prem and mukti love -part 4

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Hey guys..sorry for delay..anyway this part is just the continution of (prem and mukti love part 1,2 and 3.)here it goes..
(prem is soo shocked to see debo in his cabin but before he could speak a word..miss nautanki...says...)
Debo:prem ji..ap ki tabiyat to tik hai..ye kya pehena hai apney..??
Prem:Miss nautanki..u just shut up and leave my cabin..
Debo:aray...ap ki sadhi kya hogayi ap tyo toatally changed hogaye..kya baat hai prem ji...mukti nai kyon sa jado caladiya ap pey..
Prem:Look..u just shut up and leave ...barna...
Debo:Barna..kya..???thapad lagayengay..??? yeskay alaba ap aur kar bhi kya saktai hai..laykin ab ap dekna...may kya garti huh..??
Prem:dekho..miss nautanki..apni bakwas ban karro and just leave...
Debo:Tik kaha..apney ..nautanki kyon ki ajh tak may sirf natak kar rahi thi...laykin jaldhi apko pata chajayega ki may kya karsakti huh...
Prem:Tumhara matlab kya hai..??
Debo:Matlab bilkul saf hai...kitna badha plan banaya tha mayney..ap ko fasakya..basu aur bajaj..family ko barbad karney ka..?? laykin mukti..uskey bajesey mera sab plan fail ho gaya...ab basu aur bajaj family say pehaley may yo mukti ko barbad kardeugi..aur yo bhi ap kya akhon kya samney..u just wait and watch...kyon ki apko pata nahi ki..debonita kis hat tak gir sakti hai..
(prem just cannot hear such things against mukti...he is soo angry and once again slaps her)
Prem:dekho..tum yak ladki ho aur tumhai markar mujha kuch milayga bhi nahi laykin kabardar jo..mukti ko kuch kiya to...agar mukti ko kuch huwa tyo..tumhai marna bhi may picha nahi hatunga..
Debo:Bahoat pyaar kartay ho na ap mukti say..now u just be ready to see wht i will do next .i just came here to tell u this things and mr.prem perna sharma..tumnai mujha 2 thapadh marahai aur uskey badley may tumhari puri jindagi taba kardungi..
(then debo leaves the office and prem is soo worried about mukti and he just phone mukti and tell her to come home with in 30 minutes coz he have something very urgent to say her)

Okay guys this is all for this part..if u all still think i should continue...i will write (waiting for ur response...)

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Posted: 19 years ago
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i like the part were prem slapped miss nautanki hehehe 😆
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Posted: 19 years ago
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cool thanks for updating ur fanfic yaar
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Plz continue good job plz continue
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Posted: 19 years ago
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gud job
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Posted: 19 years ago
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thanks a lot for updating this yaar if u wanna put in in the sticky post for prem do give me the links and ill do it
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Posted: 19 years ago
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hey..MainEkHasina..
thanks alot for ..i was also willing to do that but couldnot anyway..please do it for me
This link holds links from part1 to part 6
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=334549

and below is the link for part 7..
http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=328865

please put them in sticky .. and i will continue soon..part 8

than-x once again..
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 kl fanfic an keep it up

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