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Posted: 13 years ago
part 2
nice part...
wanna see how Maan saves the people and his lovely wife...
cont soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update... I knew it ws dat Brij only!!!! hope maan saves all of dem nd Geet too...
Loved yash meera nd geets convo...
poor raj...loved romeo..
plzzz cont soon
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Posted: 13 years ago



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PART-3

Maan:I was feeling so restless from yesterday…now what happened!!!!jaan u don't worry I'll do something…I wont leave that bas***d..

Maan,shashank and aadi are discussing with their officials about the demands asked by brij..

Shashank:sir what we have to do now?that brij is threatinig us that he will kill the passengers if we don't agree to release dev..

Officer:I think we have to agree to his demands…

Maan:no sir..how can u agree so easily to release that criminal..

Officer:but what we can do mr.maan we don't have any other option...

Maan:no sir we have..plz give me a chance…

Officer:you mean commando operation..

Maan:yes sir..

Officer:no way mr.maan no way..we cant take any risk in this situation…

Maan:wahi toh sir..iam trying to say the same..we cant take any risk again by releasing dev…sir plz believe me plz give me one chance only one chance…

Officer:no way mr.maan..iam so sorry…

Maan:but sir..

Officer:no more discussion now..iam going to inform our decision to them..but first I have to go CM and discuss with him…so plz stop being stubborn and cooperate with us..

Saying so he leaves the room…maan who was already restless and angry is fuming more now and started following him..

Maan:sir plz plz one chance…

Officer:no mr.maan plz try to understand the situation..

The media people who was waiting outside started to fire their questions..

Sir aapka decision kya hai?kya aap dev ko release kar rahe hai?

Officer:no comments please…

He soon stepped in to his car and left the place…

Mr.maan plz aap batayiye kya decision li hai government ne…

Maan:plz don't disturb us now..we are thinking about that…

Sir kab thak sochenge aap log?kisi ki jaan jaane tak?

Maan:what the hell are u saying?iam sorry but how could you say like that?do u think that we don't have any concern about the passengers…and even my wife is in that flight….how could u say like that?y u people always make rumours and say whatever you want…

Aadi who was standing beside maan understood that maan is loosing himself..he soon went to maan…

Aadi:ma'm plz enough now..we'll inform u people as soon as we get any conformation..so plz calm down now…

He dragged maan with him inside…

Aadi:maan what was that?why u were behaving like that ha?are u mad?u know media people will create unnecessary rumours if you speak out anything wrong….

Maan:then what I should do damit?they'll say whatever they want but I should keep quiet right!arey y don't they understand that iam ready to take risk without even caring about my geet….

Shashank:maan calm down…don't worry evry thing will be ok…

Meanwhile,they hear the beep again from their walkie talkie…shashank lifts it..

Brij:hello officer don't u bother about ur passengers ha?y u people are not responding to us..ok then I'll kill them one by one..

Shashank:no..no don't do that..you gave us time and we are thinking about that and will inform you soon…

Brij:agar jaldi nahi ki na…

Maan:toh…toh kya karoge idiot…

Brij:oh so mr.maan singh khurana is on the line…listen maan don't forget that ur wife is under our control…if u try to show ur intelligency then our first victim will be ur wife..

Maan:shut up bas***d!dont even dare to take my wife's name..otherwise u'll suffer…

Brij:mr.maan u have just 5 hours more to inform us ur decision..if not then be ready to receive a nice gift from us..i promise u like it…

Maan:you…

But he hangs the call…

Maan:damit!!!

Shashank:maan don't worry..everything will be ok…

Maan is fuming with anger now….

Maan(st):god!iam not able to do anything…y??jaan I hope u are fine..iam sorry I don't want dev to be released..and I want to take charge to save u all..i know u'll be doing samething if u are in my place…jaan mein kya karu?mein kuch nahi kar paa raha hoon…

He closes his eyes and says..geet…

Meanwhile,

Geet is still thinking about the ways to rescue the people..she suddenly feels maan is calling her..maan..she says..

