Fan Fiction Kunal Siddhi-Updated Page 2

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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi everyone, It has to done...A fan fiction based on the couple... Sorry if its not great! She was walking fast down the dark road and struggling with her umbrella...
' Great, ' She thought, ' Late again and I am going to have to listen to Kunal moaning again!'
She was lucky, the whole family had accepted her wholeheartly except Kunal...Despite being married they was a distance between them.
It was understandable, both were suffering from broken hearts when they got married. But time is a great healer.
Siddhi was slowly accepting the miserable man as her husband...now she was just waiting for him to do the same.
'Siddhi!' Exclaimed Seema Bhabhi, 'You're back? I'll will bring some tea for you, go and get changed otherwise you will fall ill!'
'Thanks Bhabhi...ummm Kunal?' Siddhi asked...
'In the room, doing some office work.' Replied Seema.
Oh no...She took a deep breath and walked in their bedroom...
'Oh so Madam has come from work has she? ' He asked with a frown on his face.
'No,' She answered...'Im a ghost...Siddhi passed away at the office!' She replied back sharply.
'Hey!' He shouted loudly. 'Dont even joke about dying! What would I do without you?' He asked taking two quick steps to stand right in front of her and holding her shoulders and looking straight at her...
She looked back straight in his eyes...'What?' She said...
'Umm I mean...what would I do with out you nagging me...Its become a habit' He replied looking down and quickly letting go of her shoulders and moving away from her as quickly as he had moved close to her.
'Go and change, You'll will get ill'
She grabbed some clothes and quickly shut the bathroom door behind her and leaned against it...She closed her eyes and relayed the scene in her mind...
He was grabbing her shoulders tight and looking deep into her eyes...'don't even joke...'
For the first time he had showed some emotion...and she had liked it. At least she knew that she had some importance in his life.
She walked out the bathroom and was suprised to see Kunal with a cup of tea in one hand and a plate of food in the other.
'Umm Seema sent this for you...' He said. 'And how comes you came back from work so late today?'
'oh..there was a case that needed sorting out...' She replied
'Oh..Next time if you are coming late then let me know..I will come and pick you up.'
'Why?,Were you worried about me?' She asked taking steps towards him...
'Huh? Worried me? No...' He said moving backwards with each step she took forward.
He was backed up against the wall with no where to go...
what is she doing? he thought.
She looked at him and laughed and took the tea and plate of food from his hands and walked to the bench and started eating.
It took a while for Kunal to compose himself...He took slow breaths...Every step that the woman had ntaken closer to him his heart beat had started to increase...What was happening? And that comment about her being dead? When she said that it felt that his heart was being stabbed...
He closed his eyes and sat on the chair...Thinking about the day he got married to her...she had looked beautiful but so sad...He sighed inwardly...He was changing and so was she...The lines in their relationship were changing...
She looked at him...She liked watching him sleep or when his eyes were closed...The look on his face when she was approaching him was soo funny! She was glad...At least he showed some concern about her...She ate her food and on the way out of the room she touched his hand hoping he hadm't fallen asleep...
...'Kunal?' He grabbed her hand...'What?' he asked in a daze.
'Coffee?' She asked looking shy and downwards at their hands interlocked...
He followed her gaze and quickly let go...'Sorry...Yes please'
He watched her walk out the room to the kitchen...his eyes never left her...She could sense his eyes on her as she walked out the room...
All those unspoken words and emotions were coming out of both of them...It was like they were experiencing something new but with the two of them it felt a long time coming...like a bomb waiting to explode.
'Coffee'
'Thanks'
They sat together on the bed in a comfortable silence drinking their coffee with the radio playing songs in the background...They didnt even notice when they fell asleep...
Her head had fallen asleep on his shoulder and somehow his arm had wrapped itself around her protecting her.
The next morning...
Ok guys...Got stuck! Will update soon if the feedback is positive.
Let me know what you think...I know its not as good as some of the stories on here!
But any feedback is welcome-good or bad!
Cheers guys!
x x x
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Me likes me likes me likes this 😊...Siddhi in a different avtaar.. please do continue soon... want to know what happens next morning... what will be Kunal's reaction?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey its very nice ,,,,,,,,, i also lyk this,,,,,,,plz cntnu
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very well written.. Do continue
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Posted: 13 years ago
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hey i absolutely loved this update...plz do continue soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Originally posted by: jnr.banchan

Hi everyone, It has to done...A fan fiction based on the couple... Sorry if its not great! She was walking fast down the dark road and struggling with her umbrella...

