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Posted: 13 years ago
good part. Maan cannot do this. continue soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
šŸ¤”ok i m now very much confuse,, was that maan who raped her??😭😭 was that one person or many more,,, uuurrrggg m scratching my head,, update soon please...
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Posted: 13 years ago
maan raped her and then he let others please pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsmmm update dear...
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Posted: 13 years ago
y did maan do this to geet??

continue soon..

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DEVIL IN ME ...



Nervous??? She wishpered to her….

Yah…. Mishit replied….. never thought kit um aaogi….

Promise kiya tha…. Ana toh tha…… she said as she winked at her twin ….. and hugged her tightly…. But as mishit hugged her… she knew dep down that some thing was wrong… very wrong…. And that geet had changed …. Very mush changed…..

You are all right aren't you???? misthi asked …

Mu thik achi … tu chinta kareni mora …. Samiti bi … you look nervous wreak …. Kana hela ???? hmmm???? (I am fine … don't worry about me ….) she asked raising her brow ….

Huh??? Misthi was surprised that her twin was actually pulling her leg….

Its fine… its fine… no need to tell me anything …. Kya karein jab behan ho gayi hai shiv bhakt …. Toh isme mian kya kar sakti hoon hai naw didi???? She asked to naina ….

Hmm…. kuch nahin kar sakte ….. naina said coming to wards them and embrancing geet tightly…. While meet blushed highly….

Meet … bohat garmi hai naw ???? geet asked…

Meet – huh???

Geet – you are all red naw …

And that caused meet to blush a deeper shade of red and then her sisters burst into a hearty laugh ….. and to ruin their mood a aunt of her came up togeet …

Aunt – itne dino ke baad achanak se yahan aane ki wajah ???

Geet – meri behan ki saadi hai masi …. Main nahin aaungi toh kaun rahega ?????

Aunt – toh itne dino tak toh dikhi nahin … behan hone ka farz toh nahin nibhaya …. Aur ab kyun aayi ho???

Geet – aunty… aunty .. aunty … main kya kar sakti hoon you really have no idea …. Aur baki raha behan ka farz …. I am not responsible for that …. Aapne hint oh kaha tha …. Manglik hoon …. Absaguni hoon …. You know etc… etc…. but behan hoon naw …. Twin …. Ament I papa ????

Mr. pathi – of course ….. you are our daughter …..

Geet - chalo I am happy you remember …. Well I have something for you actually … aapse hin milne toh aayi hoon daddy dearest …..

Mr.pathi – kya hai ????

Geet – de dungi de dungi …. Itni jaldi bhi kya hai??? aapko tohfa bhi de dungi…. Aur hamari thodi si baat bhi ho jaegi…. Itne saalon se thik se baithke baat nahin kiya naw… I guess you can spare me few minutes papa …

Mr.pathi – any thing serious ???

Geet – hmm… it is actually serious but it can wait till you are free… par try kariye ki aaj hum baat kar sake ….

Mr.pathi – fine … teen ghante mian mujhe jana haiwahin jane ke waqt baar kar lenge…

Geet – yes sir!!!! She said in a attention manner …..

Naina – chal geet … lets have some fun with her….

Geet – sure dd ….

Meet – please mujhe risk nahin lena ……

Geet – kaisa yeh ishq hai …. Ajaab sa risk hai ….. she saing as she and naina held meet and took her to the room and threw her in the bath tub …..

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The house was even more roaring with laugh… but meet knew that geet had changed drastically… some thing had happened and she was trying very hard to cover it….

All were silent when they saw geet was standing out when mr.pathi walked out …. She opened the passanger seat for her father …

Mr.pathi – mere gadi main chalet hain …

Geet - ok!!!! She closed the door and locked her car and walked to his car with a folder in her hand and took the keys from the driver and opened the passanger seat for her father and sat in the driver seat and drove away ….

All were stunned … they knew that this father- daughter duo never got along well… only for naina and meet else there would be no relation between them … they just prayed that they return safe …..

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So you returned geet …. I will come to meet you now….. maan said as he knew that geet had come for her twin's marriage and got ready with his family to go there …..

Bohat intezaar karwaya hai tumne mujhe …. Ab jo aaye ho… jaane nahin dunga….

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The car entered the mansion after 1 hour …. Mr.pathi came out of the car and went back inside the mansion … he was looking happy …… after parking the car geet came out …. But she was looking…… nothing …. No epression on her face….. absolutely blank…. As she came out nupur came to her…

Geet – itni der kyun laga di aane mian???

