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Aradhna

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi! So I am a silent stalker of this forum, I don't watch this show nearly as much as I would like to, but I visit the forum daily for the brilliant oneshots and stories from everyone and I thought I'd try a hand at it myself! I don't claim to know the characters very well, so I do apologise if they seem out of character. I don't think this story will go on for very long, a few parts at the most. I do hope you enjoy. I will admit, a large part of my desire to write this was the fact that I've been listening to Allah Maaf Kare from Desi Boyz and wondering how apt it would be for MaanVeer sometime down the road, and even now you can see sparks of that in their relationship.

The following story is largely my own take on the characters and relationships in the show. I've tried to remain as true to the show as I can, given that I'm not so familiar with it I don't know if I succeeded, but with my own take on the background of MaanVeer as well as where it would go from here. The surprise birthday party track of Akash has been ignored, but Udayveer does know of Manyata's feelings for him.

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Aradhna

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Posted: 13 years ago

so here is the first part of this fic. If anybody has a link to any MaanVeer video on Allah Maaf Kare, please do let me know. I'd love to see it!

part one

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Uday braced himself against the frames of the large window, looking out at everything and nothing. It had been over a week since Manyata had been brought back home, since he had brought her back home, and while she was not outright rude to the elders of the palace, it was the complete opposite in her interactions with him. A part of him was amused at her volatile reactions to him, her threats and taunts, and even her violence - but there was a part of him, buried deep inside where no one knew, where he refused to even acknowledge, that ached. Her words, her refusal to accept her role and his part in her life, they hurt him deeply.

Once upon a time, they had been best friends. The oldest two children of the royal families, inseparable - it had been Manyata and Udayveer, Udayveer and Manyata. Where one was, the other was sure to be. And that little boy who had lost his best friend and playmate all those years ago cried somewhere in his heart for having her back, so near and yet so far, because she did not know him, did not remember him. She did not remember all the times they would sneak out into the garden to pull out flowers for Daadi Saab, she did not remember the times he had convinced her to climb onto the various pieces of furniture to play at superheroes. She did not remember him.

He hit a hand against the window frame before turning around in frustration, running his hands through his hair. He pushed his feelings to one side, annoyed at the fact that the mere thought of the woman could have his carefully cultivated character crumbling. He was Udayveer, Yuvraaj of Jaigardh. He did not let trivial matters like feelings get into the way of his goal.

She did not want to acknowledge their engagement, instead professing her love to that lower-class boyfriend of hers. Uday's fists clenched at his sides. She could deny it all she wanted but it would not change the facts.

Fact 1: She was a princess, Crown Princess of Rajgarh, and no matter what the fairytales say, princesses do not marry paupers. That boyfriend? Pauper.

Fact 2: Uday was her fiance. They were to be married, Daadi Saab had decreed it. And no one went against DS.

Fact 3: Uday did not share. And whatever Manyata may think or do, the truth of the matter was that she had been his since the first time he laid eyes on her when she was newly born. She had been his best friend and confidante. She had been his, and she still was.

Fact 4: He did not lose, ever. And he would do whatever it took to make sure of it. She was his, dammit, and she was damn well going to learn it and live with it.

"Things are going to change, Princess," he said to his empty room. "Tum Rajgarh ki Rajkumari ho, aur jisse tum kehti ho ki tum pyar karti ho? Woh toh kahaa ki bhi nahin. Shaadi toh tumhaari mere saath honewali hai, aur yeh haqiqat koi nahin badal sakta. Khud Bhagwan bhi nahin." He smirked.

"Let the games begin."

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I should warn you here out that the parts are likely to be short. But I do hope you liked this first part. Do let me know your thoughts!

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atop

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Posted: 13 years ago

😆

😉Well,

Wow

😲

That was just superb and Hi5 buddy, I have also been a stalker of this forum and come here for the wonderful piece of writings.

Wow, that was just another great piece of writing and I really loved it.. Wish, something like this could happen but then we can always hope, right?

Btw, am so glad to see you here, have also admired your works here and there in other places too..

UV, will surely make her his, by hook or by crook. I liked the fact that you started it from the week after she returns, am sure there will be some fresh scenes to aww upon!

Luv atop

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Priyadarshini Basu

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Posted: 13 years ago

so so so... after some brilliant PH shots we get a Manveer one huh??? wait till I finish reading.. cant wait 😃

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Posted: 13 years ago

awesome part...do continue soon...pm m

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sweetieangel

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Posted: 13 years ago

good start

do pm me when u update

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Yuks

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Posted: 13 years ago

Oh awesome!

Im so glad to finally see something from you (after months of promises)

I loved the line "Uday doesn't share'😆

Am waiting for more. [Please be more efficient than me at updating😉😆]

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burgerchaap

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Posted: 13 years ago

Radz, that was really good! Even though it was awfully short, I quite enjoyed it. And you've 'pinpointed' UV's character so well that it's hard to believe you have only seen a couple of episodes.

I can't wait for more! 😳

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-Zunaira-

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Posted: 13 years ago

A really good start! 👏

It was like I had entered UVs head for a while! lol 😆 U really do seem to understand his character and thoughts very well. I really like how u laid out all the facts too ... seems to convey his tactful and conniving nature.

I also found this link for a Manveer VM on Allah Maaf Kare posted on the forum before -

http:youtube.com/watch?desktop_uri=%2Fwatch%3Fv%3D4akDUqP_jH4%26context%3DC33c5d37ADOEgsToPDskLEjwVWkaTRpubqo7gg-jFo&context=C33c5d37ADOEgsToPDskLEjwVWkaTRpubqo7gg-jFO&v=4akDUqP_jH4&gl=GB

Plz PM me when u update 😊

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Dikshita

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Well very beautiful os dear.. U hav sketched UV's character with perfection.. I liked the line "the fact of the matter was that she had been his since he first laid eyes on her when she was newly born" -- i like this posessiveness of uday.. 😍

plz continue soon and pm me when u update.. 😊

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