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PART 9

Dev continued to smile to their talk, even though he was not enjoying the close ness of Rohan with Radhika, He was cursing out Dev a lot in mind. Unable to bear as Rohan declared he will stay for dinner, Dev decided to go out to meet his friends.


Radhika:Dev wait, I will give u key

Dev:No problem, I wiill manage
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Radhika:Shut , I am saying I will give na, how much time will u wait for a rickshaw or bus, this is vrindavan, not delhi

Dev unable to talk, gave up and Radhika brought the key for him

Dev went out, Radhika said him to come early and he left off.

Radhika and Rohan sat down and Rohan spoke "What's up yaar, chakkar kya hain"

Radhika:Giving him some fries "Whats up means"

Rohan:"Ye Dev"

Radhika:Dev ko ye maloom nahi ki I remember him

Rohan:Then

Radhika:For him I forgot him along in that memory loss


Rohan:Then, what do u think


Radhika:Means

Rohan:Will u say him

Radhika:Do u want me to cry again

Rohan:Looks like he loves u too

Radhika smiled and said in a lost voice : Kaash ye hua toh

Rohan:No Radh, he is loving u

Radhika:No rohan, He just symapthise me, thats it, may eb he was considering me as a friend. Nothgn more than that

Rohan: But u are not that na

Radhika:Rohan U know, I left living to my choices three ears back itself

Rohan:Don't start again

Radhika:No Rohi, I thought 5 years back I still have a chance to live up my life, but before three years only I understadn that my life wasn't in my hands, before 5 years I lost it to other hands.

Rohan:Nothing is like that

Radhika:Yes nothign is like that if ever she didn't leave me alone (Poining to her mom's fingers)

Rohan:Radhika what are u saying

Radhika rubbing of her tears said "Haan Rohi, what ever I am doing now, its not upto me, its all in the hands of my guardians, Shannu was the only relief to me, she was not being that much angry to me, but maamaji, he always doubts me, rather I shold say my age. He even doubt when I am talkign phone too. And regarding to u, he already decided there was affair between us.How should I say that, I can't love any one, when I lost the one whom I love. I didn't have any pace for any one in my heart except for him, How should I say thiss to all those who are doubting me. I am not the one who falls for all tom and harry. I wanna shout it on to them, but am not in a position to shout, Though I wanna shout, the very glimpse of my studies is coming into mind,

Rohan:Radhika still five more years, U will be freed, U can live ur life.

Radhika:May be,U know what again badimaa came with a nautanki

Rohan:Kya kiya, nautanki ki rani

Radhika:She is saying daadi to check on me and my talks and she already declred that I am on dating with som e one

Rohan laughed out and said "Ye gossips na, parents ke bina jeena kaisa hota hain, ab mujhe pata chal raha tha"

Radhika gave him a angry look for laughing on her and said "I won't talk to u"

Rohan made a babyface "why"

Radhika:Even u too start to laugh at me

Rohan:Sorry yaar

Radhika curledup her legs on to the comfy and sat their folding her hands around the raised legs

Rohan knowing how to console her "Ok miss.Radhika Raghuvamsh U know I am going for mela."

Radhika stand up im mediately and said "Really, pls pls, I too will come,"

Rohan:Nope

Rohan turned to leave and Radhika rushed to Rohan car and sat in it. Rohan came and said "What is this"

Radhika:Now u should take me

Rohan:okay, now u started this gunda giri on me, what should I do will take u

Radhika:Thats a good boy

Rohan sat in the car at the driver seat and setting seat belt he asked "Radhu, When will u say him , abt ur love.

Radhika:I wanna say, but when reality dawns in my mind, I am getting fear

Rohan:I didn;t understand one thing, U are not that type to say a lie, why did u spoke it

Radhika:Really I doesn't know, at that time I said it as if I am in trance and I believed that girl yaar, When I came to know what I said I doesn't wanna acknowledge it as a lie, but took promise from her not to say it to any one, but she didn't obeyed it and said it to whole class. When they asked me I managed some how, but it reached him and he got angered on me. May be my childish ness was also a result.

Rohan nodded his head and said "Why did u got that much trance yaar"

Radhika:Even for today I don't understand "I am in such a trance that my mind was not under my control"

Rohan:Hope the misunderstadnign soleves soon

Radhika gave a smile of hope.And immediately she turned to him and said "Hey don't take my surname wihth my name okay, If ever again then I will kill u "

Rohan saw Dev going infront and stopped the car infront of him,

Dev stopped the bike as he saw the car coming and loooked.

