OS: Silent Night Silent Waters (for Janet.Das)

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-Janet-

@-Janet-

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#61

I would like to clarify that you didn't just 'try to'.. it was definitely more than physical. Like I mentioned in my previous comment, the way you weaved Khushi's thoughts while arriving at the decision combined with the way you narrated the whole sequence of events without really writing it as a scene, it was magical bey. In my opinion, that buildup added to the credibility of Arnav's anger and Khushi's indignation and finally all of it poured into the ultimate combustion.

Originally posted by: minimuffin86
hahahaha! thanx you guys... i tried to make it about more than just the physical attraction but i guess everyone just went *thud*
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*reboot*
after the *ahem* part!!! hahaha i love you guys and keep the beyhooda alive withing you! it makes the world a better place!

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Fatima

@desigirl_18

Inactive

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

#62

so hawt as always!!☺️ reading ur stuff is always such a treat Munchy!!😉

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--Siva--

@--Siva--

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#63

Oh Munchy!! That was undoubtedly hot!!☺️

Arghh, Anjali!! But I dunno where Anjali has her bells that will ring only when Arnav and Kushi are close enough!!

Thanks for the PM dear!😊

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Jasleen

@Jasleen

Voyager

Posted: 13 years ago

#64

Wow that definitely was steamy 😳 Awesome job, so passionate!!!

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rechup

@rechup

Rocker

+ 5

Posted: 13 years ago

#65

This is really very hawt!!!

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Saniya

@saniya.x

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#66

☺️☺️☺️☺️

you can never disappoint us. this OS was simply HOT! ;)

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..Damsel..

@..Damsel..

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 13 years ago

#67

most definitely hot...loved it...

but why does someone always have to interrupt?...uurgh Anjali

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soni4eva

@soni4eva

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#68

wow dat was jus mindblowin ☺️ luvd it

relii hot x

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minuu

@minuu

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

#69

We have rules for FFs/OSs in the forum which must be followed at all times.

The rules simply state:DO NOT include such sexually explicit, po*nographic talks or even abusive language or Derogatory Expressions.

Inappropriate conent/wording/actions being included is NOT ALLOWED either.

You MUST read and refer to the forum rules at all times.

CLOSED.

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