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Posted: 19 years ago
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hi there this is my first time writing one so plzzzzzzzzzz post ur views so i can continue further.

It's morning in the walia mansion. everybody is already awake and jai is in his room gettting ready to go to work, suddenly bani comes in and is just looking at Jai and can't stop looking at him, so jai turns away from the mirror and asks bani "what is the matter with you and why are you not saying anything?" Bani says nothing and just keeps on staring at jai. meanwhile downstairs at the breakfast table, everyone else is eating and then suddenly dadi notices that either jai or bani are not here at the breakfast table so then massi is also worried and tells everyone that i hope everything is fine and nothing is wrong with jai and bani. Ranveer and Roshni doesn't say anything and they both are just pretending to give them nasty and weird kinds of looks. upstairs when jai is getting ready he tells Bani to get ready for tonight because he is going to take Bani out for a wonderful night, and then that keeps Bani really worried and also sees that jai is smiling when he tells her, but when Bani is about to ask him of what is going to happen tonight jai comes forward and plants a kiss on bani's fore-head and jai leaves and heads downstairs for breakfast. Bani is worried and just thinking of what was that of what had just happened.

plzzzzzzzzzzzz post ur views and i'll continue later okay.

love u alll. :)😊😛

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Posted: 19 years ago
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plz cont sooooooooon 👏 👏 👏
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WOW its really good, please count 👏
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ok i'll continue soon okay.

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👏 !!
good start!! pls continue soon pls!!
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awsome start... 👏 please continue soooon...
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ya gr8 start
i hope to read the next part soon
so do continue plz
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wow great job hun cont soon 😳
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Jai comes back from work and he looks very tired, but then bani comes and gives jai a glass of nice and cold water so he feels much better. Jai gets freshen up while Bani is getting ready, she is wearing jewellry and putting the sinndoor in her maang and also wearing the mangalsutar. While she is getting ready she is been smiling infront of the mirror and is also thinking of what has happened to Mr.Walia that he suddenly decided to take bani out for a nice night out but Bani didn't know at all of what has Mr.walia planned for her. Jai and bani are all ready and they are both heading downstairs so as soon as they leave early as soon as they can get out of the house and enjoy theirselves for sometime. everybody is downstairs and looking at the couple coming downstairs and dadi and massi are very excited to see both of them very happy and not mad or angry on either of their faces. Jai and Bani leave, they are both in the car and there is very soft and romantic music that is being played in the car, while bani is looking from the other window outside Jai is just staring at her and can't stop staring, because since the night they consumated their marriage, jai has been thinking about bani since that day.

i have to go now so i'll continue very soon'


plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz post ur vies.

love u all. 😊
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Posted: 19 years ago
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that was gr888.. cont soon 👏 luved it

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