Rohan and Radhika came out Radhika was in the same white dress which she wore after coming here.

Dev:Tum log yaha

Rohan:Nothign yaar, as we felt fed up with talks, thought to go to Mela , Indeed Radhika insisted so, I had to take her

Dev:Ohhh I am also going to it, as I liked it a lot, when I am in hostel here, never got a chance to go

Radhika:I love it a lot u know

Rohan:Thanks Dev, now u take Radhika as I needa go, my sem is approaching and tomorrow, I had a small test.

Dev:Buttt Radhika may feel problematic

Radhika:Mujhe koi problem nahi, sitting on bike U move

Rohan:Bye Dev.

He winked to Radhika and left into car and drove out

Dev moved the car and Radhika who was busy in viewing the plain ghats was enjoying it. Bike took a turn to Rawal and As Radhika noticed it asked Dev "Where the mela was"

Dev said in a casual way"Raawal"

Radhika became uneasy and asked Dev to stop the bike.

Dev:What happened,

Radhika:Will u please stop the bike

Dev stopped it and Radhika getting down said to Dev "U go, I won;t come"

Dev now gettign down from bike asked what happened

Radhika:Actually these ghats are beautiful so thought to enjoy these than those grumpy melas

Dev:Its night, it was not good to go to ghat now

Radhika:Okay fine then I will go home

Dev:Radhika, its the mela from Raghuvamshees in their own field, it will be good.

Radhika turned around facing to the otherside and tears started to flow from her eyes. She thought in her mind "Kanha please get this solved" and said out "Don't u understand, I doesn't wanna come " and she was abt to walk back.Dev stopped her holding her hand and said "Radhika what happened,"

Radhika;s tears increased and she was not turning to him, Dev saw around and as he found nobody dragged her to ward him and tried to turn her towards him, but then Rain started to fall heavily and Radhika who was wiping her tears looked up. Her tears were not recognisable in the rain, persona;;y thanking Kanha in her midn she turned to Dev and said in a normal tone "It was raining, we will leave to home"

Dev:In this rain>??????????

Radhika:No problem it will be good , if u can't drive park bike there, we will take an auto rickshaw

Dev:No I can drive, but in rain

Radhika:Dev, Nature will reach only those persons whom it loes, when we came put there was not even one cloud in sky, but now it was purong, means Nature liking us and trying to reach us. t was a bliss for us. We should allow nature to reach us and take us into her,

Dev was impressed to her talks and asked "Okay madam but what if we got cold"

Radhika:What types of doc u are, don't u know that cold was a primary line of imunce defence and we will get cured of bacteria in our body throught that pus

Dev giving her a namaskar by folding his hands started the bike and Radhika sat behind him with two legs on either sides, to have good hold.

Dev:Radhika sit on one side na

Radhika:Sorry dev, I really can't balance my self when i sit on one side, so let me sit like this. Don't worry I won't add my weight on u, I will balance my self .

Dev:No no, Not that But what if some one sees

Radhika:I am living for myself not for others okay, I am vexed up wit all these and even if i sat one side, they will talk those things, so it on't make any difference, and also when I am going on road, Dogs Bark at me, doesn't wanna mind them/ So please start it.

Dev didn't surprise becoz he know the boldness of Radh which maked him insprire her some times, and also get angry on her some times and started the bike. Radh hold the back rod of ike making him not to feel insecure and was enjpyn ride as he was driving wiht full speed. He was driving wiht complete speed as he know that she like it and he was enjoying the ride too and the dress of Radh was also not problemising her because of its thisckness and she was relieved with it too which was makign her to completely enjoy the rain

The bikes reached the house and Radh came down and went into the small garden to enjoy the rain with her sunny, Dev too joined them and started to enjoy. She saw the children in the beside homes and they oo came as they saw her, Aunty came from beside home and saw them playing. she mumbled "Radhika, u came, again children started to play"

Radhika sat on her kness and asked one fo girls "Why aren't u peole laying properly"

That girl said "Di, U only said that u will bring our mom-dad one day back na, but when u left off, kiran bhaiyya said that, u deceived us and u won't come back and u won't bring out mom dad ."