Nupur – we are fine!! Bas sir se baat kar rahe the ….

Geet – where are amy and ridz ???

Mayank - they are waiting for us there …. Yahan aana unhe pasand nahin aaya ….

Geet – hmm… I know they are disgusted by my family even more than I am … anyways … 1 hour main barat aa jaegi … 3 hours main saadi khatam …. By 6 we will leave delhi …

Nupur - exceelent …. By the way …. Mr.pathi se baat hui ???

Geet – hmm.. we will talk about it later … chalo main tumhe meet se milwati hoon ….

As they were about to go some one said …

Wont even look at me ????

She looked back to see arjun standing there with his family … she smiled at arjun and went to him when arjun hugged her … she just kept a hand in his shoulder rather than returning his embrance … arjun understood it and backed away instantly … he looked to her face and for the first ime was shocked because the usual warmt in her eyes and gestures were missing ….

Arjun – what happened ???

Geet – nothing….. nupur… mayank .. yeh hai DCP arjun singh khurana … Mumbai main mera co-worker tha aur friend bhi … and arjun they are nupur and mayank .. mere dost ….

Arjun – hi … par tut hi kahan itne din ??? na koi khabar… na kuch we all were worried ….

Geet – really ???? you know agar main vairabi pathi nahin hoti toh sayad tere baton pe trust kar deti …. Anyways tu delhi main sab kaise chal raha hai???

Arjun – hmm… par tu Mumbai main nahin thi …. Suna hai tera transfer hogaya hai….

Geet – hmm… ho gaya hai… home town .. aur baki sab

Arjun – sab theek …. Maan bhai bhi goa mian the kuch dino ke liye … tune unhe dekha …

Geet – nahin… she said in a bored manner …. Excuse us arjun … I have to go ….

And after that she went up to her room with mayank and nupur without even waiting for his answer and looking once at maan …..

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The barat had come and the marriage had started … people were asking for the bride …. And just then meet came down with geet and naina …

geet -


meet -

All were stunned to see the twins desending down …. The bride was gorgeous and there wasn't a doubt in it …. With jweleries and the heavy red lehenga and the pink shade to her cheeks she was looking pure angel and was gorgeous …. And then the DCP…. No one could believ that she was the same DCP who was seen only in formals or uniform … she was wearing a very beautiful

As they came down geet and naina sat meet near shiv and said …

Muh toh band karo uncle …..

And went to stand near naina and sanjay ….

Maan was stunned to see her …. He had never seen such a serene beauty as her … and some where felt proud that she was his… only his….. but he was also angry on her…. He knew when she had ran away…. He was maan singh khurana after all…. And he knew what every one did … while geet was his wife!!!

He walked to her and stood just behind her and said …

Remember…. How it was for us in our marriage ??? how will yo u… I had drugged you… but don't worry wifey… I will make sure that we marry again and you experience every thing that a bride should … and this time I wont allow you to run away from our first night …..

Oh yah!!! And this time how many men you have thought to bring after you would f**k me??? Last time it was 4 right??? So why not 6 the next time ….Geet said as she looked up to se him stunned at her lines….Well I have even better idea … you know the marriage regisdtration papers were fake.. so why don't you visit casinos every day … you will get to f**k many girls there… well its not that you are some ek-patni –vrat mard…. Go on and marry any number of girls you like and then with your friend group sleep with her…. Believ me that girl wont run on your first night.. second night or even the following nights or days or when ever and where ever you want….. and I promise I wont say anything to you….

Maan was stunned for a while listening to her… he had never thought that she would react like this…. And that too with a straight face …..

Arjun – kya baatein h orahi hai bhai aur tumhare beech ….

Geet – kuch khas nahin arjun … bas high society business class aristrocates ….

Arjun – geet this is offending… I too belong to a high society business class family……

Geet – are you an obsessed high society aristrocrat ?? if no then I see no ways it will offend you …. Her voice . her confidence and her edgeness stunned him and other too ….

Arjun – what happened .. you are acting weried since you have come …

Geet - am I that predictable ??? anyways I have grown tierd of all nuisesnce relation and the responsibilities that have been stuffed on me….

Arjun – geet ….

Geet – mujhe pata hai tum kya kehna cahte ho arjun … but believ me I have no intrest in it…

Mayank – geet ….

Geet – hmm….

Mayank – unka phone aaya tha … we need to leave now… meet ki saadi ho gayi hai…bidaai bhi ho jaegi ….. aur whoh tujhe yahan jyada der rehne ki izazat nahin denge…..

