Killing me softly with your eyes

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Posted: 19 years ago
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This is a poem of mine which I wrote a few years back.....not for any particular person but I think my Mills n Boon hero Ram Kapoor perfectly suits the bill now. This is for all Ram Kapoor female fans!!! Hope u girls enjoy it 😊 as much as I do 😳

An Ode to Ram (Rum😉)

Your face is like a novel
I read yesterday evening.
When the glowing gown of day
Fell off your shoulder
And like a devotee at your feet
I gathered it up in my bosom.
You lifted me up
Like a knight from a fairy €" tale.
And I dived my face
In your bushy chest.
When I went through
The pages of your mind,
Your eyelashes fluttered like
Sharp-edged leaves of a new book.
When you put on the dusky gown of night,
It casted shadow on
My flushed expectant face.
In the mirror I watched
My fair statistics matching
Against your tanned length.
Your eyes spoke volumes
Your lips none throughout.
I read on and on
Till you whispered in my ear
€œSpeak out my name.€
I wondered what to say
To me you were
But an untitled novel.


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Posted: 19 years ago
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wowowowow thats really good ~~~~!!!

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it Represents jai all the way!
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Bharati... that was really good yaar... I can very much relate to the "And I dived my face In your bushy chest." my fiance is quiet like that.... 😆

Thanks again dear... great job... 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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woww...dats one piece of interestin work...gr8 poem 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow hun!! that was awesome!!

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Awesome,i really like the"i dived my face in his BUSHY chest",LOLz 😆 !Btw,great piece of work keep it up. 👍🏼
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I would never be able to do a poem dat gud. You go girl!! 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that is a really good poem.
Thanx for posting it

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