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Posted: 13 years ago
at last completed 23 parts...


nice going
like the way maan's is feeling for geet..
from the first part i have a strong feeling that meera and dev are positive characters and loved there cute bhabi and devar relations...
i also felt some health problem for meera but the way you explain with the relation meera and maan sharing is osum...👏

but i feel very poor for meera to my surprise...poor girl who didn't get parents love and not even husbands love now...
she had good friends and all others but she is all alone with out being loved..

what maan did to her is not acceptable he should not have married her if he didn't love her ...idiot he can't object his bro how can one marry for others wish and just using her for having baby

what the hell he is doing with her...just to have his child he is thinking about her not he felt any love and care for her..if am in her position i might have kill him...poor meer she is still bearing him and want him to be happy after her death...


dev an another idiot who can't see his friend and brothers relationship clearly... instead of making them happy he ruined both of there life...

P.S:::you didn't give links for the next parts from 12 and not in 1st page too its very hard for me to search each and every part after that...

but at last i found that and complete reading it...



alover nice story i loved it kalakitenga aanalum enala ida mari selfish maan ah thitama iruka mudiyala he is very selfish he thinks about him and bro and his dadi though out and his upcoming baby cant he see the pain meera is having all through with out getting his love...

why the hell he is calling her meer darling sweet heart and all if he didn' t love idiot loosu rascal i will kill you maan if you hurt that pure soul...



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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: nishha

at last completed 23 parts...


nice going
like the way maan's is feeling for geet..
from the first part i have a strong feeling that meera and dev are positive characters and loved there cute bhabi and devar relations...
i also felt some health problem for meera but the way you explain with the relation meera and maan sharing is osum...👏

but i feel very poor for meera to my surprise...poor girl who didn't get parents love and not even husbands love now...
she had good friends and all others but she is all alone with out being loved..

what maan did to her is not acceptable he should not have married her if he didn't love her ...idiot he can't object his bro how can one marry for others wish and just using her for having baby

what the hell he is doing with her...just to have his child he is thinking about her not he felt any love and care for her..if am in her position i might have kill him...poor meer she is still bearing him and want him to be happy after her death...


dev an another idiot who can't see his friend and brothers relationship clearly... instead of making them happy he ruined both of there life...

P.S:::you didn't give links for the next parts from 12 and not in 1st page too its very hard for me to search each and every part after that...

but at last i found that and complete reading it...



alover nice story i loved it kalakitenga aanalum enala ida mari selfish maan ah thitama iruka mudiyala he is very selfish he thinks about him and bro and his dadi though out and his upcoming baby cant he see the pain meera is having all through with out getting his love...

why the hell he is calling her meer darling sweet heart and all if he didn' t love idiot loosu rascal i will kill you maan if you hurt that pure soul...



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sry nisha...for inconvenience...the next part work was done by poongs..
n i did not work further on it..
n coming 2 ur cmnts..
i love it..it really means a lot to hear straight cmnts..😊
yenna kavuthutta...un cmnts appidi...appada yevvalavu periya cmnt...nanum perisa bathil tharen..😉
haan its truemaan doesnt love meera..
but as a friend he loves her..
when he doesnt know the feel what is love he married meera..
he cant see his friend humilated bcoz of him bfore the college..
n he has always fulfilled devs wishes.
n at that time he too thought devs decision was r8 2 save meer 4m the humilation
n the questions pointing the charectors of both..
n after marriage he was hesitating bcoz he is confused with his feelings..
how 2 treat meera ...as a friend or wife..
meera poor girl..doesnt get parents love..
but dev n maan has given love than she expected as a friend..
so only she is caring so much for maan's happiness even when she knows he doesnt love her
ive said in meeras confession
maan will take hrs to make a decision 4 dadi n dev.but when it comes to him,he picks anything or go with others decision..he never knews what he wants..
n there r repeated lines..meera says.
i knew u maan better than u..
these r 2 make the readers understand maan never has his own wishes..
so he married meera n in relation with meera noe 4 baby..
but he never tried 2 broke the relation..
he is still confused with geets feelings..bcoz he dont know what he wants..
maan is calling meer in lovely names..bcoz he thinks all hubbys calls their wives like that. n wives feel happy hearing it..n he is calling so..so meera may be happy..
dev..haan he is an idiot..but blindly in love with his bro n his frnd meera ..he thought meera will be a perfect match for maan..and made them married..if he knows he will not have done this..poor soul..later,he felt sryna..
dont curse maan yaar...he is not hurting meera intentionally..when he himself is not clear what can he do???
omg nishu...a long answer..i've given u...lol..😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
Really love this.please update
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: valli22

sry nisha...for inconvenience...the next part work was done by poongs..

