almost in whispering tone…"yes sir"he said…maan then looked up with victorious expressions in his face…he looked at remote in his hand,the disatnce between dev and that guy and then at passengers…"kumar…behosh hone ki natak karo…and don't move at any cost"said maan through blue tooth…he immediately did what maan said…


"hey look at him..o mar jayega..we have to take him to the hospital right now"maan shouted…that guy looked at dev still aiming the gun and shouting"don't move."


"common man..be quick..u want him dead or alive??" maan shouted again..

He again looked at dev..geet who stood there waiting for chance rushed to him and took hold of his gun..yash also came forward and tried to hold him but that guy pushed yash n released a bullet which got hit to geet's arm…maan without wasting a second ran to him at the same time took out his revolver..yash again tried to snatch his revolver and raj joined him…both are struggling with that well built guy..one is trying to snatch the remote control and other is trying to snatch the gun…


Maan still running to him shouting"move" so that he could shoot but yash and raj is holding him tight..by the time maan reached there he pushed both of them and aimed the revolver again towards geet who stood there bravely holding her arm..maan instantly came and held his neck tightly from back for which he panicked..before he could react maan snatched the gun from his hands and threw it to geet and she catched it…maan tried to snatch the remote but he removed another gun from his pocket and tried to point it towards maan but geet gave no chance..she soon shot him on his forehead fatally…


Everyone took a sigh of relief…bomb squard who were waiting there instatly rushed in to the flight to search for bomb and here outside the flight maan and other officers trying to send all the passengers out..even geet accompanied them..she forgot about the bullet in her hand and doing her duty..after all she is a brave lady and a cop so duty comes first…



Maan went to poor becharašŸ˜† actor kumar who is still lying unconscious actually pretending as maan ordered him to do…maan asked him to move from there as they have to diffuse the bomb and they don't want anyone to get hurt..


Meanwhile,aadi came to maan and informed him that there is no bomb inside the flight…


"what???"maan almost shouted..


"ha maan..we even checked brij and all his men but there is no bomb.."


"what..how could this happen??if it is not there in flight then where is it??"


Aadi nodded not knowing what to say..maan looked here and there irked..

"it must be here only..somewhere"said maan looking here and there..

"did u check passengers??"asked geet who came there rushing…

"right!!aadi stop everyone and check their bags..be quick"maan ordered and three of them rushed to stop them..they managed to stop everyone and made them to drop down their bags at one place…bomb squard searched every bag but still bomb is now here…finally they moved to another place and heard beep sound..maan looked at the little girl who stood there wearing her bag which is in teddy bear shape…maan immediately rushed to that girl and almost snatched her back as he was tensed…


He opened the bag and found the bomb inside it…he kneeled down before her asked her"who gave u this beta??"

"that uncle gave me as gift"said that girl and showed that guy who lied down there dead…maan ran to the bomb squard officer and showed him the bomb at the same time asked him"look this…is there time for us to diffuse this??"while panting…


"no..we have only 3 minutes"he said looking at the time in that…


"oh no..aadi send everyone out..quick"he shouted and turned towards geet..he stopped her holding her wrist who turned to help aadi…


"geet….we have only 3 minutes and dev…"he said and looked at other side where an old van is standing…


Geet nodded and took that bomb from maan's hand..she rushed near the van as fast as she can which is little far from them…she saw that there is only 3 seconds left now and threw bomb immediately on that van.."booom"


"geeet"maan rushed to her while screaming her name…he reached her who lied down,lifted her up and hugged her tight…geet hugged back and smiled.."maan operation is successful..dev ka chapter khatam"said geet…maan smiled and mumbled "hmmm"still hugging her..

---flash back----

When geet sent we are ready message to him maan immediately sent her that he is bringing real dev in a van and his chapter will be closed forever…

So guys how was the journey..atleast give long comments now..plz share ur experience in this journey…

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love..

-jyothi and mona😳


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