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Preet

@shrarrti

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Posted: 13 years ago

Please add me to your pm list! I'm eagerly awaiting Manyata avenging the destruction of her things!

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moksha89

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Posted: 13 years ago

loved it! seriously, I like how you incorporated Udayveer's non-verbal ways of wanting to push himself and be on top. He really doe have this charisma & you captured it well!

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Apocalypse

@WhiteNights

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Posted: 13 years ago

Ohhh I loved it! very very entertaining!! :D

ROFL at all the thoughts that crossed uday's mind when he realized he was picking up things from the floor😆😆

Also the last part was fantastic. I can so imagine Manya on screen reacting in that way.

You write really well. 👍🏼

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sheeza98

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Posted: 13 years ago

i LOVED it

please add me to your pm list. i'd love to read more of this and any other stories you might have.

sheeza

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--ANGEL--

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Posted: 13 years ago

nice part...loved uday trying to comfort manyata even 4 a momoent...and uday ignoring jai's talks and focusing more on his muscles was hilarious...pm me

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Samridhi

@BinKuchKahe.

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Posted: 13 years ago

This was really well-written. I guess you're starting to understand UV's character :)

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Raunika

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Posted: 13 years ago

very nice one-shot.interesting .keep going.so sweet uv.

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-Zunaira-

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Posted: 13 years ago

Amazing work!! Seriously u understand UVs character so well! 👏 ⭐️
Plz add me 2 ur PM list😃

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Manasi

@Manasi_16

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Posted: 13 years ago

Your stories are always a pleasure to read😛 Do add me to ur list!

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