if Wishes were horses Part 30,Page 79,3rd November

snigdhanagar

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Posted: 13 years ago

#81

woho sangita di loved dis update...🤗
omg shaan eyes was searching khanak instaed of gunjan hayee...superb
n she found his name pompous😆
m waiting wht will make shanak uinte..😍
update nxt part soon...😉

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destinylove

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Story is going intrestingly with shaan searching for khanak instead of his fiancee continue immediately when u get time 😊

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IF_rida

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Posted: 13 years ago

#83

really gud

it seems he's smitten by khanak not mesmerised

does he avtually luv gunjan or not

its interesting .

update soon

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Krithika

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Hi Sangita 😊

I am back sorry was away could not post earlier here pressed the like button just read part 4

Loved it Sangita its beautiful... 😊

Shantanu is stealing glances at Khanak haaye 😉 😍

Thoughts and dialogues written very well 👏

I really loved their first eyes meeting and how Khanak preferred to call

him Shantanu just like in the show ❤️

Our RBO characters names are very special to all of us and i loving the bong connection...😊

Very excited for the next part... 😃

I love ur title "If Wishes Were Horses"

Thank u very much 😊

Keep writing for us 🤗

Love u Sangita ❤️

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janavi07

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Posted: 13 years ago

#85

Sangita...😛

really nice update...shaan and Khanak First meeting...

OMg!...shaan Staring Khanak instead of Gujan...and Khanak said i preferred to call him Shantanu instead of shaan...this Time Shaan Expression...

really Looking forward How they come together...?

update soon...😍

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Sharon

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Posted: 13 years ago

#86

Hey Sangita ur back🤗

and u made me extremely happy😃 oh wow this one update cleared all my apprehensions😃 I am on cloud 9😃😃

Thnx so much🤗

Shaan is attracted to Khanak not gunjan wow im jumping with joy😃

Just had one doubt if he was attracted to Khanak how is that he agreed for the marriage with Gunjan???????🤔

One line caught my attention about their eyes meeting and things changing forever...this line made me wonder if Khanak felt anything for him?????🤔

I loved it Sangita cause in spite of a princess being presented in front of him his attention was caught by the simple girl beside her😊 and Khanak telling him that 'Shaan' sounded pompous was mindblowing, it shows how frank ,straight forward and outspoken she is😃

Loved it so much...u really made my day...

Update soon😃

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Priyasree

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Heyyy Sangita di,,,, how r u???😊

m very happy reading this update...though it is small...but, loved it😍👏

OMG!! he went to meet Gunjan...& his eyes were fixed on Khanak😉...& during the engagement he was also searching for her...keep staring at her☺️...😉

lolzz...she found 'shaan' pompous ...🤣

loved this line "their eyes meeting and things changing forever"😍

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sangitasengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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wow sangi..i'm grinning like an idiot..
shaan came to see gunjan but got his eyes set on khanak..
even during their engagement he is searching for her..
*sigh* they r meant to be..
i still wonder how'll shanak unite..
ur description is awesome as always..
shaan's reaction at khanak's i prefer shantanu..LOL!! absolutely perfect kodak moment..
awaiting the next part..

PS: update was chotu..thought i wont say it this soon but wat to do..no updates today..so bhooki hun..hehehehehe..

Thanks ramzz!!! you are right,they are meant to be!!! Don't think i can write longer than this but will definitely try!!!

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sangitasengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Wooaw g8 going sangita! Dis is my 1st comment of dis ff.sorry cant like! Ur story based on kolkata awesome. All 4 part indicate hw talented u r as a writter! Shaan watcing some1 else without thinking abt why da main reason 4 came dat house lolz love is blind as i knew bt also bring insanity abt people come to knw. Looking forward to next...

thanks a ton!!! it means a lot when readers take time out and comment!!!

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sangitasengupta

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Posted: 13 years ago

#90

woho sangita di loved dis update...🤗
omg shaan eyes was searching khanak instaed of gunjan hayee...superb
n she found his name pompous😆
m waiting wht will make shanak uinte..😍
update nxt part soon...😉

Thanks Snigdha for those lovely comments!!!

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