IPKKND: Tumhare Paas Kya Hai

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Posted: 13 years ago
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This is something random and short I'd written for the contest that was held on the forum in November so I thought I'd repost it just for anyone that didn't read it then.


OS: Tumhare Paas Kya Hai?


'Shyamji? What's wrong?'


Shyam hugged the man instinctively tears falling down his face, 'Khushiji has left me. She's left me for my Saale Sahib.'


Happy had been rubbing Shyam's back soothingly but he paused at Shyam's words. 'Now that Khushiji has gone do you... Shyamji, do you think you could love me instead?'


Shyam pulled back from the hug in shock, 'you? Replace my Khushiji?'


'But my name is also Happy, and together we could be happy. I've admired you from afar for so long but I thought at first you and Buaji... and then you got engaged to Khushiji. But now, now you're free and I just have to tell you how I feel! Do you think you could love me as much as I love you?'


'But... Khushiji has everything now she's married. She has buildings, property, money, cars! What do you have to offer me?'


'Mere paas Maa hain.'


Shyam's tears stopped automatically as the impact of Happyji's words hit him and he pulled Happy back into a forceful hug. It was true, neither Khushi nor Arnav had a mother and now Shyam would finally have something that he knew they both lacked and desired.


Now it was Happy who was crying although his tears were of joy as he thought how happy his Ma would be that finally her son was settling down. Maybe now she'd stop inviting that stupid Sarita over for dinner every night.



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Posted: 13 years ago
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oh gosh!!! u cracked me up hahahahah🤣🤣🤣

reading the title i thought it was another ASR- ish type dialogue from arnav!!!😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: loveydovey

oh gosh!!! u cracked me up hahahahah🤣🤣🤣


reading the title i thought it was another ASR- ish type dialogue from arnav!!!😆



Haha that does sound like something Arnav would say. Maybe I'll write an OS where he says it to Khushi :P
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Posted: 13 years ago
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OMG !
shyam nd happy !
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wonderful thought 👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣🤣😆

LMFAO...This seriously made my day!!!! Girl i have to admit ur sense of humor is awesome..along with ur writing skills!!!

Lmao..Cant stop laughing!!! Kudos to u!!
Edited by Harshiti4Lyf - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: Harshiti4Lyf

🤣🤣😆


LMFAO...This seriously made my day!!!! Girl i have to admit ur sense of humor is awesome..along with ur writing skills!!!

Lmao..Cant stop laughing!!! Kudos to u!!



Aww thank you so much!

Glad you liked it :D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: rafid11

OMG !
shyam nd happy !
🤣
wonderful thought 👏



Well he wanted khushi in his life. So I provided it for him! :P
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Thanks!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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🤣🤣🤣

Oh gosh! I literally have tears running down my cheeks from laughing so hard!
'Mere paas Ma hain' 🤣
That was classic!!

Edited by reyabear - 13 years ago
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BTW, are you talking about the Teri Meri Kahaani contest? I wrote something for that too! Did they ever tell us who won??

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