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hEYA people...i'll update in an hour...!
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Part 25
"Maan, you need to go...please!"
Geet replied as she packed Maan's bags swaying from one corner of the room to the other.
"Geet, what's the problem? Tell me? Please? I can't see you troubled like this"
"Maan, I'll explain everything later...right now...I need to make you safe"
Maan stopped Geet and raised her chin, her face was tensed. Her eyes were next to being red...they showed mixed colors of her original color and the new wine red tinge.
"Geet...please...I need to know"
"Maan...even I want to tell you... but its not the correct time... you and daadima need to leave Mumbai...as soon as possible..."
"kyun Geet?"
"I promise...ek baar sab theek ho jaye...I'll tell you"
"promise?"
"yeah"
Ayesha entered Maan's room: we ready?
Geet: yeah...Maan's done!
Maan: you are not coming?
Geet: yeah...Ayesha will
Maan: but why?
Geet: Maan...please...no more questions.
Maan: geet Lekin...
Geet: Maan...please
She was about to dash out when Maan caught hold of her hand and pulled her near him: bas...bahut ho gaya Geet
Geet: Maan...chhodiye...koi aa jayega...
Maan: geet...tumse ek cheez maang sakta hoon
Geet: jaan bhi maang lenge...to bhi mana nahi karungi
Maan closed her lips: dobara aisi anaab-shanaab baatein mat bolna...samjhi
Geet smiled: ok... boliye...kya hua?
Maan: delhi jaane se pehle...aakhiri baar... ek saath...kuch pal bitana chahta hoon... chalogi
Geet: kahin bhi le chaliye...main mana nahi kar paungi...
Maan: hmm... chalo
Geet: kahaan...
Maan: wahin... jungle ke dil mein
Geet smiled weakly: chaliye...
*~*~*~*
The forest was quite calm and peaceful... for maan... but for Geet...she could hear all sorts of voices... there was a slow gushing sound of the breeze which brought all sorts tempting smells with it burning away Geet's throat...
Maan was feeling Geet's restlessness and so finally he blurted out: kya hua Geet...tum theek ho?
Geet: yeah...yahaan pe bahut ajeeb si smell aa rahi hai
Maan: smell... kaun si smell...btw yahaan to phoolon ki khushboo aa rahi hai Geet
Geet: aur shor bhi hai...
Maan: itni shaant jagah mein tumhe shor kahaan sunayi de raha hai Geet: nahi kuch nahi...chaliye...
Maan: tum yahaan aati ho?
Geet (absent-mindedly): haan...jab bhi pyaas lagti hai...
Maan: kkya?
Geet: nothing...
Maan was getting confused. Geet was trying hard not to breathe but the scents of the forests were killing her patience. Maan was thinking naughty things in the forests'when he thought of something. He stopped while Geet continue walking.
He called her back: GEEET
Saying this, he held her hand.

Turn your speakers on... and wait for the song to load



Tu hi haqeeqat khwaab tu
Dariya tu hi pyaas tu
He tightly held her hands... a shiver ran down her spine. She held her breath tightly

Tu hi dil ki bekarari
Tu sukoon tu sukoon
He pulled her closer holding her hands. Her curls flew out in the air and all the life came to a standstill as soon as Geet's scent saturated the air- a predator was here...


Jaoon main ab jab jiss jagah
Maan caressed her curls with his fingers and then caressed her shoulders and neck with his nose and lips. Geet shivered in his touch.



Paoon main tujhko uss jagah
He turned her face towards him and kissed her forehead. She struggled to keep herself in control.

Saath hoke na ho tu hai
Maan pulled her even closer and they had an eye-lock. There was magic in Maan's eyes...they were deep and passionate...and explained his love and desire for Geet and how he had suffered all these years in her absence



Rubaroo rubaroo
Geet slipped her hands on Maan's neck and kissed his forehead. Maan was chilled to his bone but couldn't stop admiring his love... she was a fairy indeed...

Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
There was deep passion in Geet's eyes too...they spoke a great deal truth of her love for him... She nailed Maan to the tree trunk and entangled her hands in his...


Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Maan was taken aback with this gesture... though his mind chuckled at the naughty thoughts...
Aa tujhe inn baahon mein bhar ke
Geet pulled herself closer and cupped Maan's face. Maan's cheeks shivered. He closed his eyes as Geet's divine fragrance saturated his lungs...




Aur bhi kar loon main kareeb
She neared his lips and sucked his upper lip. Maan opened his eyes in amazement and then kissed her back holding Geet by the waist.



Tu juda ho toh lage hai
There was inflow of tears from Geet's eyes... as she sucked Maan's lower lip. There was shiver of fear...fear of loosing Maan...fear of becoming a monster again...when she was changing into more of a human being...





Aata jaata har pal ajeeb
Maan hugged her tightly..there was fear in his eyes...fear of loosing her again...fear of doing something that would take HER away from HIM...

Iss jahaan mein hai aur na hoga
Maan wiped off Geet's flowing tears and kissed her eyes. She hugged him tightly...



Mujhsa koi bhi khush naseeb
Maan took her in his arms... she was heavier since the last time he had held her... but...she found solace in his arms. She lifted her head up and rested it on Maan's shoulders.


Tune mujhko dil diya hai
Maan kissed her forehead and her nose. She looked at him adoringly...

Main hoon tere sabse kareeb
Geet was forgetting her darker self...
Main ti toh tere dil mein hoon
Main hi toh saanson mein bassoon
Maan cupped her face and sucked her cheeks... she held her breath...

Tere dil ki dhadkanon mein
Main hi hoon main hi hoon
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Suddenly... there was some downpour... Maaneet looked up simultaneously and 2 drops of rain fell on Geet's eye-lids. Geet smiled and closed her eyes as a reflex.





Kab bhala ab ye waqt guzre
Kuch pata chalta hi nahi
Maan put Geet on her feet and she ran around with her hands up around enjoying the rain.

Jabse mujhko tu mila hai
Hosh kuch bhi apna nahi
Geet was wet by now... Maan hugged her from the back and started tracing her body and curves with the help of his fingers... she rested her had on Maan's chest..

Uff ye teri palken ghani si
Chaanv inki hai dilnasheen
Maan sucked water from the nape of her neck and tracing his way up to his cheeks...

Ab kise dar dhoop ka hai
Kyunki hain ye mujhpe bicchi
Geet smiled and looked at him adoringly... the floor slipped below Maan's feet... those eyes...spoke a whole lot things which her lips would never dare to speak.
Tere bina na saans loon
Tere bina na main jiyun
Tere bina na ek pal bhi
Reh sakoon reh sakoon
Maan lay on Geet's lap and Geet adoringly caressed his tresses.
Tu hi haqeeqat khwaab tu
Dariya tu hi pyaas tu
Tu hi dil ki bekarari
Tu sukoon tu sukoon
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera
Maan had found solace... peace... and comfort... he was complete...now...no one could take his solace from him... he was complete...

Precap
It's the beginning of the end...
OR
Some miracle is yet to happen??

I hope this Update lived up to your expectations... any criticism...most welcome...

Cheers,
Shivangi
Edited by CIDMaaneetNaksh - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome part
thanks for the pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi shivi😊..superb dr..no words⭐️..rocking👏👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
get was an vampire right?????
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Posted: 13 years ago
Shivi that was an awesome one
now I want the next one Sooner plz its a request yaar don't take month's to update it plz
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Posted: 13 years ago


very beautiful part...

Geet is Vampire and vampires don't have feelings and she is dead also...then the miracle only can unite them...

waitng for next part...

thanx for pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update.
maaneet romancing wow,
Do update soon.

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Posted: 13 years ago
Nice update. The song and the images were superb. Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 25
nice lovely part...
cont soon...

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