Geet – take out the car … I will be there in 2 minutes …..

Geet went near her sisters and bid them good bye …..

Meet – par geet tu abh itoh aayi hai…

Geet – mian sirf 8 ghante ke liye delhi aayi thi meet… and now I have to leave ….

Naina – kamse kam iske reception tak toh ruk ja ….

Geet – reception mian kya karna hai … wahi stupid si party.. drinks.. dance … people …. Yak!!! I hate parties….

Meet – geet .. tu ruk rahi hai…. its my order …

Geet – don't force me meet … you had called and I came here… tu janti hai … I am irked by every damn party and function and this one marriage function doesn't settles with me and I never attend them ….

Meet – are you telling me that you are not coming tomorrow….

Well I am sure she will come tomorrow … I have a gift for her …. Mr pathi came from behind and looked at geet …. All were surprisd to hear it from him ….

I surely will papa ….

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The whole pathi family and all the IPS , IAS and many high profile business tycoons and military persons were present there… but media was far away from them ….

And just then geet entered the hall … she didn't even care to look at others … and they walked to meet ….

geet's saree


For you … she said as she presented her a very expensive diamond and platinum set which was a limited piece….

Meet – god!!! Geet … it was costly ….. its limited ….

Geet – you wanted it meet … are you happy????

Meet – I am but….

Geet – then no more words……

She took a drink from the waiter and sipped it…. Papa… I am leaving in 30 minutes so dad tell your guests to come fast so that I can finish and go….

They will be coming bte…. Her father said….

She knew the truth and the reason why her father hated her and loved meet to the core… and he started to be friendly with her means DANGER!!!!

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It was almost after 20 minutes that the hall turned totally silent .. she turned back to the entrance to see the man she hated the most… rudr singhania …. The most wanted criminal …. With his whole family and his friends ….

All the officers had their eyes on him but couldn't do much because he never left any evidence that could be traced to him…. And also he was the most famous business tycoon of india and abroad …. But what he did shocked her .. he went and hugged maan …..

And her anger grew inside her…. She hated both of them…. As she saw both the persons she hated the most in a hug….. and it striked her that singhania's and khuranas were business partners….

And as expected rudr came upto meet and congratulated her and presented him anathor limited diamond piece …..

Geet – I will take my leave meet….

She said as she started to go as she did nt trust her anger and her actions….

Wont you meet me geet???? Well so much for meeting a old friend???? Rudr said to provoke her ….

I would have met you rudr… but you know I don't have time for gossiping or a chit-chat …. I have works to complete …. She said turning back to him with a light and tight smile…

Rudr - Oh my god!!! DCP vairabi pathi …. Don't you have your revolver with you to kill me????

Geet – rudr.. rudr.. rudr… you have grown old… you and me both know I don't need revolver to KILL some one …. I am wearing a saree and gun in a saree is not a good idea….

Rudr – by the way geet… I am sorry for the goa incident you know…. He said smirking evily …

Geet – are you sorry that it happened or you are sorry because you didn't do it….

She asked him…both rudr and maan had their faces red with anger while others were confused as to about what they were speking but the raging war was felt by all….

Rudr – I don't approve it.. and 18 years with me must have realized you that ….

Geet – yah!! 18 years of ENIMITY… rudr singhania!!!! Rudr you are invited here as a guest … so enjoy it … don't dig too uch of past…

Rudr – by the way pathi … all your siblings have married and when are you geeting married???? He asked changing the topic…

Geet – when I will realize that all the problems in y llife have gone sort and I am in need of suiciding attempt then I will decide to get married… don't worry I will send you my marriage card …. She said as she walked …

Rudr – I know why you are not marrying to any one geet…. Its because of him isn't it ????

Geet stopped in her track and turned to look at him ….

Rudr – I know … I know everything …. Like you never look at any other guy… never so near any other man because you are commited to him isn't it ?????

When geet didn't answer anything he continued….

You know I always wondered … 18 years… 16 years of our enimity and your love story …. And 21 years of your separation from your family …. You were 5 years old … I still remember that day…. Your father had come to leave you in the army hostel… you pleaeded him so much to take you with him… but he just went away…

But after so much you are still standing here??? In the marriage of your twin ??? you still are risking your life for them ??? well what will happen if I will kill them???

Geet – go on rudr… kill them… I wont say anything ….she waled towards him and took out a gun from his coat pocket and give him his gun…. Shoot them … I wont come in between ever ….

