OS : The Seven Year Itch - Page 4

finally got round to commenting. read it on phone couple of days ago but could not reply cos i thought it would take longer.

thanxx 4 d pm kavya..

Originally posted by: KMH-NASHA

finally got round to commenting. read it on phone couple of days ago but could not reply cos i thought it would take longer.

1st of all hats off to kavya u always bring something new & magical.

i super loved this story but never heard of the 7yr itch. but i am glad it's through your story i heard it the 1st. awesome work & beautifully written. mazaa agya.

romance written decently kavya u r mindblowing with words.i know i always say this but thats your fault kavya for writing new stuff all the time but this is my fav untill u create another magic.

both were amazing arohi and arjun & i particular love this loving caring family .i was actually imaging all this maybe cos we never got to see this side of arjun but would have love to.

thankyou for sharing this awesome piece with us and making me a part of it.do continue & pm me.

sorry but i will have to edit your other ff's some other time i have read them but i read on phone at night & comment next day from lappy often so short of time. came here as this was new & also i could'nt resist.

Originally posted by: ricsr

thanxx 4 d pm kavya..

hv just read it ..

its really hot n lvly os...😉

arjun was in hillrous situatn wen arohi blamd hm😆 4 nothng

bt he tuk gud advntg aftr clrng al misundrstndng...

lvd it...

lol..

btw @all - I just made minute changes by adding a ref to swimming pool, does not change the story at all. just notifying incase anyone reads it again u might find that I added few words in first para and the last but one para.

oh god tht damm Chlorine created all da prob...tht man is just sick...omg it is too hillarious how she was thinking 7 year itch and he was talking abt normal itching...aww poor Arjun his talking abt a hair cut also was misunderstood...she took it in a wrong way tht he wants change in his life... Arohi dear how can u even think tht Arjun will think abt someone else rather than u...not even in his dream kyuki uske dilme to sirf Arohi basti hai na ~~ loved it so much...this os symbolize tht no matter how old ur love is it never changes n tht is called true love👏