n i did not work further on it..
n coming 2 ur cmnts..
i love it..it really means a lot to hear straight cmnts..😊
yenna kavuthutta...un cmnts appidi...appada yevvalavu periya cmnt...nanum perisa bathil tharen..😉
haan its truemaan doesnt love meera..
but as a friend he loves her..
when he doesnt know the feel what is love he married meera..
he cant see his friend humilated bcoz of him bfore the college..
n he has always fulfilled devs wishes.
n at that time he too thought devs decision was r8 2 save meer 4m the humilation
n the questions pointing the charectors of both..
n after marriage he was hesitating bcoz he is confused with his feelings..
how 2 treat meera ...as a friend or wife..
meera poor girl..doesnt get parents love..
but dev n maan has given love than she expected as a friend..
so only she is caring so much for maan's happiness even when she knows he doesnt love her
ive said in meeras confession
maan will take hrs to make a decision 4 dadi n dev.but when it comes to him,he picks anything or go with others decision..he never knews what he wants..
n there r repeated lines..meera says.
i knew u maan better than u..
these r 2 make the readers understand maan never has his own wishes..
so he married meera n in relation with meera noe 4 baby..
but he never tried 2 broke the relation..
he is still confused with geets feelings..bcoz he dont know what he wants..
maan is calling meer in lovely names..bcoz he thinks all hubbys calls their wives like that. n wives feel happy hearing it..n he is calling so..so meera may be happy..
dev..haan he is an idiot..but blindly in love with his bro n his frnd meera ..he thought meera will be a perfect match for maan..and made them married..if he knows he will not have done this..poor soul..later,he felt sryna..
dont curse maan yaar...he is not hurting meera intentionally..when he himself is not clear what can he do???
omg nishu...a long answer..i've given u...lol..😆


omg this much long answer naan exams la kuda ipdi detailed answers koduthadu illa..😉😆


am convinced a little.. but even though i feel poor for that meera...😭😭

maan hugging and kissing another girl in front of meera is too much...i know she is going to die so she want to settle every thing for maan but this meera seeing her love is hugging another girl is unbearable..😡
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it might have hurt her a lot to know that maan didn't love her and loving some other girl...that too in front of her eyes she is witnessing and remaining silent😕


don't let meera to confess her illness to maan and geet..😡

who ever proceed this its my wish to see...😈😈

let them suffer for a while...like her.. 😈
bring them close physically that too in conscious and make them feel for a while thinking that they have cheated meera...😈😈😈😈😈

with out knowing meera's plan and her illness they should have to feel inside and it should kill him inside for not giving meera his love as wife which is her right..😡

and make geet feel for that she should not have eyed an married maan first of all...and letting him hug and kiss is not good in her part so make her feel for that for a while..😈😈😈


This maan should have to suffer for this at least once..😈😈
let them suffer too like meera...
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i know you have a better idea to proceed...ITs just my point of view..


romba adhinga prasangi thanama irunda sorry...😃😃😃😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
tht was soo awesome i really love your all 23 partsss pretty plzzz kick out Sasha from maan and geet lifeee add me to your pm list
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Posted: 13 years ago


read all the updates in one go !!!!!
really awsum work valls akka !!
hmm u have asked for suggestion rite...
i want them to know about meeras health condition first !!!
maan and geet are magical couple..
ther love shud not be regreted by loosing der sense !!!!!
this is my opinion !!!
keep rocking with you r
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Posted: 13 years ago
PART-24

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Geet laid on the couch.she could feel her body aching in desire.His single touch always do this to her.he makes her crave for him.last time I concentrated in studies n I took leave.i was away from him.so,it was easy for me to overcome it.but,being here in Km with him under same roof.Will it be possible for me not to think about him. I have started to feel,he too desires me.he too craves for me. but ,this feeling is wrong.he is married. even ,when he doesn't love meera mam,he keeps the relation.he wants 2 move on with her.he wants the marriage life to be successful.

Am I giving him a wrong vibration.i know I love him.but,what he is thinking.He cant love me..it must be some sort of attraction or a lust towards me..

Her heart said..geet,u cant think low of maan sir?how can u say he lusts u ..

