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Posted: 13 years ago
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Thanx for the comments'

You all should comprehend my perspective also'

If you love something more than anything and

All of a sudden you are told that it does not belong to you'.

So that was an expected reaction'.

P.S: even I am a maaneet fan and hate dev!!!

Me down with cold and fever'feeling hell'

Here goes your next update!!!!!

RECAP:

Geeettt'he merely whisperd'

And this is the issue'she said lowering a bit of her saree from her neck'

Giving him a view of her mangalsutra'.

He could't utter a word'he was shocked'

Yeh nahi ho skta'ye sach nai hai'

Tum sirf aur sirf meri ho'tum kissi aur ki kaise ho sakti ho'

With this he pulled her and took her lips into his'.

**PART 7**

WITH THIS HE TOOK HER LIPS IN HIS'.

Just as his lips touched hers, geet pushed dev with all her strength'

Dev are you out of your senses!!!!

Shayad tumne meri bat dhang se suni nahin'

I do not belong to you any more'..ab mai kisi aur ki amanat hun!!!

He got furious and held her shoulders tightly'

Before he could say anything further'she removed his hands and got out of his hold..

Don't touch me'mujhpe tumhara ab koi haq nai hai'

Samjhe tum!!!

She turned and was about to leave'.when dev held her hand and pulled her back..

Itni bhi kya jaldi hai geet'he said with a smirk'

Kya jadu kr diya hai tumhare pati ne tum pe'hun'ab toh tumhe mera chuna

Bhi gwara nai' hm!!!

Must say geet nice plan'tum toh use pehle se hi pyar krti thi..hai na?

Mai to bus ek time pass tha..hai na geet??

Tabhi to you never allowed me to come near you'

Even when I tried to kiss you ,you said you were not comfortable

Or because of some other reaon you tried to escape from the situation'

Aur mai idiot tha jo tumhare natak ko sach samjh baitha!!!

We were committed from last four years DAMMIT'he said while breaking the glass of water'

Making his hand bleed'

Deeevvv!!! Geet spoke with a voice full of pain'

Yeh kya kiya tumne dev'she took his hand in her hand

Bahut dard ho raha hoga na..tum bhi na kabhi'.she said while tking a tissue out from nearby table in order to stop the blood coming out from his wound'

While her tears were continuously flowing out from her eyes and fell on his hand'

He did't let her complete her sentence and said'

Dard to ho raha hai geet but jo zakham tumne diya hai..

Uske samne toh yeh kuch bhi nai hai geet..yeh zakkham to tumhe dikh raha hai geet..

But what about my heart that is bleeding get???

Uss zakham ko kaise bharogi geet?? And pls ctop theses tears of your'

They don't affect me any more!!

Dev..please..i thought tum mujhe samjhoge aur yahan tum mujhe hi galat samajh rae ho!!!

Geet yeh galti to hui hai mujhse geet..that I once trusted you'once loved you..

Dammit how can I loose my heart to you???

Ab yeh bhi to bta to wo hai kuan jiske liye tumne mujhe chod diya geet??

She lowered her face..as she could no longer look into his eyes that were only telling her

About her being guilty'maan'

What ??? you mean Maan jijaji!!!

But how can that be possible????????????

He loved sam di so much'. Then how can he marry you??

And how can you marry him???

He only recommended the company to have me as a trainee'he did so much for me..

Sam di knew about our relation'she was so happy and told me that she would talk to maan jiju and your family about it'phir maan jiju ko toh hamare relation ke bare me pta hoga' then why did he marry you??

It was not maan, it was sam di'she took a promise from me that I would

Marry maan and give him and all the happiness he deserved..also parth needed me'

Dev...she pleaded.. she was dying dev..then how could have I refused her..how could I deny her of her last wish dev..how could i??

Geet this is not possible??

Geet think yourself'if sam di wa happy with our relation and she loved maan more than anything'

Then what happened that she asked you to marry maan jiju instead of me??

Koi bat toh hai geet that only sam di knew!!!

Koi baat nai hai dev'tum faltu me hi galat soch rahe ho!!!

Geet mujhe toh maan jiju hi kabhi yheek nai lage..

You never noticed how he used to look at you!!

There was something different in his eyes when he used to talk to you..

