Hey!! I read your FF today in a go and needless to say...its amazing!! :D
Beautifully written...you did justice to everything you touched! :D
The love, the hurt, the craving, the annoyance, the pain, the passion - everything is conveyed so well!!
And you have a way with words when it comes to humour too :D
Also I loved the overall characterization and the slight changes you have made!! It gives so much of a realistic touch to it!!
The starting parts were so light, so much fun to read :)
But it was housebreaking to read that line when Arnav looked at her photo and wondered where she was!! I could almost feel his pain ;(
Its nice though how everything fell right into place! All so amusing :)
And the marriage now...you have got me all excited to know what is gonna happen next :D
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