' Great, ' She thought, ' Late again and I am going to have to listen to Kunal moaning again!'
She was lucky, the whole family had accepted her wholeheartly except Kunal...Despite being married they was a distance between them.
It was understandable, both were suffering from broken hearts when they got married. But time is a great healer.
Siddhi was slowly accepting the miserable man as her husband...now she was just waiting for him to do the same.
'Siddhi!' Exclaimed Seema Bhabhi, 'You're back? I'll will bring some tea for you, go and get changed otherwise you will fall ill!'
'Thanks Bhabhi...ummm Kunal?' Siddhi asked...
'In the room, doing some office work.' Replied Seema.
Oh no...She took a deep breath and walked in their bedroom...
'Oh so Madam has come from work has she? ' He asked with a frown on his face.
'No,' She answered...'Im a ghost...Siddhi passed away at the office!' She replied back sharply.
'Hey!' He shouted loudly. 'Dont even joke about dying! What would I do without you?' He asked taking two quick steps to stand right in front of her and holding her shoulders and looking straight at her...
She looked back straight in his eyes...'What?' She said...
'Umm I mean...what would I do with out you nagging me...Its become a habit' He replied looking down and quickly letting go of her shoulders and moving away from her as quickly as he had moved close to her.
'Go and change, You'll will get ill'
She grabbed some clothes and quickly shut the bathroom door behind her and leaned against it...She closed her eyes and relayed the scene in her mind...
He was grabbing her shoulders tight and looking deep into her eyes...'don't even joke...'
For the first time he had showed some emotion...and she had liked it. At least she knew that she had some importance in his life.
She walked out the bathroom and was suprised to see Kunal with a cup of tea in one hand and a plate of food in the other.
'Umm Seema sent this for you...' He said. 'And how comes you came back from work so late today?'
'oh..there was a case that needed sorting out...' She replied
'Oh..Next time if you are coming late then let me know..I will come and pick you up.'
'Why?,Were you worried about me?' She asked taking steps towards him...
'Huh? Worried me? No...' He said moving backwards with each step she took forward.
He was backed up against the wall with no where to go...
what is she doing? he thought.
She looked at him and laughed and took the tea and plate of food from his hands and walked to the bench and started eating.
It took a while for Kunal to compose himself...He took slow breaths...Every step that the woman had ntaken closer to him his heart beat had started to increase...What was happening? And that comment about her being dead? When she said that it felt that his heart was being stabbed...
He closed his eyes and sat on the chair...Thinking about the day he got married to her...she had looked beautiful but so sad...He sighed inwardly...He was changing and so was she...The lines in their relationship were changing...
She looked at him...She liked watching him sleep or when his eyes were closed...The look on his face when she was approaching him was soo funny! She was glad...At least he showed some concern about her...She ate her food and on the way out of the room she touched his hand hoping he hadm't fallen asleep...
...'Kunal?' He grabbed her hand...'What?' he asked in a daze.
'Coffee?' She asked looking shy and downwards at their hands interlocked...
He followed her gaze and quickly let go...'Sorry...Yes please'
He watched her walk out the room to the kitchen...his eyes never left her...She could sense his eyes on her as she walked out the room...
All those unspoken words and emotions were coming out of both of them...It was like they were experiencing something new but with the two of them it felt a long time coming...like a bomb waiting to explode.
'Coffee'
'Thanks'
They sat together on the bed in a comfortable silence drinking their coffee with the radio playing songs in the background...They didnt even notice when they fell asleep...
Her head had fallen asleep on his shoulder and somehow his arm had wrapped itself around her protecting her.
The next morning...
Ok guys...Got stuck! Will update soon if the feedback is positive.
Let me know what you think...I know its not as good as some of the stories on here!
But any feedback is welcome-good or bad!
Cheers guys!
x x x


@red nice lines! just love to read them again and again! just imagine if kunal does so wid siddhi! she will die by blushing and blushing...!
@blue do come up wid next part as soon as possible!
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Posted: 13 years ago
#7
Thanks for the great feedback guys!!...
Update...
The sun shone down brightly and disturbed Kunal...He fidgted and reliased that he couldnt move his arm...He turned and saw Sidhhi's head on his shoulder and sighed...
She looked beautiful with the sunlight shining on her face...He didn't know what to do...Should he disturb her or watch her sleep?
He decided he would watch her sleep...she wouldn't know. He rested his head on her head and wrapped his arm around her tighter as she stirred in her sleep.
'Please don't wake up' He thought...Otherwise he would die of embarressment. She stopped stirring and relaxed in his arms...
She simled in her sleep, this was one of the most beautiful moments in her life. She was in her husbands strong arms. She would never disturb this moment.
They both soon fell asleep and awoke with Seema shouting out both their names.'Siddhi!' 'Kunal Bhayia!, Wake up or you will both be late for work!'
They woke up with a start...Siddhi looked up and saw Kunal looking at her in shock...
'Ummm' He said 'You are sleeping on my arms and I couldnt move and didnt want to disturb you...'
She blushed a bright red...'Sorry!' And quickly got up.
'Ow!' He shouted 'Stop! Your hair is stuck...'
'Oh!' Her head was so close to his, he unhooked her strands of hair from his button and then lifted her face towards his...
'You are so beautiful...you know that right?' He whispered to her...'And I just wanted to say thanks...'
'For what?' She whispered back...
'For making me feel alive again...I didnt think it was possible'
While Kunal was saying this he was aware of her lips and her closeness to his. He grabbed her tightly and gave a hug so tight that Siddhi thought she would stop breathing...
I love her...he thought...
I love him...She thought.
'Siddhi!!!' A voice from the kitchen shouted out.
With Seema's voice disturbing the pair Kunal quickly let go her her, just as quickly as he had held her...
'You better go..' He said...
And he quickly walked away leaving a very confused Sidhhi behind.
'Coming Bhabhi!' She said...
Kunal was flumoxed and sighed inwardly...
' What was happening to him? He had never felt like this...even with Richa...It was strange...Siddhi was a simple girl but the desire he felt for her he had never experienced before...
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Very nice extension and update of your FF. Are you going to updae it further or this is the end of this FF? I hope you write another update as you write it very well. Thanks again for the beautiful FF.



Edited by Iamrani - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#9
Hi I will be uPdating another part...Hopefully in the next two days. They have admitted their love to themselves but not to each other.
Thanks for the positive feedback!
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Posted: 13 years ago
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very nice update ,,,,beautiful ,,,,,,,,,i love sinal story ,,,hey plz plz further update cntnu

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