Radhika cupping her cheeks "Babli Kiran bhaityya was bad u knwo na. Why will I do that. I had my college there, so went there. Ur mom dad na I am searchign for them, They will come back:"

Babli:Really di

Radhika:Haan

That girl smiled and gave a kiss on Radhikas cheeks, those 20 children came and hugged ger. Dev was standing leaning to a tree and was watching,

Radhika:u people should play daily okay, I should not listen this complaint from aunty, and haan U people leave now. I will catch u tomorrow.

They all left happily.

Radhika saw Dev standing at pillar looking at her she went to him and asked "What"

Dev:Wo bachon

Radhika:Last year they came here, they were all orphans aunty was running it. They all used to ask aunty abt their parents, I went to those small children one day and said that their parents were lost and I am searchign for them. Then onwards they used to ask me daily, and I use to console them

Dev:Isn't it a lie

Radhika:Haan but that one lie give them a lto of happiness. That makes me smile. Indeed I am searchign for their parents, I am trying for people to adopt these children. In that way they too will get perents na,

Dev:Did u succeed

Radhika:Yes, we had four children upto now got their parents like that and we will tell parents about every thign and make them also to sy children that they were their parents and they were got lost

Dev:Its really funny, parents getting lost

Radhika:If we say u got lost from ur parents, the child have probablity to deveop inferirority complex, os I said like this. any wa leave that, u will get headache

Dev sield and left along with her into home.

rADHIKA:KAKA didn't come upto now, what is this, she tried to phone him. he got conected and said "He left as he had a marriage and Radhika gave a sigh to Dev'

Radhika:Sorry Dev, Kaka left for his relatives marriage, I will make noodles hope u have no prob.

Dev:Waitwait, I will cook, I know how to cook okay

Radhika:wow thanks me too waiting . Get soem good food okay

Dev smiled and said : Radhika u should be doing it I think

Radhika:Chod do, I will learn after

Dev:What if u get married

Radhika:I will marry the one who knows how to cook, any way wo sab chodo, aur bahut bhook lag raha tha, please make some thing

Smiling Dev went into kitchen and Radhika helped him in cuttign onions and veggies.

Radhika:Shall I do some thing

Dev:No need, I doens;t want it to be spoiled, I will make it but u please keepy those all clothes fr washing.


Radhika:Okay cool Radhika changed her dress and she kept her clothes along wiht Dev's clothes for washing.

Dev from kitchen Check my pockets if it have any thing

Radhika sighign checking the pockets and Dev who wasin kitchen realised his mistake and rushed to wards washing offing the stove. Dev was getting tensed as his shirt pocket had the photo of her written on back "My love"

Radhika completed the Pant pockets and founf his purse keeping it on table she took shirt pockets into her hand
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Posted: 13 years ago
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SO THEY BOTH LOVE EACH OTHER ,NOT READY 2 DECLARE,MY OH MY LETS SEE IF SHE SEES THE PHOTO, WAITING FOR MORE .NICE ,PLS COME N GIVE A LONG 1.
meenaluma thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
will she see that pls continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice update hari waiting for the next update
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice to read wait for more
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96
nice update hari waiting for next part so in next update we will know weather radh see her photo in his pocket
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97
Very nice update Hari 👏 i loved it ...

Will she see that?????? I am eager to know it ya...

Rohan is good boy it seems 😃 Nice

Will wait for the next...

And thanks for the PM 😛
harianjana thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
Friends I didn't reply u all from a long time, Now I will reply u all


harianjana thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: meenaluma

awesome update liked it a lot pls continue soon


Originally posted by: meenaluma

cute update will wait for next one



Originally posted by: meenaluma

nice update will wait for next one

Originally posted by: meenaluma

nice part liked that jealous dev pls continue soon




Thank u meena . I always wait for ur response as u give it in a correct way. and haa regarding jealous dev, I too love him than a mahaan Dev. and they were mere humans like us but their love is great
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Posted: 13 years ago
Will Radhika come to know about Dev's feelings for her?Waiting for the next part.

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Posted by: Mystic_Muse

11 years ago

~Love makes Life~ KRIYAANSH DRABBLE SERIES 'completed'

Banner Credit goes to -chamkilli- A girl full of enjoyment lives in a chawl, never tries to get effected by any one, she and her sis live with

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