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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey YRKKHians 🤗
I know a lot of OS' are being posted on the precap/last episode.
I wanted this is to actually happen in the show.. I know it will not happen.. but this could be a possible solution, which the CVs failed to show😳

I doubt i have written an OS earlier😕 I guess i have.. or maybe not.. I forgot😆 Sorry.. i had tried almost all creative stuff.. Cant remember about OS. Anyways, i hope you enjoy the OS😳

~~Aashayein~~

Naitik and Akshara were flying a kite together, when naitik gets a call from their new clients. Shocked and upset as he is, he decides that he wont give in so easily. Work IS definitely important, but he can atleast try and convince his clients. He makes up his mind not to tell anyone anything, until he speaks with his new client.

.Next Day.
Naitik calls up at the Trishala Office, requesting to tranfer the line to Mr. Rathore. Naitik holds the phone till Mr. Rathore is free. He waits calmly and patiently. He doesn't want to sound tensed. Soon Mr. Rathore picks up the phone.

R; Good morning Mr. Naitik. So, you are coming to pune today right?
N; good morning Mr rathore. I had called you regarding the same matter. Actually, is it possible to postpone the meeting to around 3-4 days later?
R; Mr. Naitik, i thought you were very professional, and you would never take work so lightly. I had mentioned earlier also, i love professionalism. How can you tell me so late that you want to postpone the meeting?
N; Actually sir, I am indeed quite professional. But I have a genuine reason.
R; I can see no reason as to why you are postponing the meeting. This is urgent and important work, and I have already paid you..
N; Sir, my wife is pregnant. She is in her 9th month, and her date is due. Throughout these 9 months, I had promised her that I will be with her when she delivers. How do I suddenly tell her that I wont be able to be with her during the most difficult period of her life?

There is no reply from Mr. Rathore.

Naitik continues.: Sir, if you would have been in my place, would you leave your wife alone.. when she needs you the most? I would have never delayed this meeting, but for my wife, for my child, and for myself.. I am requesting you to, if not delay the meeting, atleast keep it in udaipur itself.

R; I understand your situation Mr. Naitik. I respect you to think of your wife and trouble. I would be very happy to help you. As regarding the meeting.. holding it in Udaipur would not come through. But yes, we can have a video conference. That would be a better option.

Naitik is overwhelmed to hear this. He is so happy that he would be able to manage work as well as his wife, his life!
N; Thank you Sir.. and yes, video conference would definitely do.
R; Congratulations in advance Mr. Naitik.

Naitik says thank you. His happiness knows no bounds. He is happy that he could convince Mr. Rathore.
A day passes by..Akshara doesn't experience labor pain. Naitik works from home so as to make akshara feel comfortable. Its 2 days after Makar Sankranti.

Naitik is working from home. He is down, on the small table in the Singhania aangan. his meeting with mr. rathore has just completed. He is switching off his laptop, when girija comes running to him.

G; dada.. dada woh bhabhi..
N; akshara? kya hua akshara ko?
G; dada unhe dard..
N; kya.. dard? mein abhi dekhta hu..
He hurriedly goes up.. here g3 and bm tell the driver to keep the car ready..and they too go to naksh room.

Upstairs..
Naitik enters his room just to see akshara crying in pain. She is continuously shouting. Naitik holds her. He is about to call g3 and bm, when they come themselves. Akshara is rushed to the hospital. Maheshwaris have been informed.

.In the Hospital.
Akshara is rushed to the Labor room. She says she wants naitik to be with her.. The doctor agrees, and naitik is allowed in.

Naitik is made to wear operation robes and stuff. Akshara is shouting continuously. Naitik is standing beside her... clutching her hand. Akshara's continuous shouts are making Naitik feel paranoid. He is not able to understand what he is supposed to do!
Naitik's hand is almost being crushed by akshara's force. But he is not realising this. His full attention is on akshara. He is continuously telling akshara that he is there.

The shouts prominent in the room are the doctor's and nurses' "Akshara Push.. push akshara", Akshara's "aaa... nai... tik" and Naitik's "Haan akshara, mein idhar hi hun.. aapke paas."

After 6 long hours of akshara's pain.. the baby comes out of her womb. All of akshara's pain is gone when she hears the first cry of the baby. The doctor Congratulates the new-new parents of a baby boy.
Naitik is very happy. Akshara is tired, but happy. Both look at each other. Both feel their eyes wet.

