ff:beyond love chap 28 pg 47 02/11/12

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Heyy!! well, i wrote this ff for another couple a while back and since then i haven't really been interested in any show...but then i came across this show...n i found my new crazy obsession!! n well some of you may have read this ff n many of you have not...but in any case plz temme if u like the concept...and if i should continue uploading it to this forum...thnx!!! heres the character sketch, intro and the first chapter!! plz feel free to gimme any suggestions or complaints that u may have n lastly comment n enjoy!!!!




Beyond love'''.



Udayveer: A handsome 23 year old entrepreneur/prince with an edge!! He gets what he wants and is not scared to use any means necessary. He is a player and so very proud of it, girls fall at his feet and he takes full advantage'.being from a wealthy royal family background there is nothing he desires and does not have''..a spoiled brat and very rude are words often used to describe him'..although well educated and sophisticated but his temper is very volatile''wen he looses it all hell breaks loose''.


Manyata: A 20 year old girl''.demure, subtle, calm'''''these are not the words to describe her''she is fierce, confident, aloof, smart and oh so pretty''.although from a small town'..but she has an attitude that can blow people away'' ''polite but wont be afraid to speak her mind'..has a small family including her mom n dad!!! (shes the only child)''' spoiled but well-rooted in her culture''so in short a modern girl with a traditional upbringing'''




This is a story of 2 not so different people'''they say opposites attract but wt happens when 2 of a kind clash'.what happens when all limits are crossed in the name of love??? A story about obsession, power, love and...


if all is fair in love and war'''how far will someone go 4 their obsession????


Index

chap 1 pg1

chap 2 pg2

chap 3 pg3

chap 4 pg4

chap 5 pg5

chap 6 pg9

chap 7 pg9

chap 8 pg12

chap 9, 10,11 pg19

chap 12 pg 24

chap 13 pg 28

chap 14-21 pg 31

chap 23-24 pg 35

chap 25-27 pg 41

chap 38 pg 47



Chapter 1



He couldn't believe his eyes, how is this possible??? How could a girl set his heart racing and pounding without even looking at him??? She couldn't be the most prettiest girl he had seen, I mean he had dated models and elite socialites but there was something about her which was tearing his heart from his chest and just pulling it towards her, she was different'''unique!! Her eyes. Her smile, her hair, her face'''it was like he had never seen such a perfect form!! All other things faded from his sight, he was watching her with a tunnel vision. She was standing a few meters away from him and there was a lot of hustle bustle going on because of the wedding but the only thing catching his attention or rather commanding it was her.

He moved slowly, slowly towards her. She was standing in the middle of a group of girls and was giving them directions for something and then he heard her voice.


"Oh my god!!! How could you forget the main step? We rehearsed it so many times, now listen chicki, we have to perform in the next 15 minutes so you better get your act together or I swear to god''.."

"Manyata!" someone screamed, she immediately turned, "What happened??? You have everything under control right??" her best friend and the bride asked.

"Don't worry Unnati!!! We are so not loosing to your in laws in this dance off, I totally remember the bet, jeeju is so loosing this one!!!" She smirked.


All his eyes could see was her, all his ears heard was her voice'''her voice, he though.

It was ringing in his head over and over again, a faint smile played on his awed lips, "Manyata" he said to himself in the most intense tone, it seemed like his heart and soul poured out of this word.


As he tried to move closer the lights dimmed.

His attraction towards her and the lack of her beautiful site from his eyes got him frustrated. He sensed a different kind of movement in the hall, "sir, why are you standing?

They are just about to start a dance performance, here I brought a chair for you please be seated" said his secretary Akash.

He didn't like attending these royal weddings but he had to this time because his father had been a close pal to the groom's dad, and as he couldn't come Udayveer had to be there. And since he owed him after he crashed his new Mercedes Udayveer unwillingly agreed.

"Bbuut''where is that girl'..she ww''" Udayveer restlessly asked. "Sir please sit down, we'll find the girl after the performance finishes and the lights are switched back on" said Akash in an assuring manner, he always knew how to calm him down, that's why not only was he his secretary but a very close friend too.

He knew very well if Udayveer wanted something, he would make sure he gets it, and this is where Akash came in and helped him.



The spotlight was turned to the stage, 3 girls facing away from the audience were standing doing a pose with their duppatas. As the music played they turned around and started dancing. Udayveer was not at all interested in the dance, his restless eyes were thirsty for her beautiful site and he knew that only she could now quench this thirst. As his eyes wandered the hall he couldn't see her and this is where his temper started building up. He skimmed the hall again and again, and asked Akash to get information about Manyata too. But still his heart was pounding hard in his muscular chest that he could feel blood rushing through his veins.

Then finally, he caught a glimpse of her.

The performance of the girls had ended and now she was on stage talking to the audience.

"Hmmm''.not bad!!! The groom's side has come fully prepared I see, and why not, I mean they are going against us after all, the uni dance champions! But let me tell you, no matter how much you practice we are going to win, right girls?" she cheerfully communicated with the crowd. "Now its our turn, this one is for you Unnati, we love you!!!" with this she threw the mike to a friend and commenced to dancing.


"Haaahh!!" this was all what he could muster up when he saw her dancing.

All his anger and frustration simply vanished on a simple site of her, the light danced on her mesmerizing beautiful face, her willowy body moved to the beats like the wind, her jewelery hangings jerked to her movement.

All this just made him want her even more, he couldn't resist her!!!! He unknowingly smiled so freely, even clapped to the beats. He didn't know much about her but he knew one thing'

She was made for him and him only!!!!

No one else could have her, he envisioned all these happy scenarios with her, their dates, their wedding, their honeymoon, their life ahead. She completed him now.

But then suddenly, he was rudely awakened from his daydreams when his eyes witnessed someone else holding her hand. His blood started boiling, his rage started to burn his insides, his anger built up. He tightened his fists so hard that his rings cut into his skin and blood started pouring out.


He was sitting right there and someone still had the audacity to touch her. With blood-shot eyes he got up and marched towards the stage''''''''''..



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Posted: 13 years ago
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just loved your ff so much...great storytelling and lovely concept...pls write more...i cant wait for next part ...it is so damn hot...
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are u kddng me awosme strt yarr...lovde the strt loved such stores...t was awsomely wtten plz updtae soon cant wat for what hapend next
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nice start...interesting concept...update soon...pm me
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oh wow. so well written... u described uday correctly as he's very possesive of manyata.. continue plz wen u have time 😊

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Posted: 13 years ago
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😃that was tooo HOT
loveeed every single moment
AMAAZING
Please contiuee soon
AWESOMEEE FF..
Pleasee continueee
Please PM me if possible,...
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omg tht was soo mesmerizing!
cant wait to find out what happens!
plz pm me when u update!
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nice start bt best thing wox udayveer secretry AAKASH hahahahah
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Its a very promising start.. 👏 👏Lykd ur concept... 😊 ..
Do write more.. And could you pls add me on the PM list if you've got one..

Thanks 🤗
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a dashing and nailbiting start...whoa whooaa whooaaa🤗

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