Tum Mere Ho (RTMC FF) Part69 on Pg153 - Page 83

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: anumeha_rajat

wowww nice twist di..

but im feeling there is something fishy...

deepak n sameera r playing give her...

or r planing to show her mentally unsound..

but 100% sure...something is fishy..

hope she tell prithvi...n he understand her..

thnx for the pm...

Hi Sweetie...thank you so much for your lovely comments...i am sure you will enjoy the story further... 😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
Thanks dear😊
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetshera

so sorry fr la8

cudnt cum onli9 b4
All the 4 updates r awesome
luvd PriNan's romantic moments
Oh no! This Deepak is such a jerk!
Another twist! I hope Prithvi supports Nandini when he cums 2 know the cause of the accidental death of Deepak
update soon

Thanks sweetheart... i am glad you are liking the story...lets see how it takes its move further...😃
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: ananyashera

omg😲...what was that??...

poor nandini😭...she is so innocent...how will she be able to hide it from prithvi?...i want her to tell the truth to him...otherwise there will be problem b/w PriNi due to this😭...

but i am suspicious about this sameera😕...it seems she was totally cool...any normal person will be totally horrified in this situation...but the way she decided what to do immediately & without getting really scared...it was shocking...

looks like u r having lots of twists in store for us😍...waiting for next part eagerly...do update when u will feel fine & take care dear😊...

Thanks a lot for your sweeth comments and thanks for concerning ...i am much better now...will try and update today...😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome part dear
Loved it
What a twist
i have a feeling that sameera and Deepak are playing games
for sure
Deepak is not dead
well upadate soon
will b waiting
thnx 4 da pm
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Posted: 13 years ago
thanks for updates n pms
sorry for late comment
so atlast our prini tied in wedding not inspite of that sanjay
and prithvi teached very good lesson to him
loved all description of wedding
loved siggy of wedding n lines in that
all romantic prini scenes r hot n beautiful
prithvi is very much passionate abt nandu
but now wht abt this deepak
n sameera ? y she is so much friednly with deepak?
hmmm so nandu want to buy more dresses
n whts this our couple will not get peace in their life
again problem in their life
but i think sameera n deepak playing game with our innocent nandu
nandu should tell this to prithvi as she done before in case of sanjay
i know she couldn't leave not sharing with him only thing is sameera stopped her
waiting for next update egarly


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Posted: 13 years ago
Great ff!!!!!!
fab!!!
plzzz update soon!!!!!!!!!
read all the parts in 1 night!!!!!!
plzzz let me know wen it is updated!!!
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Posted: 13 years ago
hey post the next part soon plzz...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Part 51

Nandini came downstairs and again she looked at the floor where she cleaned the blood from...soon she closed her eyes and then glanced elsewhere.

Sameera "Nandini come...why are you standing there?"

Nandini approached the table and the food...she didn't wanted to have a bite... "i don't feel hungry and I don't feel like staying in this place anymore."

One of the servants talking to the gourd "did you see a big box that was lying outside??"

Gourd "yes I saw it...but where has it gone??"

Nandini overheard and trembled...she knew it was the same box in which she had put her uncle's dead body...she started sweating and went back to her room.

Sameera asked the servants to leave...


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Delhi...

Daya "Sir, everything is alright ...if you wish to go back now I can arrange for you"

Prithvi "yes sure...i will leave soon but I am still worried for that worker...he is hurt badly..."

Daya "Sir we have police investigations going on with this worker."

Prithvi "right... Daya I think I should leave now" while looking at his watch.

Daya picked up the bag and opened the door of his car...soon Prithvi left for farmhouse.

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Late night

Nandini was lying on the bed and moving uncomfortably...she was dreaming of the incident that happened with her... "why did you kill him...you are a murderer...how could you shoot at him...why did you hide this truth from everyone...why" .She saw Deepak's eyes starring at her, she came out of her dream and rushed downstairs shouting "Sameera...Sameera" when she collided with Prithvi...

Prithvi "Nandini...what happen...???"

Nandini "oh Prithvi '.when did you come???"she said almost out of breath...sweating...unable to swallow...

Prithvi "why are you so scared...is everything alright??"

Nandini didn't looked into his eyes... "oh...yes yes...i was having a bad dream and when I woke up I came running down and didn't see you...i am fine"

Prithvi "oh...its alright...now I am here, you won't have any bad dreams..." he took her upstairs...

After some time...

Nandini opened her eyes and saw Prithvi sleeping next to her...it was still dark outside...she got up and looked outside the window...she seemed blanched while looking in the dark...

she turned her face and closed the window... then went towards Prithvi and slept next to him while holding his hand.

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Next morning...

Sameera "i know Prithvi, but I think I need to go..."

Prithvi "alright, we will reach Delhi today then you can submit your work...but you should have remembered it before coming here."

Nandini "what happened??"

Sameera "nothing Nandini, we are planning to go back today...actually I have some work to be submitted to my university in Australia...and the work is in Delhi"

Nandini "ok"

Prithvi "Nandini you seem pale...are you not eating well??"

Nandini "oh...no no I am fine...its just a minor thing...i was little unwell last night...but I am fine now"

Prithvi "you will be fine once we reach back"

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Few hours later...

Renuka "but why did you come so early??"

Prithvi "mom now just forget it...i am tired of traveling here and there...now let me sleep...i will talk to you later"

Renuka kept the phone but she was surprised at how things were going on...

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Crime Branch office...Mumbai...

Yadav "well Amar this case isn't that simple...now when you know this little clue, I suggest you to move ahead and find out the solution..."

Amar "yes Sir...i was studying this case a little more"

Yadav "i think you are a CID officer ..and you are enough intelligent to study this case by now...look Amar this is a twenty year old case...this went into files and after rotating around for years this case has come to CID...i don't want it to still lie under tables...now go and I want the results soon."

Amar "yes sir..." he left the room...



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Morning Next Day...


Door bell rang...

Daya opened the door...

Amar "can I talk to Nandini please..."

Prithvi turned around to look... "Amar?"

Amar "Prithvi!!!! I can't believe its you...how are you??"he came running towards Prithvi...

Prithvi "good man...whats up with you??"

Amar "i am CID inspector Amar Verma..."smiled at him...

Prithvi "good to see you Mr Amar Verma...so you came to visit me"

Amar "thats my good luck that I am meeting you today...heard lots about you in the paper...happy to see you as a successful businessman..."

Prithvi "so how can I help you?"

Amar "nothing much Prithvi...i came for one case...i wanted to see Nandini Kapoor"

Prithvi "Nandini Kapoor???? well my wife's name is Nandini but she was Mehra and now she's Singh...i don't know about Nandini Kapoor???"

Amar "oh ok long story Prithvi...we found out that Nandini Kapoor resides here now...anyway can I please talk to her"

Prithvi "sure..." he asked the servant to call her... "but will you elaborate the whole thing..."

Amar "Nandini is the only daughter of Pradeep Kapoor...you must have heard about him...he was the owner of Kapoor estate and empire...but he died in an accident twenty years back...this file was closed but now it came to our investigation department...we found out about his missing daughter Nandini and came to your house...Prithvi we first have to meet Nandini and then see how our investigation goes on..."

Prithvi surprisingly looked at Nandini while she came downstairs...



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Edited by Freethinker - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
amazing
loved it
superb dear
poor nandu, cant get peace
cont soon dear
thnx 4 da pm

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