Journey of being together - Her Indifference !!!

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With the promise made by Gopi for Ahem's happiness & self respect...the first instance came for her to keep the promise when Ahem asked for tea, ...Over the period of sometime thou Gopi has been putting her pallu in front of Ahem, she got used to doing it at a pace which was comfortable, but when Ahem asked for tea, she hurried putting it on...similar to the days after her taking back her Vows...Ahem on his part is now so used to her taking care of him & his needs that he failed to see her hurriedness...When his mom offered to bring the tea, he did not know what to say & agreed for the same...
As soon as Ahem saw Jigar, he was anxious to findout what happened at office...not a word said but his expressions gave out...Gopi was a witness to Jigar's conversation that how much Ahem was required in the office & how an important deal is coming up for closure...With Jigar insisting that Ahem be there in office tomm, Ahem after much hesitation agreed on the same. Kokilla was taken back that Ahem agreed & rejected the request saying that only based on Ahem's health will she agree...indirectly she told Gopi that unless she keeps her word , her husband will not be allowed to work !!!
The evening bought Ahem searching for Gopi to ask her about his blue file...it clearly shows how dependent & confident is he on her for his things...he observed clearly as Gopi was startled at his closeness, how she refused his help to pick up the clothes which were fallen down, how she guided him to the file than the usual way of picking up & giving it to him...he thought for few minutes to see if she would respond back the usual way of her attention completely on him which he has gotten so used to... but was suprised to see her head down & very hesitant in reaching out to him for the file...He then cut her off saying that he will handover the file to Jigar as he needs to explain himsomething...After she left he stood there wondering that there is a change in her but he was unable to pinpoint the exact change & thinking what could have happened for her to change & what was troubling her...he was taken back by the change in her not knowing what can be done to get her back to look at him with shyness & complete admiration which she shows it thru her eyes !!!
Gopi observed her husband being restless after dinner...she was worried for him & did not want to create more problems for him...from coming into the room after he slept...to latter time of being with him as he continued to work..to the time of her recuperating when he took care of her by playing ludo to massaging her feet to discussing about Raji's problems...Gopi waited for her husband everyday as they rested in the night...She knew that they havent spoken since morning & he would definetly want to speak with her...or if he tries to speak to her she will not be able to hold-on to her promise to her maaji !!!
Ahem on his part from hating to share his room with her, to getting used to living with her, searching for her in the night as she was preparing for the school admission, to giving up his bed for her comfort, to taking care of her during her accident & now feels incomplete without her...the room especially the private time they get to spend with each other have been during the nights when they are together with no one disturbing them...has Ahem gotten used to & loves the fact that she waits for him so that they can both settle to rest together in the night !!! when he saw her sleeping he was suprised that she slept early which she has not done in the past year+ of their married life & was concerned that maybe she was not well...his concern for her was so much that he touched her forehead to see if she was running temperature...when he observed that she was fine, he justified it to himself that she must be tired & hence slept early...has it become a habit for him her to wait for her everyday in the night where in they could have their own time...did he want to speak to her ...did he want to share his inner feelings which have been put off guard by his mom's punishment? Did he want to speak with her to understand what was troubling her??? But she never gave him the opportunity as she acted that she was asleep...
Ahem has observed the change in her, but does not know what has caused it...when the kiss happened he knew the incident & how she would react, but now he has no clue about the incident to react or to put her in comfort by taking care of things which worry her !!! He was able to handle her indifference for today but will he be able to handle it as the days go by...will he try to know what was troubling her or will he accept that this is the best for him to concentrate on work & continue to please his mom...One thing to note that thou Gopi has promised her maaji that she will stay away from Ahem, Ahem has not made any such promise...so will there come a day when he will know the reason for her indifference & the unspoken love & respect Gopi has for him? What will he do then & whom will he support?

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varshu27 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wonderfully written navya...what ahem does during this phase of his life is going to set the tone for his future...it is a given that he is going to miss gopi...what he does to close the distance will be a treat to watch...in the process he can also set a few boundaries for his mom...and let her know he can handle both family and work...at this point it looks like koki is setting up ahem for failure...for will he be able to concentrate on work or will he be thinking of gopi all the time...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: varshu27

wonderfully written navya...what ahem does during this phase of his life is going to set the tone for his future...it is a given that he is going to miss gopi...what he does to close the distance will be a treat to watch...in the process he can also set a few boundaries for his mom...and let her know he can handle both family and work...at this point it looks like koki is setting up ahem for failure...for will he be able to concentrate on work or will he be thinking of gopi all the time...

