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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
love maan .he is
awesome wants to
do every thing 4 geet.
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Posted: 13 years ago
interesting story line !!!!!!!!!please ADD me in !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago

thanx for such sweet comments...😃

sorry got delayed...

waise if i get more comments..

i may give you next update on sunday only...😈


RECAP:

she tried to take parth from maan's arm but he refused to come..

maan chuckled looking at this scene...

geet twisted her lips and said...

dalbadlu...waise toh kabhi mujhe nai chodta

aur yahan apne papa ko chodne ke liya tyar ni hai...

mujhe na bola..mujhe...

babajee dekh rae ho na...in dono baap bete ne apni team bana li hai..

ab mera kya hoga...she pouted very cutely...

i don't mind having anotherone... he winked

**PART6**

WHAT???

He chuckled and said I meant that I am ready to include you

In our team '. Haina parth'.

Geet was hell embarassed and left quickly from there leaving behind maan chuckling'.

IT WAS HER FIRST DAY IN KHURRANA MANSION AS DAUGHTER-IN-LAW...

she quickly got out of washroom after bathing...

as she was drying her hair...she came towards her wardrobe to take out a saree...

she saw that a beautiful red saree was already lying on the bed with a note...

"Parth would love to see

his mother in this saree "😉

geet smiled looking at the note..and went to dress up for Parth (acc to her)...


giving a last glance towards herself in the mirror and feeling satisfied

in the saree she proceeded towards the adjoining room where maan was waiting for her with parth...

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Wo'I will take care of Parth now'you can go and get ready'

Maan was standing on the balcony with parth'when he heard geet speaking'

He turned around and was mesmerized to see her dressed in the saree brought by him'.it would be difficult for him to control so he just nodded and handed over parth to geet and was about to move when geet uttered'

Umm'wo'thanx for the saree'I really liked it'.

He smiled and turned and said

Red really suits you'.

and quickly left from there'..(least did she know red was his favourite colour)!!!😳

She made Parth ready and came out with him where all the other family members

Were waiting for her in the drawing room'

Arrey..geet beta ap aa gaye'

Aur mera pyaara sa bacha bhi tyar ho gaya'.sawitri said taking parth in her arms

Ji mummiji'..

Geet aj apka pehla din hai yahan toh apko kuch meetha tyar karna hoga aj'

Ji '

Toh chale beta'..

Ji chaliye'..

Geet prepared kheer with the help of nakul kaka'

She brought the tray out and served it to all the members who were assembled the dining table'

Till then maan was also seated there'..

Everyone appreciated geet'

Wow bhabhi apke hath me to jadu hai'

Geet beta sach me bahut acha bana hai'..

Geet felt happy but waited for maan to comment'

She looked towrds maan who gave a smile and nodded '..

She felt at cloud nine'.that means it really tastes very good'.she beamed with happines'.

Geet was given a diamond set in shagun'she took the blessings of elderly couple'

As maan and mr.khurrana left for the office'

Geet retired toward her room'..after making parth asleep'.

She remembered her parents'. she felt engulfed in a sudden guilt'

Maana ki they are angry from me'. But ek phone toh kr hi sakte the na'

Unhe pta hai yahan aj mera pehla din hai and I have never lived without them'

Tears started coming out of her eyes'.

Agar unka phone nahi aya toh kya hua mujhe toh unhe call kr dena chahiye'

Meri awaz sunege to reh ni paenge'wo mujhe maaf kr denge akhir mujhse pyaar jo

Itna krte hai'.

With this she wiped her tears and moved towards her cell phone which was lying on the sidetable'

She noticed that it was switched off'.

Oho'maine hi toh kl raat switch off kiya tha'.agar unhe call bhi karna hota to kaise karte???

Yeh dev bi na'kitna tang karta hai mujhe'

Janta hai how much I love him'phir bhi mujhe kitna satata hai!!!!...

Oh god yeh mai kya bole ja rahi hoon'she covered her moth with her palm feeling ashamed'.

Mai kaise bhul gai that I am married'.

