VirMan FF - Game of destiny - chap 5 UD 29/04 pg16

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jafrina

@-Jafrina-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#21

Originally posted by: aamina1010

Haaaw!!! Apni behnn ko kamini kaha??? Kutti kyu nehi kaha ??? *disappointed*lol
K Hun I think we should behave as we wil prob scare every1 off with our weird talks!!

K the first chapter was awesome Hun!! Seriously i could just imagine it and especially the part where Viren got the telling off omg I could just picture it!!

Mwah

hehe lolz next time ill call you kutti

ok ill behave lol dont want to scare anyone 😆

and thanx fo rlikin the first 🤗

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Hooria

@hooriaa

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Posted: 13 years ago

#22

Plsz add me to ur pm list ur tooo gud i loed how manvi decided to explore the world i bet u manvi and virat will meet on their trip plsz pm me wen u continue and thanx

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jafrina

@-Jafrina-

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Posted: 13 years ago

#23

Originally posted by: hs7071
Plsz add me to ur pm list ur tooo gud i loed how manvi decided to explore the world i bet u manvi and virat will meet on their trip plsz pm me wen u continue and thanx

awww ur really sweet will surely add ya and thanx

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Shehroon Riaz

@shehroon_riaz

Voyager

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Posted: 13 years ago

#24

Amazing, mysterious prologue and first chapter. Really do want to read on :)
Please do PM me :)

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Abirami

@Abirami24

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#25

too gud dear.i loved it...

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love_never_dies

@love_never_dies

Sparkler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#26

Aww, my little sister writing another FF,😛, so happy sweetheart..😃.

maanvi is going to run away from rishikesh and virat was caught by dada ji,,

lolz,😉😆,, different one dear..

your concept is tooo good,,..😛.

loved the first part 😊..

thanks for the PM and continue soon sweety,, love you, mwazz.. 🤗

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Juhi Mokal

@-Juhi.

Rocker

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Posted: 13 years ago

#27

Wow this is awesome! I really loved the first part very very much !! Superbly written 👏 Manvi leaving Rishikesh to explore the outside world ...wow its really very interesting !!

Update soon and thanks for the pm 😃

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rev4eva

@rev4eva

Dazzler

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Posted: 13 years ago

#28

Hey Jafrina, I didn't know how I missed this amazing FF. It was simply too good yaar. Please include me in your future PM and can't wait to read the next part😊