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zooombie

@zooombie

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Posted: 14 years ago

#11

Hi Archana da os is beautiful...in a short amt of time u introduced us wit deir whole love story n life...u also brought da cottage scene similar to kitni_it was wonderful...n wow she wears his clothes when she misses him n he loves it when she wear them...the ending was superb..he surprises her n finally their judai end ~~ I'm new in IF pls pm me when u update ur ffs😊

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arta

@arta

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Posted: 14 years ago

#12

GREAT OS
At first you scared me i was thinking that they were apart or he was no more and arohi was remembering her past...
but then the last paragraph brought a smile on me ,all is well ,all is well😃
Well written and i super enjoyed reading it.

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arjuhi_kmh

@arjuhi_kmh

Voyager

Posted: 14 years ago

#13

OMG what a lovely FF just loved it archie!

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Fatima

@KaranKundra4Eva

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#14

Awweeeh! I love that!!! <3

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Mahi-Mahak

@AAKMH2

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 14 years ago

#15

romantic ! ! ! . . . love it.

ye chilli january aur ye tanhai . .

amazngly written . . . love da rainy start of beautful journey

aww. . . she wore his clothes, wht a perfct timing of arjun entry

love it. .one of my favourite

keep writng . .best of luck 4 ur exams

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Archana

@mysticlover

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#16

tnk u guys for liking it!🤗

i am so lazy that i am thanking evry1 in one post! frm next time i will try 2 be not lazy! bt no guarantee! 😆

and arta there z no way i wud let arjun arohi be apart even if they are i will reunite them soon enough! nd arjun dead!😲 no way! i will die writing dat!

nd guys 1 thing i found out while writing! i do my best wen i am angry or super sad! my brain works faster then! tested nd proved! this os, as u guys say is gud, is a proof!😆😉

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Arjuhi_kk

@Arjuhi_kk

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#17

Actually i didn't enjoyed this os wen i read it 4 the 1st time coz all d while reading there ws only 1 q in my mind

IS ARJUN DEAD?????????????😕😕😕

IT ws only at end that i was like 😊

after that i dont remember how many time i hav read this 😆

it ws so heartwarming n pleasant. i jst loved it❤️

pls continue 2 write such beautiful stories

u r a FAB writer👏👏👏

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Anshita

@..anshita..

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+ 2

Posted: 14 years ago

#18

wow achu...loved it so much...its awesome yar..:)

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Archana

@mysticlover

Dazzler

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Posted: 14 years ago

#19

Originally posted by: kkian
Actually i didn't enjoyed this os wen i read it 4 the 1st time coz all d while reading there ws only 1 q in my mind

IS ARJUN DEAD?????????????😕😕😕

IT ws only at end that i was like 😊

after that i dont remember how many time i hav read this 😆

it ws so heartwarming n pleasant. i jst loved it❤️

pls continue 2 write such beautiful stories

u r a FAB writer👏👏👏

tnk u so much dear!😊

haha sorry i put u thru a minor heart attack!😆 actually i ws thinking abt a separation track but wen i reached the end i cudn't! bt the starting story wasn't this at all! i first thought of representing arjun as a sweet dream of arohi in a chilly morning! dat also changed once i started 2 write!😆

once again tnk u so much for calling me a fab writer! i am blushing! ☺️