The doctor tells the nurse to clean the baby. Akshara is moved to the ward soon after. The doctor informs everyone that akshara has delivered a baby boy. She also informs that both the child and the mother are healthy.
Naitik removes the robes and goes outside. Everyone hugs him😃
He hasn't eaten anything since long. But he refuses to do so, until akshara has something.

In the ward.
The doctor says that only 2-2 people can go to meet the mother. turn by turn, everyone goes and congratulates akshara. She waits for naitik to come. After everyone is done congratulating akshara, Naitik goes inside her ward. Akshara is sitting on her bed. She is feeling weak and tired. Naitik asks her whether she wants to have something.

The nurse interrupts saying that she cant have anything.. She is on glucose. naitik says ok. Akshara understands that he hasnt had food. She is about to tell the nurse to get food for him from g3, when another nurse brings the baby inside.

Nurse: Everyone outside wanted you both to see the baby first.
Naksh Smile.
The nurse hands their baby to Akshara. Akshara carefully takes the delicate child in her hands. She says with a tear in her eye.. "Mera chotu naitik😃" Naitik touches the child.. "Vishwaas nai ho raha akshara" He kisses akshara.. "Hamara baby".😃 He has tears in his eyes.

A; aapne meri birthday gift de di naitik.. she kisses him.. tears rolling down her cheeks.
Naitik wipes the tears.. "aapne mujhe mere life ki sabse pyaari gift di hai akshara.. Thank you so much!"
Akshara passes the baby slowly to naitik.. "Apne baby ko nai pakdenge?"
Naitik takes the child.. "Hamari pyaar ki nishani.. Ise mein kisi bhi cheez ki kami nai hone dunga.."
A; chahe uske liye aapko Mr. Rathore ko pune ki meeting cancel karne k liye manana kyun na pade..😃😃
N; Aapko kaise pata...
A; Cries on his shoulder.. "Patni hu aapki naitik.. kuch nai chhupa sakte aap mujhse.. kuch nai"

Naitik kisses her on her forehead.. "Mujhe nai jaana tha aapko chhodkar.. isiliye meine socha mein ek baar baat karke dekhu unse. Unhone haan kehkar meri Aashayein puri kar di akshara.. Aaaj mein bahut khush hu.."
A; mujhe pata tha aap mere liye kuch bhi kar sakte hai.. I love you naitik!

The baby lets out a small cry..
Naksh laugh..
Naitik carried the baby closer to akshara. He himself comes closer to her, and says "I love you both❤️"

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-Nasreen- thumbnail
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow wow wow u give double treat today...😃we get sooo beautiful parts dear...😃 thank u sooo much stuti...😛
really nice OS stuti...👏
cv's yahi kartay tho hum ko itnai tension nahi hoti ufff...😡
but u write sooo beatiufully wow naitik in OT wow sooo sweet husband ...😳
i loved this line She says with a tear in her eye.. "Mera chotu naitik...😃
wow and u sooo beautifully explain OT scence ...👏yaar
Edited by fazeel - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Superb Stutz👏.sach mai yeh sab tho show mai dhekne ko nahi miltha,sach mai awesome update.⭐️.aaj kal ap logon ki OS nFF's se hi kam chalna padega.loved your os❤️.TFS👏
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice and beautifull update thanks for sharing the
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Posted: 13 years ago
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wow wow stuti wish dimri mein itni akal hoti nahi hai toh tum de ddo unhe she neeeds it rofl!!!!! awesome OS :))) Aaj OS ka din hai :D:D
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Edited!!
🤗 Oye Stuts!!This is fabulous yah!!😃😃😃
Naitik was so good...being there for her!!
Hope CVs a=have something in such sort for us!!😳⭐️
Edited by _naksh_raz - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hi chotu... finally read the complete os... its very awesome and nice... short and sweet.. loved it... like u showed it would have better if naitik told abt his situation to rathore... n then the last of naksh with the baby is too good.. 😍😍😍. Loved it... 😃

didn't read ur ff yet.. now no more energy to read it... I'll definately read it tomorrow and then unres my post... love u chotu... 🤗
Edited by saru.g - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hey Stuts!!

Loved The OS... Glad that U made Naitik stay Back and Be with Akshara... I kinda Loved Mr Rathore Here...

Amazing Write up...

Will Read Ur FF too...

Keep Writing And Entertaining Us...

All The Best For Ur Exams!! U ll Surely Do Well... :)
Edited by jasminedayal - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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awesome os stuti...👍🏼
kash aisa hotha...😍

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Posted: 13 years ago
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wowww Stuti... awesome OS!!! very well and beautifully written... 👏 👏 loved it completely...❤️ just wish serial mein bhi aisa hota 😍

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