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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: sona-rai

ufff tum log kitna boltay ho 😆abb ja ker sab ki batain read ki hain 😆


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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape


aargh simi, what was that...i had to read it twice to make out wht you meant...😆
you give us one more update today then, we ll finish off this thread...is that okay with you??😃😳

same with me dear 😆 and simi dear we will finish the thread if u give two updates 😉what say ?
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Posted: 13 years ago
part 58
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: honeygrape


hiii🤗 hw are you sona???

i'm fine yar😃
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Posted: 13 years ago
😈 SHETAN KA GHAR😈
Chapter 60

Maan looked at Pammi who's hands and legs were tied up to the bed with electric machine hooked up to her head. One of her leg was tied up my a metal chain, while her other leg and hands were tied with rope to the bed post...He bends in front of her and smirks...she looks at him with fear...

Maan: Are you feeling scared of me? (he asks slowly and then looks at her with anger filled eyes) well YOU SHOULD!! I will torture you guys so much that not even god can help you...you guys will beg for death and no one will come to help you! Day and night you guys will hear each other scream...

Pammi: Where is my son?

Maan (smirks) Don't worry you will hear your son scream later on at night..for now let him hear his dearest mother scream like hell begging for mercy. That is what you guys did to my Geet...

Pammi (laughs): That bitch

Maan (looks at her with anger and goes to the machine...) you will regret your words...(he turns the machine on...shocking her..she screams...the men look at him scared and shocked but none had any courage to say anything..after five minutes Maan turns off the machine...he looks down at her and wipes her sweat..) tut tut..look what has happened to you!

Don't worry my men here will take care of you! I am a gentlemen after all. (he turns to his men) Give her a shock for 20 minutes every hour until its 5pm...she will only one have lunch break and bathroom break (he looks at her with a smirk) after all you need your energy to scream (he looks at his men) After five, loosen her one leg with the rope only and also both of her hands...I need to let her know what it is like to be treated like an animal walking around with a chain tied to her leg.

Pammi: I won't spare you Maan...

Maan (ignores her) ohh and if she says anything out of line then feel free to give her shock every five minutes or so...Ohh and there is also a bonus for you Pammi...every time my Geet screams in pain you will recieve shocks every 10 minutes continuously for 20 minutes straight...

Do you all understand what you have to do? (all shake their heads yes) ohh and if I find out anyone helping her in any way then you guys will be on the electric bed instead of her!!

Maan leaves the room and stands in front of the other room right next door...his men open the door for him...Maan saw Dev sitting on the floor...Dev looks at Maan...

Dev: Let me go!

Maan: Why? I like having your company so very much. Don't you like this little arrangement? I even added a bathroom in the room for you.

Dev: What are you going to do to me? Where is my mother?

Maan: Didn't you hear her voice? (to his men) He wants to hear his mother's voice...do something about it (he shakes his head yes and leaves the room...within the next minute both heard Pammi scream..Maan smirks at Dev..he looks at him with fear

Dev: What are you doing to to do to me?

Maan (walks around the room) lets see...nothing much! you are my guest here and I know how to take care of my guests...(his men walk in) Let him rest the whole day and give him whatever he needs...

Dev: What will you get out of this

Maan: Satisfaction! Now let me tell you about your daily activities...every day after 5pm my men here will slowly torture you until midnight...but don't worry they will give you medication and dress your wounds...you see you are no fun if you are all broken (he laughs) Wait there's more..if my Geet screams in pain then you will receive an extra hour of beating and that too until you scream in pain begging for mercy like she did...

You guys will be dying to get some sleep but you won't...both of you will hear each other scream in pain begging and THAT will do nothing but please me...
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Maan leaves the house to go meet her in the hospital..doctors were giving her sleeping pill to help her calm down ever since yesterday. He didn't want to leave her alone but he wanted to make sure that the people responsible to her gets what they deserve. The car stops at the stop light...a little kid runs over to him carrying a bouquet of flowers..Maan looks at him...the kid was about 6 years old, very skinny wearing a ripped shirt and shorts...