Then what should I think of him..i could console my heart saying he lusts me.nothing more than that.if he loves me too,I cant accept it..it will lead a wrong path.he is mams husband.n I want to think like that only.

Fighting with her inner turmoil, when she slept she doesn't know.

The next morning when she wakes up,she saw herself tugged in spread.as per she remembers she didn't take the spread with her before sleeping.she looked at dadimaa.she was still sleeping.unknowingly her mouth whispered maan sir..

He was the one,who tugged her in spread,when he was moving to his gym.he came there to have a look on dadimaa.when he saw geet shivering bcoz of a/c he tugged her in spread.he stood there watching her serine face.she looked like an angel.he has never seen a girl like her..Even meera is beautiful,she didn't have this glow in her face.

'.wait ..maan..u r comparing ur wife with geet' His heart said

Whats happening to me?????How can I?how can I compare my wife 2 another girl.?why I'm always surrounded with geets thoughts?

Why?why?He punched the boxing bag with full force.

Shayad mei meera ko miss karrahi hoon.

He went back to his room n got ready.geet too freshed up n gave dadima her breakfast.maan did not join her in breakfast.he don't want to think about geet again.he had his breakfast in his room.geet came to his room.maan was facing his back.he was talking to meera.

Hello meer.gud morning.

Gud morning maan.how is dadi.

She is better.when are you coming back. i..i'm..im missing u..

Me too maan.she sighed.

Meeras st: I wish u miss me as ur wife. but I know u miss me as a friend,a partner,a co worker n a roommate. u will be feeling lonely ,when dev is also not there.

Meera: maan,I'm on my way.

Maan: that's gud.

Geet left his room. maan sir misses meera mam.so,it means,he loves her.i'm only making his state confusing.he purposely avoided me in dining ,so that he don't face me...hmm'that's gud for both of us. She shrugged her thoughts n went 2 dadi.later maan came there .

Sir,u have an important meeting today.

Postponed it.I don't want to go to office.i'll be here with dadi.he took dadis hands n said lovingly.

Sir,it's a big deal.dev sir or meera mam is also not here.i'll look after dadi.u can attend the meeting n come.

Haan beta.u can go to office.see,I'm also feeling better now.

Maan had no other way ,so,he accepted to go to office. he went to his room n changed to his official clothes. he came to dadis room.he saw meera talking with dadi n geet.maan looked meera with a guilt in his face.she could read his expressions.

Meer.when did u come?

Just now.

She was looking pale n thinner than before.he looked at her.

Meer,ur maasi is only unwellna.looking like u r hospitalized.see urself.what have u done to u.didnt u eat properly.

He asked her in real concern.

Meera st:its true maan.i was in hospital.but,I cant say this to u.

no maan..just lack of sleep..if I take rest,I'll be fine.

Ok.meera .take rest.i have an important meeting will join u later.

Ok maan.geet,I'm here now.so,u can also go to office.

No mam.not today.really mam,as sir said u look very tired.u have got dark blackcircles around ur eyes too.i think u had sleepless nights.u have to take rest.i'll be with dadi.

Daadi too said the same.so,meera went to take rest n maan went to office.later at evening geet went to her house.meera stayed with daadi.

Maan came back from office.he was thinking ,how to apologise to meeraat night,.he waited for her in his room.but,she did not come.he sent in search of her.she was sleeping besides dadi.

She didn't say anything about staying with daadi.i must have hurt her.she was behaving normally to me in morning.but,why didn't she talk to me later.n why she did not say atleast a goodnight to me.he went back to his room n slept thinking how to talk to meera the next day.

Dev came from kolkatta the next morning. he went to daadi. he asked about her health.dadi said geet took care of her in their absence.and she said now she is absolutely fine as before.

Dadi,I admire this girl.in a short period she stole all our hearts .

Haan dev.the family will be lucky where she goes as daughter-in-law.i'm thinking '.

Daadi'before you finish the sentence,I want to say u onething.

What?

About dev n dr.naina's marriage.

Whaaat?what?come again meera..

Meera can say easily,dadi is not against love marriage.the character of the girl n agud person at heart is the qualification she wants in her dil..

Dev was shocked hearing meeras statement.n the other side he was blushing too.daadi saw it.

My buddhu devar is in love with naina.dadi,.if u agree,we will proceed .we will talk to her brother.

Meera.its not fair.if u know it before,u must have said to me earlierna.i've many dreams..