Yeah Varshu...I agree that what he going to do now will decide what the future course of life will be...he has seen the difference what it will be with Gopi maintaining distance from him...is he ok with it or will do something about it is what we have to wait & watch !!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Navyab, fantastic analysis again👏..
Ahem does not know about the vow and it is sure to confuse him. This is something that was needed in their relation, a small separation that will make them come out of their respective comfort zones that they had gone into. Friendship is a good thing in marriage if the couple take it as the first step. In the GoHem relation they were set on the friendship, with each one not wanting to make the waters murkier with other added emotions.
Koki has done it for them and now, it is up to them to make sure they clear the water up soon. As for Ahem's dilemma, I hope he does not have to sacrifice one relation to get the other. He should be able to make both his relations work. He is smart enough to make Koki realize that she needs to let go off him.
This hourney just got exciting...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: navyab

Yeah Varshu...I agree that what he going to do now will decide what the future course of life will be...he has seen the difference what it will be with Gopi maintaining distance from him...is he ok with it or will do something about it is what we have to wait & watch !!!


Agreed, can't wait to watch...I hope we will get to see a turning point in their r'nship for the better. I want to see a firm and fair Ahem...where he has a heart to heart talk with Koki and at the same time put her in her place...it will certainly be a treat if Cvs portrayed this. I hope Cvs shows Ahem making a stand and earning respect for himself where his mum is concern...she cannot go on treating him as a child...he is a grown and married man for God sake.😡
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Scarlet28


Agreed, can't wait to watch...I hope we will get to see a turning point in their r'nship for the better. I want to see a firm and fair Ahem...where he has a heart to heart talk with Koki and at the same time put her in her place...it will certainly be a treat if Cvs portrayed this. I hope Cvs shows Ahem making a stand and earning respect for himself where his mum is concern...she cannot go on treating him as a child...he is a grown and married man for God sake.😡



I also want Ahem & Koki heart to heart chat...I want Ahem to put her at ease that he'll be her successful son no matter what😊 But he can as well be a loving hubby too😉 It is Ahem only who can reason with Koki & show her the devastating eff of her harsh judgmental thinking. He can only kill all her inner demons and teach her community living 😛 basically bring her out of her me- myself- my son mode.

Navya,loved to read yr take dear. Yes,Ahem is a new transformed man, so will claim Gopi will never leave her side. What makes their relationshipso endearing is... he thrives on love & she is still starved for affection... so this track will bring everything in the open 😳 Koki will learn soon that falling is love is not by choice it just happens ☺️ Their love is getting perfected in PAIN!!



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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fantastic analysis Navya as usual! :)

Gohem's relationship is going through a soft/rough patch! :(

Can't wat to see Gohem happy again!😳
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: CHIKA784

Fantastic analysis Navya as usual! :)


Gohem's relationship is going through a soft/rough patch! :(

Can't wat to see Gohem happy again!😳



I guess their love just requires some maintenance & servicing😉 now. We service our car , home everything...so why not relationships? It also requires some tune up & Maintenance...Ahem ji has to understand the mechanism & fault & get it fixed by Koki the mechanic 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Fantastic analysis!!soon he'll realize his feeling for gopi!probably on Valentines day!
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Originally posted by: Justlikethat1

Navyab, fantastic analysis again👏..
Ahem does not know about the vow and it is sure to confuse him. This is something that was needed in their relation, a small separation that will make them come out of their respective comfort zones that they had gone into. Friendship is a good thing in marriage if the couple take it as the first step. In the GoHem relation they were set on the friendship, with each one not wanting to make the waters murkier with other added emotions.
Koki has done it for them and now, it is up to them to make sure they clear the water up soon. As for Ahem's dilemma, I hope he does not have to sacrifice one relation to get the other. He should be able to make both his relations work. He is smart enough to make Koki realize that she needs to let go off him.
This hourney just got exciting...😃

Thank you Harini...Ahem was taking steps at the pace he & Gopi were comfortable without causing any disruption to his wooing her...during the process came the kiss which gave the process a little push...now with the vow...she avoiding him & he not knowing what has happened will put him into a track of trying to understand what hit their relationship that all the work he had done to make her comfortable has just flown out of the window !!! Will this make him realise that the Vows she has taken back at the start of their relation & the vow she has taken now have always been for him...will he understand the deep love she has for him or will he also like to follow what his mom expects him to do is what we have to wait & watch !!

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