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Posted: 13 years ago
WOW u r an amazing writer&ur ff is mesmerising
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ushasri

nice update hari waiting for next part so in next update we will know weather radh see her photo in his pocket

Thank u dearrr love ur fed backs

yes u wil knnow it
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 10

Radhika was abt to open the back pocket of his pant when Dev cried loudly "Ouchhh"

Radhika kept that pant there and rushed to dev, he was holding his arm which was bleedin

Radhika got worried and she started to cry holding his hand "Ye what u did to ur self , how it happened"

Dev:"vo, Actually I kept some mportant papers in back pockets, I remembered it so came rusing when I got my hand cut wiht this glass piece."

Radhika:U should have said me na

Dev:It was kinda personal

Radhika:Ohhh, wait u keep ur hand under water I will bring first aid it will stop bleeding

Dev nodded and Radhika rushed to bring bandage, dev went to his backpocket and took the photo and kept it in his pocket, saying "Haan I am so hurried that it costed me a cut"

Radhika came bak and seeing Dev standing like that only "What u still didn't keep ur hand under water, wanna donate blood or what?Come keep ur hand under tap"

Dev smiled and kept his tap under water.

Radhika after washing it, kept the bandage around the hand.

Dev was abt to go into kitchen when Radhhika said"Where going"

Dev:Khana kaun banega

Radhika:U go I will manage

Dev:U don't know how to make food na

Radhika tum jaao, jaake rest le lo

Dev:But,

Radhika:Shhh go, go and sit

Dev became a good boy and sat there. Radhika called Rohan and said "Rohi, bring some food."

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Radhika:I dont know any thing, u should bring some parcels for me

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Radhika:i will kill u even if u dear to bring small piece of egg or noveg into here. Understand

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Radhika:Okay u bring bye.

Radhika disconnected phone and looked at Dev who was sittign there wiht a questionign look to Radh

Radhika"Rohan , I phone him to bring some food forus."

Dev:But

Radhika:Tomorrow, kaaka will return I guess, so no prob adjust for today

Dev:Koi baat nahi

Radhika came near Dev and asked "Is the hand still paining"

Dev:Nope, not to worry

Radhika Okay

Radhika went toplace where the glass piece hurt Dev and took that piece form there and kept it in store room

Dev:What is this

Radhika:Tody it hurt u, may be tomorrow it may hurt me, why this all

Dev:Some times u look very typical

Radhika:Thats based on, what u take my acts, If u try to find good, u will see, other wise u will find only bad. any way I will set the bedsheets, as they need to be changed.

Dev:I am getting bored.

Radhika:TV on karo

Dev:I guess, in bed rooms too TV's are there

Radhika:Yup will u come and see sitting there, By time I will set ur bed

Dev:Okay

Radhika opened a door in the top and get Dev into that room staing it as his room

Dev looked around and found some pics of baby radhika wiht her Grandfather

Radhika:he is my ddji

Dev:U love him a lot na

Radhika:How u know

Dev:U used to say abt it always when we arein schooling

Radhika:Ohhh, He was also a doc and he was my inspiration

Dev smiled and he onned the TV. A news channel was coming and Dev started t watch it with interest. Radhika who was busy with taking bedsheet was talkin to him and she didn't notice that he was not listenig to her, as he didn't reply she turned to see him watching news channel. She too saw at that side thinking what might be that interesting and there was somethign news coming abt Raghuvamshis.

Radhika became dissapointed.

Dev:Radhika, see this, these raghuvamshis na, hw much respect they get, and yeah they were probably the most famous in our place folowed by RP's

Radhika smiled but kept silent

Dev:Radhika, that man RamShankar Raghuvamsh, wow he was such a good politician I just love him

Radhika:KYa

Dev:I like him

Radhika:Dev, u like violence that much

Dev:What violence yaar, he was really a goodpolitcian and mght be become our states Chiefminister this time

Radhika:Yeah, but behind that political history how much crime rate is hidden , that also shold be calculated

Dev:What

Radhika:according to a source, he did 15 bombblasts and 35 murders, what with that

Dev:How u know

Radhika:May be magic

Dev:Stop joking and say How u know, and also I observe u never like raghuvamshis why

Rohan came by that time wiht parcels in his hand stopped there.

Radhika kept silent.

