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Posted: 13 years ago
#81
no need to change the name it sound good
if u like other name than u can start anther ff/ss always welcome for that
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Posted: 13 years ago
#82

k...so finally i am not changing
the title...and yes i will keep
the hidden desire title for my
next ff if in case i think of starting a
new one as suggested by many of you..
and thanx for a lovely response!!!



RECAP:


yrh dev kahan se wapas aa gaya???

hell..meri saari mehnat par paani phir jaega...

he looked at geet and caressed her head...

i know what am doing is wrong geet...

but yeh karna zaruri hai...

i can not let all my handwork go in wain...

i love you like hell geet...

aur mai tumhe paane ke liye kissi bhi had(limit) tk ja sakta hun...

aur ab jb tum mere itne kareeb ho ...

mai tumhe apne se dur kaise jaane du...

aadat ho gayi hai mujhe tumhari geet...

with this he kissed her forehead...

and stormed out of the room after switching off the lights..




**PART 5**

A NEW day...a new beginning...
as the sun rays fell on her face, she woke up...
not to forget before praying to her babajii...
saying him thanx for whatever he gave to her...
smiling she turned to her right to see the time...
it was seven...she found it strange..how can she wake up
on her own and that to this early...


suddenly realization drowned in her that it was her new home...
KHURANNA MANSION...her new life..what would all family members think???
she got up quickly to get ready...when she finally realized about parth!!
oh god...is ladke ko kya ho gaya...how can he be so silent...
she quickly wore her slippers and ran towards the left side of the bed
where the crib was lying...but parth was no where...
a sudden panick engulfed her...
mera bacha kahan gaya???


PART PARTH PARTH...she started shouting...
when she suddenly heard him gigling from the adjoining room...
she went running to the room without realizing she wasn't wearing the
pull over of her nightie...


as she opened the door...the sight before her mesmerised her...
maan was playing with parth and parth was gigling...
maan was making him jump in the air and then catching him...

geet looked towards the ceiling...
di agar ap aj yahan hote toh ap yeh sab dekh ke bahut khush hote...
she smiled looking towards the beautifull sight...
all of a sudden she noticed maan laughing...strange...
i never saw him laughing like this ever before...how can this be possible...
i might have not noticed...geet tu bhi na jhalli hai...

she was busy in her own worid...she didnt notice maan calling for her..


maan was busy playing with parth when he noticed geet standing at
the door and smiling at them...he called for geet but as usual she was in her own world...
Geet...
Geet...
yeh ladki bhi na pagal hai..where is she lost now...
kahin dev ke bare me to ni baat krne ayi...ni ni aisa ni hoga..

with this he got up and went towards her and touched her bare arm..
geet...

hun...oh wo mai...
geet was brought back when she felt his cold fingers on her arm...till then
she actually didn't realise that maan was standing in front of her and
was lost in her...

geet tum kahn khoi hui thi...maan said while rubbing his fingers very slowly on her
arms...he could not resist touching her after seeing her in that attire...

haan geet bolo...he said while very keenly observing her expressions...

it was then she realized that she was not wearing the pullover...
she suddenly became very shy...her cheeks were already red...
a different sort of feeling aroused in her...
after all he was her husband...
and that too maan standing so near to her...she couldn't speak properly...

wo..wo mai ...wo

he pulled her closer...wo kya geet...he said with a smirk...

wo mai..mai parth ko dekhne ayi thi..

par mujhe to laga ki tum mujhe dekh ke smile kr rahi thi...

ji...ji mujhe der ho rai hai...i should get ready fast...

she said quickly removing his hands from her arms and turning around...
in order to run from their...

all of a sudden maan held her wrist and pulled her back in a jerk...
geet's back collided with maan's chest with a sudden force...
maan kept his one hand on her waist in order to pevent her from running
while with other hand he entangled her fingers...

he lowered his face towards her ear and whispered...

itni jaldi kya hai geet...

ji ????

he further lowered his face...and said...
when she felt his breath on her nape...

mera matlab hai geet, parth se to milkar jao...

wo mai ne dekh liya wo apke sath busy tha...she merely whisperd...

so don't you wanna know how he came here???

wo...um ummm

before she could futher say anything...he said...

wo jb meri neend khulli...i came here and saw him stirring in sleep..
before he could cry i took him from there and brought him here so
that you didn't get disturbed...i know how exhausted you were
previous night...that s why you slept so early...

he told the last line hinting towards dev!!!!
he said all this removing his hand from her waist while untangling the other from her hand...

his last line brought her back and she remembered the last night's incident...

kya mujhe maan ko bta dena chahiye???
nahin geet ye tera matter hai...you should solve it on your own..
why to bother him...khamkhan pareshan honge...
aur waise bhi inhe pta chala to he will start blaming himself...
bekar me hi guilty feel karenge...and he would ask me to go back to him...
yeh to sabka acha hi sochte hai...bas apne bare me hi ni sochte...
sam di ke jane ke bad ek bar bhi unke bare me kuch ni kaha...kabhi
bhi nai kahan that he misse her so much...kitna pyar karte the unhe...
aur ab sirf meri khushi ke baare me sochte hai...nai..i wont tell him..

wo..ha mai kal jyada thak gai thi!!!
thanx...meri neend nai kharab krne ke liye...
ab mujhe chodiye na m geeting late...


maine tumhe kahan pakda hai geet..he whispered...
she got hell embarassed and ran from there...😳

arrey geet parth ko good morning to wish karti jao...

mai abi ayi...


she quickly went to her room and wore her pullover..and rushed back
to maan's room...where he was hliding parth in her arms...

she tried to take parth from maan's arm but he refused to come..
maan chuckled looking at this scene...

geet twisted her lips and said...
dalbadlu...waise toh kabhi mujhe nai chodta
aur yahan apne papa ko chodne ke liya tyar ni hai...
mujhe na bola..mujhe...
babajee dekh rae ho na...in dono baap bete ne apni team bana li hai..
ab mera kya hoga...she pouted very cutely...

i don't mind having anotherone... he winked😉

geet's moth felt open...matlab??...her eyes popped out...😆

********************************************************

P RECAP: still the same...
will she meet dev or not...


so here s next part updated...
so how was it..
i know i left at a very interesting point
😈😈...(wink wink)😉
no chappals for that
i hope it was worth waiting...😳
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Mdworld Corner

PREVIOUS UPDATE:PART 4
NEXT UPDATE:
PART 6


Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago
Remya_Pillai thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#83
geet s saying dat maan luvd sam soo much..
but maan wants to b with geet..!
ye kya ho raha hain..!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#84
awsem parth playing with maan geet as always lost in her world love maneet scene and last line
seemamary thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#85
Loved the way maan is seducing geet.😉 continue soon.
vrinda22 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
#86
geet as usual complaining 2 babaji..
if maan loved sam then why he says he has kept dev away from geet..
kuch hai..waiting for u 2 unfold..
thanks for not changing the title..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#87
Beautiful one ...
eagerly waiting to know the next...
please continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#88
Wow amazing ff dear..really lovd it..
Omg ye maan kesa insaan hai..mujhe tho iska character samaj nahi araha hai..kabhi lagtha hai o sharif hai aur kabhi laktha hai uske saath kuch tho gad bad hai..ab ye dev kaha se toot pada..anyway wil be waitng to knw all the answers to my questns..
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Posted: 13 years ago
#89

me confused

he married to sam but loves geet

ye ho kya rha😕

some thing intersting has happen in deir past

waiting for next

nd pm me😃

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Posted: 13 years ago
#90
wow nice FF...
luved the updates..
plzz add me onto ur pm list..
continue soon

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