Kid: Please saab buy my flowers...for your wife or mother..please

Maan (looks at him and then the flowers...he grabs the flowers and takes out the money bundle...) here this is for you! keep it!

The kid looks at him with a big smile "thank you saab...may all your wishes come true..." Maan nodes and looks at the flowers...he reaches the hospital carrying the flowers...he goes to her room and saw her sleeping...he still felt guilty about what he did but he would do anything to see her being normal like before..he yearned to see her one smile or look at him with eyes filled with love for him...

He places the flowers next to her and gently touches her stomach...today the doctor is going to do an ultrasound to show Geet the baby that is still forming inside her...Geet moves a little..she slowly opens her eyes..Maan smiles at her...she looks at the door and holds his hand...

Maan: Its okay Geet...(she tried to move but couldn't..her arms were still bruised and her muscles were sore...) Don't try to move Geet...relax...(she looks at him)

Geet: woh

Maan: No one will come as long as am here...(he kisses her hand...) I got you these flowers...(he shows them to her) do you like them?

Geet: hmmm

Maan (looks at her with pain...she doesn't smile or says much anymore...she doesn't look at him the same way like before...Maan puts the flowers down) The doctor is going to do an ultrasound on you...he is going to show you our baby that is growing

Geet (touches her stomach): My baby

Maan puts his hand on top of hers...she slowly removes her hand...the next hour was very difficult for Maan..he couldn't see Geet being so distant from him..she was here with him but yet still not here...maybe that is his punishment...he didn't know it would be this hard and painful...the nurse finally came in followed by the doctor..she immediatly holds Maan's hand tight seeing a guy doctor...

Doc: Alright so Mrs.Khruana you ready to see your baby? (she nodes her head yes still holding on to Maan's hand tightly...the nurse shows her stomach and puts a cold gel on her stomach making her flinch a little due to coldness...) okay then lets see what we have here...(both look at the screen and saw the screen move..he points to the screen) You see that little dot? That is the baby...he is still growing..over the next couple of weeks you will slowly start to see organs growing and hear his heartbeat for the first time...(Geet looks at the screen with tears...Maan looks at her with a smile)

Maan; Doctor when can I take her home? (Geet stiffened at the mention of home...the same house which she now fears)

Doc: Well it would be better to keep her here until her wounds are properly healed

Maan: I will take care of that...if there is no problem or any complication then I would like for her to be discharged. I can take care of her and the baby properly.

Doc (sighs) okay as you wish..I will have the receptionist prepare a discharge paper for her

Maan: Okay thanks! (the doctor and the nurse leave...Maan looks at Geet but she was just staring at the screen..he holds her hand) Geet I have a surprise for you..I hope you will like it (She looks at him with blank look and nodes her head)

Geet: The baby is fine right?

Maan: yes...the doctor said he is growing..it won't be long when the baby is here in our arms (he kisses her hand...)

Precap: The surprise

Okay guys FINISH this thread for the surprise update 2marow on the new thread!😳

ohh and how do you guys like the punishment for Dev and Pammi?😈
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Posted: 13 years ago
reserved yaar simi love u or the update





Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice part simi...wow pammi n dev should be treated in worse manner...par abhi kelliye yeh kaafi hai...😆 btw why is geet distancing herself from maan??😕 hope she doesnt holds maan responsible for her condition...

well you can update the next part in next thread...how about we finish this thread today, will we get to see the surprise today itself simi😊
Edited by honeygrape - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: music_girl

one word - CHAOS

doing project and going through IF same time! 😆

multitasking dear lagay rahu 😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
muahhh SIMI wesome awesome update is dev pammi ki too😡😃
Edited by sona-rai - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
omg me happy seeing their damn punishment
thanx simi love u baby
and seeing smirk on maan i think he wont stop there after geet come to normal
and i hope soon maan love will change her into old geet
me damn waiting for my maaneet to be happy like before and enjoying their life with their angel
and their ultrasound seeing their baby heart she almost cried
and maan happy seeing like like
yaar still more she has to recover from her fear
i hope u will do that tom
and me still guessing ur surprise yaar













thanx for the update



Edited by zohafarheen - 13 years ago

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