Dev:Why don't u like them

Radhika:because they all are criminals, ,murderers I hate them.

Radhika saying this left off crying, she stop at the door seeing rohan standing there and she left off

Dev silently looked at Rohan and said "What happened to her?"

Rohan too left into Radh;'s rom silently. He wnet near Radhs and said "Hi"

Radh was crying there.

Rohan:Some one here became deaf I think

Radh's who was angry gave a him a slap on his back "Get lost, I say,. leave me alone"

Rohan smiled and came to radh and sat beside her saying "Radhu, ro mat, Dev doesn't know na"

Radhika rubbign her tears sayd "I am not crying because Dev said it, but U know, why I am crying, I hate him, I wanna kill that man, for that I am crying"

Rohan came near Radh and hugging her form side said " If ever in future u become a famous doc na, then he will coem to u, for what he do, he will have atleats one or other diesease, then do wrong operation and kill him and coming out say I am so sorry I tried a lot but operation was failed."

Radhika smiled and said "Poor me, even I can't do that too as its against my ethics

Rohan rubbing off the tears from her eyes "That was a good girl like. Go and wahs ur face."

Radhika smiled and went to wash her face. She came back and asked Rohan "Dev kaha hain"

Rohan:He went down

Radhika rushed down to Dev and saw him trying to keept the curry into bowl but was suffering due to the cut on his hand. Radhika rushed to him and slapping him on his back said "Why are u doing this, stop, I will do this."

Dev calmly gave that to Radhika. Radhika started to set the parcel into bowl and Dev said "Sorry Radhika"

Radhika looked at him and asked "Why"

Dev:I shouldn't have talked abt him to u

Radhika:Common aisa kuch nahi, if u know may eb u wouldn't have talked, I should have said u atleast

Dev:U don't have angry on me

Radhika:Nope.

Dev:U are really goo Radhika

Radhika had tears in her eyes she reminded his words once a time "She was really bad"

Radhika looked at him and said"U were more goody than me"

Dev smiled.

Rohan who was standing at kitchen door rubbed off that tear coming from his eye seeing his best friend smiling,

Radhika, Dev and rohan sat for dinner,

Radhika brought only two plates.

Rohan:Radh wh only two plates

Radhika:Wo Dev ki hand ko chot hua tha na, thats why thought to fed him

Dev:What

Radhika:U be silent, if u touch this hot parotha with ur hand ur hand will ache more, let me feed u

Dev:But

Rohan:No prb,Even she feeds me too

Radhika sat beside Dev to feed him Dev opened his mouth and Radhika kept a piece in hsi mouth

Radhika continued to keep another piece also in hsi mouth

Dev:Radhika, won't u eat

Radhika:I will eat later

Dev:Unhuuu u will eat now wiht me

Radhika finally unable to talk with him, kept a piece in her mouth too and they both conitnue to eat

Rohan smiled seeing this and thought to himself 'mad radhu,who said u he don't love u, he loves u more than himself, u are really lucky dear. hope u realise soon'


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: jeffin

Very nice update Hari 👏 i loved it ...


Will she see that?????? I am eager to know it ya...

Rohan is good boy it seems 😃 Nice

Will wait for the next...

And thanks for the PM 😛

Thanks jeffi,

Ur eagerness is answered, itni jaldi ho gaya tho, vo mera ff ho hio nahi sakta

yes Rohan is a good woody, indeed I like saurav at begining he was like a milky boy, so he is always a goody woody to me

Thanks dear
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Will Radhika come to know about Dev's feelings for her?Waiting for the next part.

May be not dear, sh may not know it for now
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thank u buddy, 😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: Priya46

WOW u r an amazing writer&ur ff is mesmerising

Thank u dear. I m not that great, there are many other good ff writers than me
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: masumasrilanka

SO THEY BOTH LOVE EACH OTHER ,NOT READY 2 DECLARE,MY OH MY LETS SEE IF SHE SEES THE PHOTO, WAITING FOR MORE .NICE ,PLS COME N GIVE A LONG 1.

yes dear, long one, um presently I am working on intezaar for a valentines special one. so I will try to give longer one later 😉Thank u
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow awsome part hari so rohan know dev loves radh hope soon radh will realize that waiting for next part hari
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meenaluma

will she see that pls continue soon

Thank u dear, lets see when I get a time 😊😊

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