You always thoughtof him as a nice person geet'tumne kabhi bhi nai notice kiya when he always used to pamper you.. he never denied you anything you asked for..

dev!!...geet gave him a tight slap...

chi dev..kitni gandi soch hai yumhari...

making a disgusted face!!!

geet'tumne aj mujhe uss maan ki wjah se thapad mara..

han dev'he is my husband now!!

Dare you utter a nonsense against him'mai chup thi because I know I was at fault..

But how dare you blame him'bhul gaye unhone tumhare liye kya-kya kiya'.

He is a very nice person..itne ache log aj kal kahan milte hai dev'

You only said he loved sam di so much and even after that he agreed to marry me'

Only to keep his beloved wife's promise dev!!!

And that's it'nothing more to it'.

Acha!! Issliye he didn't inform me that he was marrying you'

At least he could have informed me..but he didn't'he sais looking iin her eyes..

Geet don't trust him blindly geet'

Jb sach tumhare samne ayega na geet'you will regret it geet..

Dev'tb ki tb dekhenge'its all over now..

I came here to meet you for the last time'

Mujhe bhool jao dev..ab mai kissi aur ki hun'you should forget me and start a fresh'

Dev couldn't take it anymore'he pinned her to the wall

Its all over..han??

Mai bhoo jaon tumhe!!!

Fine bhool jaonga'

But pehle you will have to say all this looking into my eyes geet'.

Itna asaan nai hota geet bhool jana'

Geet couldn't look into his eyes'

Nahin keh sakti na geet'its not possible for you geet..

You know why??

Because you love me!!!

With this he pulled her into a tight hug '

He crushed her body into his'geet tum mano ya na mano'

Tum bhi mujhse itna hi pyar karti ho!!!

Nahin dev 'nahin karti mai tumse pyar'

Yeh galat hai dev'leave me dev'

Chodo mujhe dev'she said while trying to push him'

But his hold was quite strong'

Geet felt weak and was about to hug him back when'

Devvv''''''.they heard a fuming voice'

Dev quickly left her and turned around only to see enraging maan standing there'


Maan was at ccd with one of his clients'

He excused himself to the washroom..

While on his way to washroom..

he saw dev and geet sitting in the corner and having a heated argument'.

He felt elated'while seeng that but all of a sudden dev

Pulled geet and tried to kiss her'he clutched his fist tightly'

How dare he touch my geet like that??

But before he could proceed and beat the hell out of dev..

He saw geet pushing him back'

He just controlled himself'I should not interfere right now'

Let geet handle this on her own'I should not indulge myself in this'

But mai iss dev ko to nai chodunga'

He dialled some number on his phone and said'

Kam jald se jald ho jana chahiye'

Uska aisa haal karna ki kissi ko apni surat dikhane layak nai rae'samjhe tum!!

With this he disconnected the phone and turned around and

Saw her slapping dev'.oh god' fe fealt so happy'

He then heard her praising him and den blaming him..

He didn't wanto go there as it may worsen the situation'

But it was the limit when he hugged her and above all'

Even geet was about to hug him back'.

Nahin I can not allow geet to do this'.mujhe geet ko rokna hoga!!!

she can not touch anyone except me!!!

PRECAP: geet rushed to maan

And hugged him tightly'

So how was it???

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PREVIOUS UPDATE:PART 6

NEXT UPDATE:PART 8


Edited by Mdworld - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
comment after reading
jssood thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago

it is awesome
maan listen all
love it but i think wt happen when geet know all truth?
chaddo precap is very very Beautiful Orkut Scraps
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
plz show us flash back story
hume bi pata chale ke chakker kya hai plz
maan is sam's husband phir bi geet se pyaar karta tha
so much confusion
plz clear karo
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Posted: 13 years ago
o !! ooo !! what is going on ???about..."Maan"...something is fishy !!! SUSPENCE !!!
but nice update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update maan heARD EVERYTHING DO NEXT SOON
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome update
Geet is right know she is some body wife
dev have no rights to touch her
maan heared all convasation between them
next what
loved it
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsome part ...but is maan behind everything...😲 continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
HEY SWEETIE! TK CARE PF URSELF.NICE UPDATE👏

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