Geet(st):I know maan u'll be very much worried..and I have trust on you..i know u'll surely save all of us..dont worry maan iam always with you….

Maan smiles when he remembers smiling face of his jaan..his geet..her one smile will make him relieve from all the tensions..

Maan opens his eyes and looks confidently at shashank and aadi as if he got the way to come out of the problem…

Maan:aadi come with me…sir we will be back in 30 minutes..

Shashank:ok maan carry on…

Meanwhile,outside media people were busy in creating their stories..

Reporter:lagtha hai ye maamla itni jaldi solve nahi hone wala hai..and our officers have not yet taken any decision..and even commando officer maan singh khurana failed to solve this problem who always used to solve every case easily…even he is not taking anystep..aisa lag raha hai ki he is very much worried about his wife but not other passengers…that's why he is not taking any action…if we observe the circumstances it looks like they are not going to release dev..if they don't then that criminals kill all the people…hope govt wont take any risk with their lives…

Camera man mahesh ke saath…ayesha tv***********😛

Then some more officers reached the airport and they decided to inform brij that they are ready to release dev..so they all are waiting for brij's next call..maan and aadi also stood there waiting for brij's call but looks like maan has something in his mind..so he stood there confidently…

It was night now…

Meanwhile,

All the passengers were sitting in their places holding their breaths…..a passenger gets up from his place and informs them that he want to go to wash room…they agrees and allows him to go..

One of the person in brij's gang is roaming here and there with gun in his hand..while he was crossing a seat he finds a little south indian girl looking at him innocently…he smiles at that girl while that girl still looks at him innocently…he sits down on his knees in front of that girl…

[guys that little girl is south indian so she speaks in telugu but iam providing u with translations..]

Man:beta ne peru enti?[beta what's ur name?]

Girl:maithili..mari ne peru enti?[maithili..and what's ur name?]

Man:hmm..na peru venkat[my name is venkat]

He is talking politely to that girl while his mother who hugged her daugther tightly from side is scared of that fellow…

Man:ekadiki velthunav beta?[whre are u going?]

Girl:ma grandpa vallintiki velthunam..meru andarini enduku bayapeduthunaru?[iam going to my grand pa's place and u were scaring all?]

Man:nanu chusthe neku kuda bayam vesthunda?[u also scared of me?]

Girl nods as no and that man smiles at her…

Meanwhile,that person who went to wash room..comes out.."sir bathrooms are very dirty..we cant bear this smell..plz call someone to clean them…"

Brij:shut up!we are not here to provide u the luxuries…shut ur mouth and settle back in your place…

What u are up to??y u are treating us like this?ha there will be a limit ok…

Brij:oye chup!!zyada mat bol…chup cha0p baito warna I'll kill u…

Before that person could say anything pari[air hostess] comes to him whio sat in very front seat and makes him to sit in his place…

Brij:ab bahut hogaye baatein…all of u sleep without any disturbance..dont even try to move..otherwise no body will go out alive..remember..we are awake..

Everybody soon closes their eyes…

Meera:mama,papa iam so sorry again…god plz save us..

Yash:are yar atleast let me sleep peacefully..

Meera looks at him frustatingly…

Yash:meera u are a model right!

Meera:ha y u are asking like that?

Yash:hmm...thank god many people are saved from ur shows..atleast for some days...

Meera:what!!!u..i'll kill u..btw u know that iam the showstopper.if iam not beautiful then y I'll become showstopper ha…

Yash:hmm..i pity on them..iam sure they might be scared of ur anger..that's why they made u shows…whatever…they knew that u'll kill them if they don't praise you..

Meera:you….aur tum bhi kitne logo ko maar dala?doctor jo ban kar ghoomtha hai na…

Yash:hello excuse me…iam a specialist and I have not even failed in a single operation..waise bhi I don't play with human lives like you..

Maan:what?what u said?

