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AfghanLeena thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#61
Bani to Jai

The Child In Him

I loved the child in him
so innocent and sweet
The mischief in his eyes
the blush upon his cheek
The tender way he spoke
that showed me that he cared
The touch of his warm hand
that gently touched my hair
The smiles that we shared
that filled my life with glee
For when I was with him
I found the child in me
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Posted: 19 years ago
#62

Tisha, that was awesome.👏 Rano that's so cute.😳👏Great job everyone.👏

(The following is a sorry try at the Shakesperean sonnet.😳Poor bard must be turning in his grave.😆)

Poem 1. The Sounds Of Silence

I send for the memories of last night
Whence drenched in desire, I lead you to my bed
Your eyes betokened me to hold you tight
While your eyes, tears of enervation shed

As I kissed your rosy lips,
Touched you in countless ways, my angelic Fay,
And my hands gently encircled your narrow hips
The night did more than pay

But O a terrible guilt outweighs
the love for you in my chest
I can face not his intent gaze
O my misery reaches the crest

I beseech thee O night, let me in to my misery fade
As I to her and you, goodbye I bade

😭

(The following is a clumsy attempt at blank verse. 😳No offence meant to you Misters Milton and Marlowe)

Poem 2. Touch me tenderly

A silence I knew not
steeped in to me when I touched you
Oceans of the unknown engulfed me
As my lips sought yours and made you mine
The silence of the night
Loud and clear; touched me, transformed me
From beast to man

O temperate maiden of cream and milk!
O divine moon!
Touch me, kiss me, love me!
Come closer, let me be your Eden and you mine
So there is no return
To the sunless life of yester years

The sky, the ocean, the water and the air!
Is not my tender love the princess of truth and faith?
My love, hear not the blessing?
Care not for the morrow
Come closer, let the world disappear!

But a traitorous voice in my heart whispers
The love stained bed is but a dream
Her feathery touch, her silken embrace
Deserves a sounder prize

My lips bemoan "Go away O night Go away
Go away the memory o the blissful night
Go! Wait! Let me go back to where I was; Let me be where I was!"

Silently I stare at the clock

Triumphantly shaking his wings, fate hath his way

Wife,time and fate may apart us rip but stay in our hearts that night always will!

😭

Goodnight and have a great day dears.😛
-Raaga

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Posted: 19 years ago
#63
👏 👏 👏 awsome job all of are good poets yaar
Jaseeka thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#64
It is funny:

Jai aur Bani
Ek anokhi Kahani,
Kya kre yaar
Ishq wishq ya pyaar???
Kiss on lips ???
Or ride on ships
Let's come close
and shut the doors
Mik or tea
let's go to the sea
Shine like a sun
and have lots of fun
Take care
and don't stare

Geeta



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Posted: 19 years ago
#65

Bani standing and thinking to herself as images were appearing in her mind – (from past till present)

I came with a belief of hope in this unknown city

We needed support from my father's friend and not pity

You gave us house, work and respect in supply

Your protection gave us hope under the sky

You highlighted the niceness from within

Life was hard here, but you helped it begin

My parents might have gone far away

But still their blessings were laid on our way

I met a new buddy, a pal, a friend

Who was there for us till no end

His sweet companionship I took mistakenly for love

Yet I valued his friendship way above.

I was happy to see love letting Pia change

But Pia first saw Mr. Walia's wealth for exchange

She recovered when love was distanced

For her mind could not let her heart get convinced

Pain was showered at Mr. Walia's expense

For in his eyes I felt suffering so very intense

My sister's fault broke someone into pieces

I let him avenge at me so his anger releases

Our marriage was just a deception for the world

In which feelings of misery in us were swirled

You got relief by attacking at me

Even in grief, I was consoled by your heart's plea

Anything you did to me could be faced

But couldn't let my parent's upbringing be disgraced

My sisters are my honor, my pride

With Rano I had walked away for fate to decide

Fate bought us back together unknowingly

For Massi stepped in this house so caringly

Her caressing nature couldn't let me go

She helped to make our unwanted relationship flow

Strange things started to happen soon

There was no music of love yet I heard a tune

Emotions of care and compassion in me started to steer

For Massi made "husband-wife" come near

Everything suddenly seemed to go right

But soon Ms. Roshni came to our sight

She made me uneasy and bought element of annoyance

For what she made Mr. Walia do made a difference

I saw Mr. Walia change in front of her

Once sweet and next moment she made it transfer

Coldness was being removed in our relationship

But soon a pregnancy report happen to slip

Weapon of words killed me in an instance

Yet I couldn't give a reason to gain his acceptance

Once truth of family's honor was revealed

Mr. Walia felt guilty and his lips were sealed

I blush when his affectionate images appeared

He gave bangles which my mind has captured

Next I see him close to Roshniji

And suddenly I blast at him in my insanity

Smiles radiates on my face when he shows care

But my silly imagination leaves me in despair

I wonder the mystery behind Park Road

But haven't found linkage in his code

Two weddings are about to take place

May Lord always shower this family with His grace

Proximity between Mr. Walia and Roshniji makes me cry

And so I have decided to say this house "good-bye."

Before I could leave, my tears spoke to you

You touched me and closer we drew

The night's moon blessed us with passion

In presence of hearts was our consummation

Suddenly my life had taken another path

For in your eyes I see respect in place of wrath

The dawn of a new day allowed hopes to rise

How would my heart handle when your words would comprise

You said "I am sorry" which shook my soul

Our feelings disagreed for they were not on the same pole

You said you were ashamed of yourself and unable to bear

All I wanted to say is "I Love You"…I swear (kasamh se)!!!!

-Love4ever

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Posted: 19 years ago
#66
ANOTHER MONTH
ANOTHER YEAR
ANOTHER SMILE
ANOTHER TEAR
ANOTHER WINTER A SUMMER TO,
BUT THERE WILL NEVER BE ANOTHER YOU
NEHA*S_JANO_JAI thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#67
ANOTHER MONTH
ANOTHER YEAR
ANOTHER SMILE
ANOTHER TEAR
ANOTHER WINTER A SUMMER TO,
BUT THERE WILL NEVER BE ANOTHER YOU
monika.goel thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
#68
Thanks for participating-
now this topic is closed for entries submision-
soon entries shortlisted by judges will be posted for voting by members-
THAnKS
KS DEV TEAM

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