loved it! seriously, I like how you incorporated Udayveer's non-verbal ways of wanting to push himself and be on top. He really doe have this charisma & you captured it well!
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nice part...loved uday trying to comfort manyata even 4 a momoent...and uday ignoring jai's talks and focusing more on his muscles was hilarious...pm me
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