VirMan FF - Game of destiny - chap 5 UD 29/04 pg16 - Page 4

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Posted: 13 years ago
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gud one..
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Jafrina I loved it please add me to the PM list. 😊

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I love this FF so far!!!!
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Loved it! Plz pm me wen u update.😊
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thanx everyone for the sweet comments im glad u liked the beginning
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awesome start jaffu...loved it a lot😃

thnku soo much for starting a VirMan FF😳
ur such an amazing writer sweetz...
continue soon... pls do pm me when u update 😊
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Oye jafe..update yaar!!😛
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Originally posted by: Resh_kinhafan

awesome start jaffu...loved it a lot😃

thnku soo much for starting a VirMan FF😳
ur such an amazing writer sweetz...
continue soon... pls do pm me when u update 😊

aww dii thanx so much love ya
your making me blush awww

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Oye jafe..update yaar!!😛

updating in a bit ;)
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Chapter 2 - Welcome to Chandigarh Manvi Choudhury

"Oh no!" Manvi gasped as she jumped from under her duvets she looked at her alarm clock which struck 6.30 am. She sighed and fought with the air "I over slept" she whimpered "wait I am not messing up my plan this time." She Jumped out of bed and got ready to leave. Manvi tiptoed out her room dragging her luggage along as she quietly made her way to the kitchen she looked around to see if there was anyone in sight "coast is clear" she said in a relieved tone she opened the kitchen cupboards and stored some biscuits, crisps and chocolates in her bag. She then grabbed an apple and munched on it while she sneaked out the house making sure no one was awake yet. She stood outside the house and gave it one final glance and waved at the lifeless building "I'll be back soon" she assured it with a little smile on her face.

The day started to brighten up as the sun rose. Manvi stood at the lonely bus stop for the past half hour waiting for her journey to begin. "Finally" she said to herself as she saw a bus approach. It stopped in front of her and she hopped on and took an empty seat. The ticket man came to her and asked for her destination. "kahi ka bhi ticket dedo" she told him. The man was confused, Manvi looked at his blank face "acha..toh yeh bus kaha tak jari hai" she asked. "Chandigarh madam" the ticket man answered. "kya waha ka ticked dedo". Manvi nodded reply she took out her purse and gave him the money. She sat back and closed her eyes dreaming again.

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8 O'clock. In Chandigarh everyone sat round the breakfast table eating silently. Virat came down the stairs in a rush he walked over to the breakfast table but stopped when Dadaji told him off "Virat tum jante honk e iss gar mein sab kuch time peh hot hai tumhe ab nashta ta nahi milega" Virat shrugged his shoulders "fine" he said whilst grabbing an apple from the fruit bowl and munching on it and walking out the house. "Iss gar ke faltu niyam" he said to himself. Virat got into his shining black car and drove off.

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The bus stopped and everyone started to get off "Madam apka stop agaya" the ticket man told Manvi who was asleep. Manvi slowly opened her eyes and found herself in a new place she got out the bus and breathed in the fresh air she stretched her arms and yawned. "Hello Chandigarh" she said whilst looking at her surroundings. Manvi walked around the streets thinking what to do now that she had arrived at unknown place on her own. She went over to a man asked him if there were any hotels nearby but she unfortunately she had a long away to go. Manvi walked carelessly along the roads she didn't seem to look around at her surroundings and kept going. A car beeped from a close distance but Manvi was lost in her thoughts and didn't look up to see where the sound was coming from. The sound of the car horn became louder as the car came closer. Manvi eventually looked up "Oh crap" she screamed covering her face. The car screeched as it stopped just inches away from hitting Manvi. Manvi moved her hands away and stared blankly at the car in front of her. A tall and handsome bloke stepped out of the vehicle that almost crushed her. He clicked his fingers in front of Manvi who broke out of her shock. Manvi looked around her and then at herself she pinched her hand she smiled in amazement "Main zinda hoon" she shouted out loud. "Pagal hon kya" the guy who stood in front of her asked in anger. Manvi looked up at him and was stunned by his glistening eyes but broke out of her stare before shouting at him "gari chala nahi atha toh kyu chala te hon aise pagalo ki tara chala te hon mujhe tok diya hota to"

"Nahi mein behri nahi hoon mujhe sab sunay deta hai lekin tum apne yeh sare hue akein teek karao ek jeeti jagti ladki ko nahi dek sakte"

"kaise dekhunga tum itni lambi jon hon...Derfutiya"

"kya kaha"

"kuch nahi"

"chep" manvi mumbled under her breath

"waise tum theek to hon"

"haan theek hon varna toh mein" manvi whistled and pointed upwards

"aur mein jail mein aur who bhi tumhari vajhe se"

"maine kaha tumhe mujh pe gari chalane ke liye"

"uff meri maa mujhe maaf kardo ab mein apne raste jata hon aur aap apne raste jaiye"

"haan haan jari hoon" manvi told him she looked at him irritably and walked away.

Edited by Jafrina_luvs_KM - 13 years ago

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