Yash:gud nite…

Meera looks at him annoyingly and closes her eyes…

Here geet is thinking about maan,her son and her family…

Geet(st):pata nahi sab kese honge?abhi..i hope he's fine..he don't even eat properly..and maan..i know he didn't even have taken a single bite…I hope my family is fine..babaji plz help my maan and my family….(a tear rolls down her cheek)

Meanwhile,

Raj who just closed his eyes wakes up with a sudden jerk when romeo pats his shoulder..

Raj:what now???

Romeo:y are u sleeping?u are not going do anything??

Raj:what I should do?

Romeo:oh!so you want to keep it as a secret right!ok k carry on..i wont disturb you..and I know u'll do everything till morning…I know..i know..afterall u are a super hero..

Raj(st):hey bhagwan!plz do something…I'll definitely go mad with this man now..

Romeo gives him a smile which irritates raj more..he then closes his eyes and raj too dosed off to sleep…

In the morning:

Romeo wakes up and finds raj sleeping..he turns around to see brij and his gang..he is worried now..and calls raj to wake up continuosly…raj wakes up with a sudden jerk but he is still in his sleeping mood..

Romeo:aap ne kuch nahi kiya??

Raj:no I didn't do anything but they created affair between me and my heroine..

Romeo:raj..what are u saying??

Raj came out of his trance now..

Raj:ab kya hai?

Romeo:u didn't do anything??

Raj:what I should do??

Romeo:why these people are still here?u didn't kill them?

Raj:what??????????????😲😲😲

Romeo:kya what what laga kar rakha hai aap?iam asking u y didn't u save us from them?

Raj:when I said that I'll save?

Romeo:kal raat..ok leave that..u do something now..

Raj:what I should do?

Romeo:are yar sab muje samjaan pad raha hai..you fight with them like u did in that don wala movie..u killed that don na,..

Raj:shhh…dheere bol..they may think that I killed their don..mein ne use sach mein thodi maara hai o tho film tha..aur wo bhi actor tha don nahi..

Romeo:arey u beat them na..

Raj:are how can i??

Romeo:u fight with them same like u did in that movie and u also jumped from building na…

Raj:are yar..o sab toh bodydoubles karthe hai..mein nahi..

Romeo:matlab o hero hai…aap nahi…u do something na..y don't u talk to them and make realise them that it is not correct to kill people…same like roja movie..in that hero made them realise that it is wrong to kill people..

Raj:abey fool!tumhe kya lagtha hai o log meri sunenge..they will kill me with single bullet..and in that movie they are junior artists so they listen to him because director says them to do..but this is real life…

Romeo:but still u do something…u are super hero na…

Romeo is continuosly torturing him and raj is bearing him becoz he have no other way as he cant move from his seat…


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Edited by maneetlover1 - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
Wow...awesome update dear😳🤗🤗

poor Maan 😭😭😭

Raj and Romeo😆🤣🤣

continue soon😳 😃
Edited by NaGeSwArI - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved it... i think i have seen the film in tamil named payanam...it looks the same but bit changes with maan and geet is nice...i loved it... do continue...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awesome update dear...loved how Maan and Geet where thinking of each other
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hahaha...why ? on romeo...But really emotional...I really loved Maan..but he is really short tempered he should calm down.Addi is really nice...he can handle Maan.Geet Meera...Yash Romeo u showed their situation during such condition exactly same.The most famous Kandhar Hijack is running in front of me...I think u took inspiration front that.Even 9/11 Ya they attacked twin towers.But besides this at same day the plain flaying over Pennsylvania came in front of me.Where passengers attacked the hijackers becoz they knew there was end of their lives.But in this way they saved The Pentagon to b attacked other wise scene might b different Same in the way Geet was thinking to save people .

Lov

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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesum dear..
No one s giving maan a chance..
But sumthg s dere in his mind..
waiting for msk to b in action..
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome dear
loved their telugu talks
poor maan
cont soon

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