Rudr – I know you geet.. killing your famiy wont effect you …. But you know we have many ways to kill a man … but killing him will ….

And there was an unexpected reaction from geet.. in the next instant she was standing in front of him…… you wont do anything to him rudr…… she said gritting her teeth…..

Rudr – OMG!!!! You still love him…. He IS your weakness!!! For years we have been finding your weakness.. your sister… your family… your life…your job.. your character … you care about nothing… but that man ???

DCP pathi… encounter speacialist … tigress of Indian police … emotionless girl …. Who doest cares about anything ..is actually afraid and acts weriedly for a man????

Tell me pathi .. what is in that man that you even disgarded me for him??? It has been so many years I have asked you to marry me but no… you don't …. Why ?????

He came very near to her and their faces were very close but it in a no way romantic….. and his voice held anger ….

If its for him… if till he is alive you wont marry anyone … then it leaves me with no other option than to kill him… take him out from your life so that you can be mine……

Geet – you really think that even if you kill him I will come to you rudr???? Her voice was quiet calm .. and so icy that it would even make a devil shutter ….. she went and quietly sat on a table and picked up a drink to take a sip…. Rudr.. rudr.. rudr… sometimes you make e wonder that are you really rudr singhania ??? and your stupidity is the reason I don't like you…

Rudr – it means that you do love him don't you… and he is your weakness …..

And just then mayankand nupur entered the hall…

Mayank – what the hell geet …. We are getting late…. And then he turned to see the man standing in front of geet …. Rudr ????

Rudr – so my old enemies too remember me … well where are the other two of this deadly group????

Mayank – what are you doing here????

Mr.pathi has invited him and his family and his friends mayank….. geet answered instead …. Andyou know we were having some chit-chat before I leave delhi …. So why don't you watch and enjoy as all are doing …..

Nupur - why are you even talking with this leech … shot his brains …. The world will get rid of a leech …

Rudr – you know nupur did I tell you what we were talking now???? I was telling your friend that I will kill her love … you know he is her weakness …. And of course you know who is he doesn't you ????

Nupur and mayank looked thunder stuck…..

Geet – of course they know him rudr …. She said while she sat there more comfortably … and did I ever deny that I DID NOT love him???? Its just that you did not ask me…. And you are right … he IS my weakness…. So now what are you going to do????? She asked in a challenging manner with a light smile….

Rudr - do you know that by just now confessing the fact.. you have ade it easy for me to break you down???? It just takes me to kill him…

Geet – you are such a fool rudr…. She laughed a strained laugh …. I am vairabi… vairabi pathi….. and you thin its so easy to kill the person I love and I will be sitting and watching the drama???? When you couldn't touch the pathi's even when I am not with them nor do I care for them … you think its so easy ti kill the person with whom I live 24 hours ?????

She asked raising en eyebrow…. And then she got up and started walking towards him…

every time you will try to harm him you will find me standing in front of him …. I don't care about your people … I can kill them in any way I want and believ me I will receive medals for it…. And for you… I am waiting for the day to come when it will be just you and me…..

rudr – then it will be either you or me….

Geet – naw… it will either both or none …. I wont die until I take you down with me and as much as I know you.. you wont let me live with out you hovering around my head ….

The only reason I am not shooting you now is that we have no proofs against you and I am not handeling the case an dfrankly I have no time to waste behind you….

By that tie her eyes were red and were spitting fire……

We have a very professional enimity .. don't take it to personal level…..

Rudr – if you think that I will allow you live happily then forget it …. For you it might be professional but for me its not…. You know every thing is fare in love and war……

Geet – do that rudr and you will release the devil in me that I have caged it with much difficulty …. My harshness… my emotionlessness and all the qualities are not even a little of what I actually am…. So before you try to release the devil .. be prepared to face the result ….. she said clenching her teeths……and then again she smiled a little an dlaughed….

You know I don't care nor think about the result… so think before you take any step rudr…

Anyways I gotta go …. Bbye … and see you soon …..

She said as she walked out of the hall only to be followed by her trail of blood which they realized that was from her hand because in her anger she had broken the glass that she wsa drinking from and clutched it tightly in her hand……

Precape

The other man ..part 2… and what did she talk with her father????


hey frinds ...

i hope you all will like this part... from this time on there will be a major change in the story and to say the acctual story will begin...

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Posted: 13 years ago
Ossum part dear
loved it
why ur all stories have past dear
waiting dear
for the next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
awsem update do next soon

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