Tum Mere Ho (RTMC FF) Part69 on Pg153 - Page 85

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Posted: 13 years ago
nice one dear😊...

but we r already confused about this sameera-deepak thing & u added one more mystery of death of nandini's father😍...hmmm...r these two stories connected to each other?...lets see...

poor nandini😭...feeling bad for her...but this amar seems to be friend of prithvi...hope he will be a positive character & will help PriNi...

u r doing great job at keeping suspense in the story dear👏...plz plz update soon...& new siggy is superb dear...
Edited by sanyogitaprc - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nyc update
now what is this kapoor mystery is about
hope everything goes fine with prithvi n Nandini
update soon
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Posted: 13 years ago
great ff cont soon n plzzz pm me on d next part
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Posted: 13 years ago
Part 52


Prithvi "Nandini come, why are you walking so slow...are you alright???"

Nandini nodded and smiled...

Prithvi "this is Amar...or I must say CID inspector Amar Verma and Amar this is my wife Nandini"

Amar smiled "Prithvi, you haven't given complete introduction to my Sister in law...well I am Prithvi's school friend...we were very close, I tried to find him after school but then I went out of India...when I came back I went for my training, i read lots about him in Time magazine and now I found him here just because of you...i must thank you"

Nandini smiled forcefully "thank me...for what???"

Amar "oh I am so sorry Bhabhi (Sister-in-law) I forgot to tell I came to meet you regarding one of the case..."

Nandini "meet me..." she got scared...he was from CID and must have found out about the murder she thought and started sweating...

Prithvi looked at Nandini "Nandini come ….sit here..." while holding her hand...

Amar "Bhabhi...i know this news will not be good for you but I have to inform you..."

Nandini looked elsewhere...she couldn't look at Prithvi and Amar...she was getting tensed by every passing second...her hands and feet were cold.

Amar continued "Rai Bahadur Pradeep Kapoor was your Father who died in an accident twenty years back...you were too young that time. This file was closed some years ago but now it reopened again and came to crime investigation department...Bhabhi you were living with Vinod Mehra who was your Father's manager, but he wanted all the property and for that reason he raised you like his own daughter, but he knew when you will turn eighteen you will be sole responsible for the entire property...so he made some papers in which he stated that Nandini is giving full authorization of her entire estate to Vinod. And you signed those papers...but there was one more will made by your Father before he died that Vinod wasn't aware, it was that Pradeep Kapoor's entire property belongs to his only daughter Nandini but if something happens to Nandini then Pradeep's step brother will be the owner of his empire.

The papers that Vinod had were automatically false and unacceptable. Even after his efforts he didn't get anything. You are still the owner of your Father's empire."

Nandini looked shockingly at Amar...she stood up...she couldn't think anything...her body was getting more weak...she fainted...

Prithvi immediately hold her "Nandini...are you alright???" he lifted her in his arms...and carried towards the room...he helped her lay on the bed...then immediately called the doctor...

in the meantime...

Amar "i think I should leave now...i will come later...i still have to ask Bhabhi something...but I don't think she's in a state to tell anything now..."

Prithvi "i don't understand what is happening to her...whenever she's fine I will let you know...is there anything serious???"

Amar "yes Prithvi...just inform me when Bhabhi is absolutely alright"

Prithvi "sure...thanks Amar"

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After some time...

Dr Arvind "Prithvi I can see Nandini is getting very weak...isn't she eating well??..."

Prithvi "i am not always with her Arvind...but I will make sure she eats on time"

Dr Arvind "it seems she's suffering from some trauma...her heart is very weak and any serious situation, bad news can upset her more. So you have to make sure she's always happy...she shouldn't suffer at any cost...otherwise her heart can fail anytime..."

Prithvi "nothing will happen to her...i will definitely make sure she's always happy and away from all worries...thanks Arvind"

Dr Arvind "that's alright Prithvi...but if anything serious happens just call me"


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Prithvi entered the room after Arvind left...he looked at Nandini and smiled...

Prithvi "now get off the bed...i can't see you lying on the bed all the time"

Nandini "but I am not well..."

Prithvi "you are very well...now get up we are going out..."

Nandini "but..."

Prithvi "leave that...i will take out your clothes...now quickly get ready..."

Nandini smiled...



After some time...

Nandini and Prithvi were holding hands and walking in the garden...

Nandini "wow...wait Prithvi...i want to have that... "she pointed towards a baraf ka gola (juicy ice candy)...

Prithvi "what??? that...hmmm alright..."

they walked towards and asked for one baraf ka gola...

Nandini "you won't have"

Prithvi smiled "i will share with you"

Nandini "i won't...better buy one for yourself"

Nandini started licking and sucking the baraf ka gola... Prithvi came near her...

Nandini moved back ….

Prithvi "i too want to taste it..."

Nandini "no ..." she smiled and moved backwards towards...there was no space to move... her back was touching the tree...and Prithvi was coming more near...

Prithvi "how will you escape now??"

Nandini "hmmm...let me think..." she tried to move side ways but Prithvi curled his arms around her waist...

Prithvi came more closer...very near to her lips...he stroked her lips with his thumb...he came near to kiss but Nandini put her ice candy in between her and Prithvi's lips...

Prithvi sucked the candy and she laughed...

Prithvi smiled "well its juicy but less than your lips..."

Nandini embarrassingly looked elsewhere...

Prithvi came near and both were having the candy...it came to an end...when Prithvi caressed her cheeks and rubbed his fingers in her beautiful long hair...

Nandini smiled with red lips... Prithvi came nearer to her lips "i have the most expensive and luscious candy in the world" he kissed her lips gently...she closed her eyes and got lost in him...he sucked her lips and caressed her breasts gently...

Nandini pulled back "not here...its a public place."

Prithvi "really, i didn't thought of that"...he gazed into her eyes "lets go in a private place then"...


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Posted: 13 years ago
superb dear
loved it
feel 4 nandini
hope things get better
cont soon
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
awesome update...👏
poor nandu...because of all that happen she is suffering a lot...she is getting weak...😭
n amar...he want's to tell something serious...n what he want's to ask nandu...?...😕
prithvi is such a loving n caring husband...😳
loved that ice candy scene...😳
public to private place...😆
update soon...
luv u...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update loved it especially the gola vala scene!!!!!
Thnx for the pm dear!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
Man PRITHVI is really crazy...?
park scene was too cute😉.
i loved it.


Prithvi came nearer to her lips "i have the most expensive and luscious candy in the world" he kissed her lips gently...😳....u NAUGHTY BOY.

WAITING FOR NEXT.



Edited by sweetsanyo - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
sorry 4 late comment ,just catched up on the 3 parts
firstly wow wat twists
i m sure deepak is not dead
i think it is deepak n sammeera plan to send nandu to jail or make her suffer of guilt so she might die. then takeover the property
but i m not worried prithvi is there 4 her
love gola scene

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Posted: 13 years ago
lovely update
the last part was romantic 1 n i luvd it the most
update soon

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