AP OS| O Saiyyan...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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The OS is inspired from the song O Saiyyan from the movie Agneepath. This is my interpretation of the lyrics on AP. Although the song is rendered in a male voice but I feel like it's from the girl's point of view. Anyways I have done this OS from Phulwa's perspective and yeah this scene like happens way in the future. It's not much but I hope you guys like it, comment or criticize if you feel it's worth it. 😳

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Meri...Adhoori...Kahani
Lo...Dastan...Ban Gayi
Ho...Tune Chua Aaj Aise...
Main Kya Se Kya Ban Gayi

She twirled around happily as countless petals rained down on her. She giggled and smiled like a young girl. She was standing in the magnificent hall he had decorated with great efforts as a surprise for her. It wasn't any special occasion as such but then she reminded herself what they shared was special enough and they needed not a reason to celebrate.

She had never anticipated that their story would take this turn, that after all the impediments they would get a chance to pick up the broken pieces and complete what was left. She stopped suddenly as she realized he was just standing there watching her intently. She looked at him with a quizzical expression. Smiling he came over and gently took her in his arms. Once again she found losing herself in his affectionate gaze. As he continued to love her with his eyes and whisper how beautiful she looked tonight she felt color rise in her cheeks. She felt as the most beautiful girl in the world; she glowed in his love.

Their eyes interlocked, he came closer and faintly pressed his lips on hers. She felt anew at his touch. She wasn't just Phulwa, she was Abhays Phulwa. With him she felt a whole new being; he completed her.


Sehme Hue Sapne Mere
Haule Haule Angdaiyan Le Rahe
Thehre Hue Lamhe Mere
Nayi Nayi Gehraiyan Le Rahe

As he sat in front of her happily chirping away all she could do was stare at him and think how with each passing second her distant dreams were transforming into real, every moment she had closed within, were breathing again filled with new depths. She discovered herself, life in every moment now. How did this happen? She thought...and as an answer she looked into his eyes.


Zindagi Ne Pehni Hai Muskan

Karne Lagi Hai Itna...Karam Kyun Na Jaane

Karvat Lene Lage Hain Armaan Phir Bhi
After all the struggles life finally was smiling brightly upon her. All the wishes and desires she had trapped deep inside her heart, too afraid to speak out were lastly set free by him. Her entire life she had waited for one chance at happiness and now it was here, right before her. He had started to fill her life with new colors of love, laughter and hope; her life had taken a new meaning.

Again the thought struck her; how? How did she reach here? When her fate did take a turn? His smile cleared all her doubts. It hadn't been an easy journey but together they had managed to pass through the test of fates. In the course she had lost her innocent dreams but had gained more; the love and support of the man who had stood beside her like a rock in every problem. But a silent fear always nagged her, how long will it live...


Hai Aankh Num Kyun Na Jaane
O Saiyan...

Kneeling before her he took her hands in his, softly kissing them he placed his head in her lap. She ran a hand though his hair fondly as he closed his eyes with a delightful smile across his face like a kid with no worry in the world. He looked up feeling a drop of water on his cheek and saw a tear rolling down her face. Startled he sat up. Quickly brushing it away she shook her head no with a pensive smile. He looked deeply into her liquid eyes and understood her unspoken answer; her fears, her desires.

Caressing her face he placed a light kiss on her forehead. Closing her eyes she quietly pressed her face against his chest, hearing her name echo in his every beat she wrapped her arms tightly around him. He held her firmly in his embrace as a promise not to let go and they stood there smiling in the blissful silence.

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Allbut1 thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG Anu that was MIND BLOWING!

Wow, wow, wow! Seriously I have no words to describe this! First that absolutely PhAbtastic episode, and now this flawless piece of work.

O Saiyyan has become my obsession lately, and now I know for sure that I won't be getting over it any time soon, not when you have associated my favorite couple with it! Seriously the way you incorporated the emotions and blissful happiness together makes me smile like an idiot, and I could feel my heart racing at times!

Reading about Phulwa being so carefree and happy in love is such a pleasure, and really it's only Abhay who can give her that eternal happiness and love that she deserves!

And those underlying fears of hers, so very well portrayed and such a natural reaction. For a woman who has lost everything in life, and unhappiness has become a constant in her life, to find someone who is willing to give her anything and everything in the world, that feeling must be incomprehensible, and that nagging fear about it being taken away from her, completely normal! But the way he eased her fears and pain just my tenderly kissing her forehead and holding her close, knowing that she can hear her name in his every heartbeat...really Anu you take my breath away!

Fantastic.Fabulous.Amazing.Flawless 👍🏼👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Too good!! It was so beautifully - I truly truly loved it!!👏👏👏
I've been lovestruck sincethe episode aired...and your OS was like the icing on the cake:))

that after all the impediments they would get a chance to pick up the broken pieces and complete what was left.

I loved the way you put it, truly theirs was a love story left hanging that they've finally got the chance to move on with😊

She felt as the most beautiful girl in the world; she glowed in his love.
She wasn't just Phulwa, she was Abhays Phulwa. With him she felt a whole new being; he completed her.

😍😍😍 Abhay's Phulwa...There's such a nice ring to it - what a lucky girl!!:D


how with each passing second her distant dreams were transforming into real, every moment she had closed within, were breathing again filled with new depths.

Beautiful description!!👏👏👏 Truly captured the essence of her emotional confusion within...From today's epi you could see the initial disbelief in her eyes when he claimed in front of Thakur he would forever protect her...I can only imagine how surreal all this must be for her...


All the wishes and desires she had trapped deep inside her heart, too afraid to speak out were lastly set free by him.

But a silent fear always nagged her, how long will it live...

