Originally posted by: Allbut1
OH.MY.GOD. Vita, you have officially killed me and sent to Phan-girl heaven! That was absolutely FLAWLESS! In fact, I don't have the words to tell you how much I loved it! I think I read, and re-read and then re-read again each and every sentence!
Thank you so much!š³š³
Please, please, please join the Phulwa's creative team, we will love you forever! This stuff is absolutely gold! The way you transitioned all the different emotions, and blended it all into each other so seamlessly, pure talent right there!
Starting off with the cutesey flirting and teasing, to the romancing in their room, and then finally to the absolutely mind blowing emotional ending! The way they collapsed on the bed, Abhay's awareness of Phulwa and his emotions, his realizations, her tear and him kissing it away and at the same time realizing that she doesn't trust him-the disappointment that follows...it's like I could feel every single emotion you had written, how the heck do you do that?
And then my favorite part, the entangling of his chain and her mangalsutra, wow, just wow, the feelings, Phulwa's decision, the tenderness in that scene was just so overwhelming, I can't get enough of that sweetness!
I liked that part too! I've always been a fan of their aatak jana scenes so I thought it'd be nice to put it in here:)
Thank you so much for your compliments, I'm really flattered!š³ Super glad you liked it!š
And the best part is that I don't think that they're too far away from this kind of interaction! It might now be a verbal acknowledgement of their feelings, but for now it's more than enough! Just realizing that their path is the same now, and it's one they want to walk on together forever, it says more than any words could! Hats off to you once again, a very, very real, hot, genuine, and all together beautiful scene sequence!
@Bold - Agree with you! Even if they're not in a mood for celebration right now, the rest of the feelings are just simmering on the top, waiting for them to get together again...I really hope we get to see something similar soon!š
Oh, oh, oh, Phulwa stopping Abhay right before he opens the door, god my PhAb heart just burst with happiness and excitement at the thought! I can't imagine as being a submissive partner, so to see her take control like that, and not even try to hide the rejection in her voice, you have portrayed her wonderfully!
There's no way Abhay can expect her to stay quiet after teasing her like that, jawab to unko dena hi partiš
And lastly, you have spoiled us rotten this weekend, actually you and Anu both, if the wonderful scenarios at the AT weren't enough, we got 3 new OS in a span of 3 days...expectations are sky high now! Can't wait to see what else your brilliantly creative mind has in store for us next!
Well, I guess for the rest of the week I'm placing my hopes on a nice AP scene after they find each other, cute or emotional - anything will do! Maybe we'll get some lead up to a potential shelter scene too...?:D
Ganesh Kartikeya
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