Dadis dream was to make geet her daughter in law..by marrying dev to her.

Meera sensed it.

Oh fo daadi.ur all dreams will come true..u know dev.kitni shy type ki hai.he looks free types outside,but too shy in real. He just cant say a word before his love girl.me n geet made a plan n made him propose her.otherwise,he would not have proceeded.naina achi ladki hai dadi.she will be a gud daughterin law n a gud wife too.no one other than her can take care of this idiot.

Daadi was so happy.maan just entered the room n heared their conversation.n he was also happy to hear,dev atlast proposed her.

Meera,naina is a gud choice.i want only mt grand sons happiness.go n ask panditji n arrange for their engagement n marriage.i want to make it soon.

I too daadi.

meeras st: before my departure,I want everything to be settled.

Congrats dev khurana.atlast u r also going to get married.

b..ro'he shied n hugged maan.

Hai hayi..mera devar kitni sharmathi hai..

Maan u go with meera.

I'll also'dev said in a hurry.but stopped in emberassment.

Ok take him also with u.

But,u will be alone..

I'm fine..nakul haina..he will take care of me.

The trio went to nainas house.her brother accepted it.he knows khuranas familys name n fame.n more over,dev loves naina.the four went to the pandit to fix the date of engagement n marriage.maans phone buzzed.he had an urgent meeting in office.he excused from them n went to office'the date was fixed at the week end will be the engagement n the last week of the next month will be their marriage.

They wished each other.Dev said the gud news to naina.she was also happy.she knew why meera is doing this.naina informed she is on her way to KC with her medical caravan n team.so they will meet there.

meera informed dadi the date n said dev n she are going to office straightly from there.

Maan came to office.he straightly went to the conference hall for meeting.

geet was not there'after the meeting he asked sasha.

Sasha,where is geet.

Geet,..i don't know mk.she doesn't inform anyone.she takes leave as she is granted.she is so irresponsible.she didn't come for the last 2 days too.this middle class girls..must be flirting with some..u know..

least she knew geet was with dadima.

Sasha took the chance to add poison in maans mind.

Maans blood boiled.he cant stand a word against geet.before he outburst his anger,adi informed,

she has took an hour permission..she is not like u sasha.she doesn't take leave unnecessarily.for the last two days she was with some special person.even maan sir knows about her whereabouts.

Sasha looked at maan,whose face was turned red in anger.

Oops..i made a wrong move at wrong time.

N she finishes all her tasks without any mistakes.she is the first employee to be here in week days.she is not a show off girl like others.she manages her job n her studies at sametime.she looks after her sister.she fulfils all her responsibilities scincerely.she doesn't lack in her duties.

He indirectly pointed sasha.n she understood it too.but,she cant split her anger before maan.she hardly tried to control it.

Maan felt happy.adi's way of supporting geet n his choice of words was like inserting a needle in a banana.he looked at sasha .her face is not worthy to watch.he smiled inwardly.

Sasha,I gave you a project work to finish before I went.

Which sir?

Banglore project.is it ready.

Sasha gulped her saliva.

Wo..wo..wo.sir..not yet fully..a little more 2 complete.

I need it in my table in an hour.he said it in a stern tone.

j..ji..sir.

maan went to his cabin.his eyes went insearch of geet to the next cabin.she was there.

But,her face was sad.he has never seen her like this.her puffy red eyes said she has cried a lot.the view pricked his heart.he had an urge of holding her in his embrace n console her.he saw her whipping her tears n starting her work.she moved towards the cupboard .she was searching some files.she held her stomach in one hand n the other in her head.she leaned on the cupboard for support.her eyes shuttering.maan guessed she is fainting.

Maan opened the middle door n went to her.she was slipping on floor.before she hits the ground.he caught her.he carried her in her arms running downwards to the medical van.leaving all the staffs dumpfounded.dev n meera just entered the floor.dev was in shock.he never expected his bro carrying another girl in his arms.he was angry at him..he was about to shout at maan.meera pulled his arms n forcefully took him to his cabin making him confuse.

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Edited by valli22 - 13 years ago
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hope meera says dev that
geet is gud girl and she is not well
so only this happened dear
we cant see dev hate geet dear
pls dont do that dear...
and i think geet ll knew the truth dear
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Posted: 13 years ago
Loved the update...

but u left us in cliff hanger...

and precap... am hell scratching my head... this is not fair valli...

update more parts soon
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nice updateplease do next soon
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