I love the way you've shown her inner emotional turmoil - the happiness at being loved yet the fear she might lose it again...nicely put!:))

Kneeling before her he took her hands in his, softly kissing them he placed his head in her lap. She ran a hand though his hair fondly as he closed his eyes with a delightful smile across his face like a kid with no worry in the world.

He looked up feeling a drop of water on his cheek and saw a tear rolling down her face. Startled he sat up. Quickly brushing it away she shook her head no with a pensive smile. He looked deeply into her liquid eyes and understood her unspoken answer; her fears, her desires.

😍😍😍 The scene setting was too good - I really want to see it happening soon!:D

Aww - once again we have the lone tear that can move him to protect her from everything😍😍

hearing her name echo in his every beat she wrapped her arms tightly around him.

He held her firmly in his embrace as a promise not to let go and they stood there smiling in the blissful silence.

She truly does reside in his heart now, and his life revolves around her...too sweet!😃😃


👏👏👏 That was just simply amazing! I loved reading every second of it, and the way her feelings flowed through the scene...
CVs please pick up on it!! The scene as well as their unspoken words all portrayed so beautifully...hats off!:D
Please keep such amazing writings coming dear!:))
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Posted: 13 years ago
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@ vita...& @ ameres...

u both r just fabulous writers...i am never tired of sayng d same thng 2 u again & again...

but people...where is AP ff????...come on now...no shying...get down 2 spinning ur tale of AP love...& do put all dose scenes u people keep talkng about in future musing thread...

especially d dudh 1 & any jungle forest scene...😆

waiting eagerly...

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Absolutrly MINDBLOWING👏👏👏..too good yaar ...jst keep writing u r AMAZING
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Allbut1

OMG Anu that was MIND BLOWING!

Wow, wow, wow! Seriously I have no words to describe this! First that absolutely PhAbtastic episode, and now this flawless piece of work.

O Saiyyan has become my obsession lately, and now I know for sure that I won't be getting over it any time soon, not when you have associated my favorite couple with it! Seriously the way you incorporated the emotions and blissful happiness together makes me smile like an idiot, and I could feel my heart racing at times!

Reading about Phulwa being so carefree and happy in love is such a pleasure, and really it's only Abhay who can give her that eternal happiness and love that she deserves!

And those underlying fears of hers, so very well portrayed and such a natural reaction. For a woman who has lost everything in life, and unhappiness has become a constant in her life, to find someone who is willing to give her anything and everything in the world, that feeling must be incomprehensible, and that nagging fear about it being taken away from her, completely normal! But the way he eased her fears and pain just my tenderly kissing her forehead and holding her close, knowing that she can hear her name in his every heartbeat...really Anu you take my breath away!

Fantastic.Fabulous.Amazing.Flawless 👍🏼👏


Thank you so much the generous praise! Means alot! 🤗

O Saiyyan is my current favorite too and everytime i listen to it i can only imagine AP on it. Somehow i feel it really suits AP and would love to see it playing on them someday. :)
I'm glad you could connect with it. Really thats the best thing to hear.

Once again thank you for all the love! :)
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: vita93

Too good!! It was so beautifully - I truly truly loved it!!👏👏👏

I've been lovestruck sincethe episode aired...and your OS was like the icing on the cake:))

that after all the impediments they would get a chance to pick up the broken pieces and complete what was left.

I loved the way you put it, truly theirs was a love story left hanging that they've finally got the chance to move on with😊

She felt as the most beautiful girl in the world; she glowed in his love.
She wasn't just Phulwa, she was Abhays Phulwa. With him she felt a whole new being; he completed her.

😍😍😍 Abhay's Phulwa...There's such a nice ring to it - what a lucky girl!!:D

how with each passing second her distant dreams were transforming into real, every moment she had closed within, were breathing again filled with new depths.

Beautiful description!!👏👏👏 Truly captured the essence of her emotional confusion within...From today's epi you could see the initial disbelief in her eyes when he claimed in front of Thakur he would forever protect her...I can only imagine how surreal all this must be for her...

Exactly! Its all new for her, she feels the love yet its hard to believe.

All the wishes and desires she had trapped deep inside her heart, too afraid to speak out were lastly set free by him.

But a silent fear always nagged her, how long will it live...

I love the way you've shown her inner emotional turmoil - the happiness at being loved yet the fear she might lose it again...nicely put!:))

Kneeling before her he took her hands in his, softly kissing them he placed his head in her lap. She ran a hand though his hair fondly as he closed his eyes with a delightful smile across his face like a kid with no worry in the world.

He looked up feeling a drop of water on his cheek and saw a tear rolling down her face. Startled he sat up. Quickly brushing it away she shook her head no with a pensive smile. He looked deeply into her liquid eyes and understood her unspoken answer; her fears, her desires.

😍😍😍 The scene setting was too good - I really want to see it happening soon!:D

Aww - once again we have the lone tear that can move him to protect her from everything😍😍

Yeah i like too! hehe. For someone reason this image of AP has been stuck in my mind and i had to put it here. I can so see Abhay sweetly putting his head in her lap and she playing with his hair. 😳

hearing her name echo in his every beat she wrapped her arms tightly around him.

He held her firmly in his embrace as a promise not to let go and they stood there smiling in the blissful silence.

She truly does reside in his heart now, and his life revolves around her...too sweet!😃😃

👏👏👏 That was just simply amazing! I loved reading every second of it, and the way her feelings flowed through the scene...
CVs please pick up on it!! The scene as well as their unspoken words all portrayed so beautifully...hats off!:D
Please keep such amazing writings coming dear!:))


Thank you thank you thank youuu!! 🤗
I'm glad you liked it so much. Grateful for the appreciation. Super happy!! :D:D

I really wish they would play this song on them i dont know but it feels so...AP! :)

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