Meri life ab meri ni hai hai'.its of my Parth'

Mai maan ke sath apna relation nai manti but I can be loyal to him atleast'

Wo bhi toh mera kitna khayal rakhte hai'

Mujhe ab dev ko sach batna hi hoga' ab wo wapas aa gaya hai'

He has the right to know the truth ' till when can I hide this truth'

Dev tumne ane me der kardi' kash ki tum jaldi aa gaye hote'

Kash tum us din wahan hote'to shayad ye sab ni hota'

Shayad..you and me would have been together'dev'.i miss you dev..

She cried her heart out'she let her bottled up feelings come out'

I love you dev 'I really do'aur ab when every thing is over'

Ab jb mai kisi aur ki amanat hun toh tum wapas aa gaye'tum kyun wapas aye dev'

I will have to go to meet him for the last time'kuch hai jo mujhe usse lautana hai'

She wiped her tears and switched on her mobile'there was no missed call and not

Even a single message'

Strange'suddenly a message appeared from dev only'

"meet at ccd at 5!!! I will be waiting"'.

She didn't reply'..

She went downstairs and spend tme with annie'.

Nearly around 4'she told sawitri ji about her visiting her college friend'

Sawitri was more than happy to agree'as she was happy that geet was happy being here and

Was feeling comfortable'she told geet not to worry about parth..she will take care of him'.

And asked her to have fun'geet smiled and went out where driver was waiting for her..

Sh e sat and reached the destination'

As usual she was before time'she was wearing glasses which she pulled over head

While waiting for dev'

Dev came rushing inside knowing where she would be waiting for him'

He directly went to the seat and kissed her cheek'.

Sorry sweatheart' am again late'

He then noticed that she was wearing a saree'oh god geet you look fabulous in a saree..

Waise yeh sb mere liye..

Just then his gaze travelled to her face where there was a line of tear..

I am so sorry'but please don't cry geet'you know I can't see you crying'.

I am sorry baba'ab mai aa gaya hun na'I will daily call you'

Pta hai my training was awesome..

All my seniors were so impressed'they enen planned to

Tumne ane me der kardi dev'she didn't even let him complete the sentence'

Dev kyun tumne mera phone ni uthaya..you could have called me back once atleast..

Geet'I told I was hell busy'it was only about two weeks'what s the big issue??

You asking what s the big issue?? Yahan meri life me itna sb kuch ho gaya and its only

Two weeks for you dev'

Geet baat kya hai?..why are you creating such a big issue of this???

Big issue!!!! You wanna the issue..right 'this is the issue!!...

She said removibg her glasses from her head..giving him a clear view of her sindoor'

Geeettt'he merely whisperd'

And this is the issue'she said lowering a bit of her saree from her neck'

Giving him a view of her mangalsutra'.

He couldn't utter a word'he was shocked'

Yeh nahi ho skta'ye sach nai hai'

Tum sirf aur sirf meri ho'tum kissi aur ki kaise ho sakti ho'

With this he pulled her and took her lips into his'.

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PRECAP:maan clutched his fist...

when he saw dev kissing her...



SO, HERE S NEXT UPDATE...

how was it??

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Mdworld corner

PREVIOUS UPDATE:PART 5

NEXT UPDATE:PART 7

Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago
abinash079 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
i liked the first half of update
and i hated the bit when dev that bas**** kissed geet he does not have any right 🤬
let maan beat him black and blue i dont care if maan is good or bad but geet is maa's wife
i hate the lst part of the update next time dont let dev to come near geet else be ready to receive chappal from me 😆

but seriously i dodnt like the last part of kiss plz tae care of it next time
hate dev😡😡😡😡😡 inspite of being good
how can he kiss a married women bas****🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬🤬
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome...
wow maan gifted her a saree..
OMG dev kissed her..
hmm wonder wht maan would do..
continue soon
-Mishu- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
loved only first part
i just hate dev
continue soon
cant wait 4 next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
good going
waiting for next
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Posted: 13 years ago
I hate the last part dev kissing get it should have been the other way round maan kissing geet. 😍
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Posted: 13 years ago
oh god i hate it...
maan dear..kill dev..!😡
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Posted: 13 years ago

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