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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

haha yeah..I guess now I know what you guys went thru during he weekend😆😆😆

yup dear now i hope u wont repeat it with us and make our weekend like this any more
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

😆 Purvi there is no resemblance btw my boss and msk 😆
Yaar agar cute hota toh mein kehti
magar yeah chali saal ka hai lol
aur haan he is married aur ek baache ka baap hai
kyun mera chakar chilna hai uske saath kiya?😆😆😆


haha...poor you...😆

i was just kiddin😆 still his actions reminded me of those cute ofiice scenes of maneet😍
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: payalpari

i am fine dear yaa today no one came even frankie was not here in the afternoon also i was so bored with no one around and no update


ooh yaa...today even i couldnt come to if much...now am leaving too...will c ya latr
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

hi guys

me here
koi hai?

hi dear howz u ?
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape


ooh yaa...today even i couldnt come to if much...now am leaving too...will c ya latr

bye dear cya 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
congratzzz on new thread ...
awesome parts...
loved it...
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: mrs.msk

hey meena
am here
payal is here
and purvi somewhat
how are you?😆😆

hey simi
im good
how r u😉
@purvi hi how r u?
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Posted: 13 years ago
hi kiddo im good n u
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: meena..

hi kiddo im good n u

i am good dear 😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
Hey guys,

Okay here is my update for today...guys 104 pages in less then a week..wow am really shocked and happy to see how much you guys love this shetan and fan fic...

Thanks guys!!!!!
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😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 63

Geet sat on the desk staring at the blank piece of paper in front of her. She was thinking of her answer..should she say yes OR no...If yes, will he really be a changed person as he promised? OR he will be a shetan like he is right now after she says no...she puts the pen down after not being able to come with an answer..she goes to the bathroom to relax...her mind and soul was with Maan.

Today, he gave her power to decide what she wants but then why can't she decide on the correct answer?
Why is it so hard?
Has she really become this dependent on him to decide everything for her?

She sits in the bathtub filled with warm water...she pats her stomach as she closes her eyes..she could feel Maan's hand on her...gently rubbing her belly...she opens her eyes but found no Maan..she leans back on the bathroom...as soon as she closes her eyes she could see Maan...smiling, kissing her belly, his pained face...tears flow down her eyes and opens her eyes as she remembers Dev...

she protectively puts her hand on her stomach as if he was here...she quickly gets out of the bathroom to get ready. She looks at the paper again..she sits on the desk looking at it yet again...She picks up the pen and writes her answer..right after she slips it down the door..she could make out from the shadows that he was pacing back and fourth waiting for his answer...

He ruined his own relationship with his own hands, his ego, his revenge, his past got the best of him. They made him blind, not allowing him to see what he really has..what he needs...Now, no more...now Geet and the baby will be his first priority..he will try to give her happiness that she deserves...It had been a very restless night for him..all night he kept looking at her closed door knowing very well she is crying but yet he can't do anything about it.

He couldn't go there and give her a hug or console her telling her everything will be okay when the truth is...its far from okay. In the middle of the night, when he knew she would be sleeping, he sneaked into the room to place the letter...it had pained him to see her tear streaked face...even when she was sleeping pain and worry was evident on her face...

he made a motion to touch her, to sooth her but couldn't...he quietly left as he came and waited for the morning to arrive...he sat on the chair in the living room, in darkness just awaiting for the sun to rise...As each minute, seconds and hours went by the more nervous and fearful he got.

What if she says no?
What if she doesn't want to talk to be friends with him?
What will he do?
How can I face her?

The sun was finally up but still he couldn't rest...He even made breakfast for her at 6 in the morning but threw it out since it was too early in the morning..he knew that she liked Indian food more then continental food so he prepared daal chawal for her using a recipe book...he just hoped that she will like it...

Now, he just paced back and fourth looking at the bottom of the door for her answer...he had prepared himself the whole night to accept whatever her decision might be...he looks at the time it was 10am and still no sign or answer from her..he kept himself away from the door so that he doesn't go and check up on her...he had promised himself to keep distance no matter how hard it might be...

15 minutes passed by, he was still pacing but stopped when he saw a slip from under the door..he stared at it for couple of minutes blinking his eyes couple of time to make sure what he saw was real...

Slowly, very slowly, he walked toward the door to pick up the slip..his hands were shaking and his heart was racing for the answer...he slowly opens the letter...

Dear Maan,

I don't know what to do or expect anymore...no matter how hard I try I can't forget what happened to me or what could've happened to our baby...our lives were put in danger..what was our fault in this revenge game of yours? I do want to forget the past, forget what happened but I can't...I don't blame you..I blame myself more for not being able to fight...(his heart pains reading that line...it was suppose to be him fighting for her...)

I wish I could rewind the clock too and start all over again but we can't..that is part of life...but I do know that maybe this shetan is ready to become insaan...maybe you are willing to change for me and the baby. I can't really imagine my life without you either and I don't know where we stand at this point in our relationship but I do need my answers...I need to find out for myself as well...So the answer to your question is YES! I will become friends with you...

Maan looks at the letter again and again...he heard the door open...Geet stood there looking at him...Maan smiles at her fighting back his tears...

"thanks Geet..." (both stayed quiet for few minutes not knowing what to do...this friendship was new to him but he will try as he promised...) "uhh breakfast...are you hungry?"

Geet nodes her head and quietly follows him to the kitchen...the whole time she was looking at him..his expression to see if he really has changed..maybe there is hope...maybe she will get the results she hopes...she sat on the chair while Maan served her..she saw it was her favorite daal chawal...

"uuhh I made it..so I uhh hope you'll like it..." Maan stood against the kitchen counter away from her and the table as he watched her taking a spoon full of daal and chawal...before she could put it in her mouth she looks at Maan...both stared at each other...not knowing what to say to fill the weird and awkward moment between them...

I know this is another short update but guys am still not yet fully over after what happened...I will get myself back together after today..so sorry once again...

Ohh..will i be pushing it if I ask you guys to close this thread?😆

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