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hey Amal!
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read all ur stories.. they are just amazing...😳
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Author's Note : Running out of words. I really have nothing to say to all of you. Just enjoy YAS! MUAH. I am writing YAS in three versions (AR, ArHi, MG) [Scroll down for latter two versions. Each version is in a different post].This way even if I receive less comments for one, I won't feel down. And yeah, because of my stressful schedule, updates will be infrequent. But I promise to put my best efforts in giving something every week. As for the story, very same as the original with the tiniest edits. I have brought back my poetic style and everything is in first person. One thing, first part isn't the same. But the next part onwards, its more or less the very same.

As the story proceeds, the following styles will be used :

Black - For Ridhima's/Khushi's/Geet's point of view.

Grey - For Armaan's/Arnav's/Maan's point of view.

Bold Grey - For narrations, if any.

So here we go. A short chapter. But that's all I could manage tonight.



y e t a n o t h e r s u n s e t


Based on Armaan & Ridhima


c h a p t e r #1


"You need to get some rest ma'am," I heard Saro tell me.

I responded nothing and simply checked my watch for the time. Past 11 p.m. I pondered upon it for a moment before I decided that Saro was right. I nodded. She saw me getting up and I noticed a smile forming on her face. Positively content of my choice of employee, I wordlessly left my cabin and trotted off to my scooter.

"How was your day," I heard my friend, talking chirpily with her mouth full of her food. If it wasn't for my 19 year old friendship with Muskaan, all I would have been able to make out was a bunch of uncategorized guttural sounds.

"Nothing extraordinary," I told her.

"Kies. Come, try this. Bua made it. It's so amazing," Muskaan said, happily shoving the plate towards me. I chuckled at her excitement and took a bit not to disappoint her.

"Mmm," I pronounced Bua's butter chicken as ultra-delicious. Bua, in Hindi means your father's sister and although Bua wasn't mine or Muskaan's in the true sense, we had heard her real life niece calling her so when we were kids and we repeated them on her without any knowledge of what it meant. And Bua never bothered to correct us and so today even after all these years, we still addressed her 'Bua'.

As though to live a century, Bua walked into our room.

"You kids wash up soon. I will lay the dinner. Others have already gone to bed. Come soon. Kay," she said, folding my jeans and racking it into my wardrobe.

"Bua, you go to sleep. It's already so late. We will eat and wash up ourselves," I said and Muskaan nodded vigorously, her butter chicken still melting her mouth.

"Nah! I know you both. You will eat little as long as I don't serve it for you. Nope, come soon," Bua said with finality waving off all our protests. She had her own set of rights upon us and we had learnt long ago that we would rather keep her to them. So I bucked up and quickly took my shower, while Muskaan cleansed her face on the other side with the shower curtain parting us. Like me, Muskaan too had just returned from work.

Muskaan was a doctor by degree but a scientist by actual profession. She had acquired a soft heart for kids with AIDs for no fault of their when she went for training in her 4th year. Ever since, she has been raving about how she will be the first to find a cure for them. If not completely, at least to prolong their lives healthily rather than just painlessly. I admired her for her belief i reaching something as far as that and secretly kept the fulfilment of her success in my prayers.

Quarter an hour later, we were down in our kitchen. Although we had a dining room at 'The Nest' to accommodate its 26 occupants, Muskaan's and my favourite place remained loyal to the cosy 4 chaired breakfast table in the kitchen. It was old and it was rusty but we loved it for the memories attached to it. It was there where Bua fed us both long before the dinner table was brought in. And now seated on the creaky chairs, playing with our hands as the smell of the delicious parathas reached our noses, we grew impatient. And Bua never brought items one by one. She liked bringing in everything together.

Muski and I began our professional conversation in the meantime.

"I don't know, Ridz. We are still stuck on almost the same position for 2 months. All the new proportions we are trying out are just not working. It's beginning to show on all of us," she said, her features drooping.

I smacked her for being ridiculous. "Oye! You have reached this far. You just need to give it some time and think over from the beginning. There are chances you will find the flow smoother," I said, clouded with heavy doubt as to what I was saying. I wondered if connecting management with science especially medicine related was a taboo. Nevertheless, since I received a lovely nod from Muskaan, I halted my thoughts.

"Bua, enough. I am bursting," I whined as Bua placed the 5th paratha on my plate.

"Eat now, it's ages since you have had a full dinner. Whenever I see you, you are either hooked onto a file or killing your ears with that cell of yours," Bua complained nonchalantly.

I made a face and placed the paratha myself just so that I would not have to fight another battle of words with Bua on my hectic schedule. Muskaan, on the other hand, never received any of Bua's eat-or-die threats because she was always one paratha ahead. Muski's bottomless tummy always took me by surprise and although I am a foodie, my limits were limits and hers would astonish anyone. Muski helped herself with her 7th paratha while I obliged Bua my 5th, much to my Bua's satisfaction.

A few hours later, we tucked ourselves to bed after I dragged my heavy body right past the stairs. Muski and I shared a bed and although we begun a conversation fighting over the crankiest topics, sleep overtook our overworked bodies instantly.

Edited by SmokingDreams - 13 years ago
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Author's Note : Since readers for ArHi version are new, just a short intro. I am Amal. Yet Another Sunset aka YAS is my baby and its the FF that brought me love and so many loyal readers. This FF has quite a history because I had written this twice and abandoned like a cruel witch both the times. But now, I am sticking to this FF because its difficult resisting the temptation to write this story. And the major factor, my readers. I was touched by how they brought YAS to everything even when its no where and I have decided to write it now itself rather than leave till my Boards are done. Which brings me to the fact that I am a pathetic writer in terms of regular updates. I suck at it and with my hectic schedule things are worse now. That's it for my blabber. As for the story, the first part tells nothing about the core of the story. You will have to wait for that in the second/third part. So do stay by till the second/third part is up and then you are free to decide upon your choice to continue or not. Love ya all and hope YAS is accepted with the ArHi-ians.

Black - For Ridhima's/Khushi's/Geet's point of view.

Grey - For Armaan's/Arnav's/Maan's point of view.

Bold Grey - For narrations, if any.

So here we go. A short chapter. But that's all I could manage tonight.


y e t a n o t h e r s u n s e t


Based on Arnav & Khushi


c h a p t e r #1


"You need to get some rest ma'am," I heard Saro tell me.

I responded nothing and simply checked my watch for the time. Past 11 p.m. I pondered upon it for a moment before I decided that Saro was right. I nodded. She saw me getting up and I noticed a smile forming on her face. Positively content of my choice of employee, I wordlessly left my cabin and trotted off to my scooter.

"How was your day," I heard my friend, talking chirpily with her mouth full of her food. If it wasn't for my 19 year old friendship with Anjali, all I would have been able to make out was a bunch of uncategorized guttural sounds.

"Nothing extraordinary," I told her.

"Kies. Come, try this. Bua made it. It's so amazing," Anjali said, happily shoving the plate towards me. I chuckled at her excitement and took a bit not to disappoint her.

"Mmm," I pronounced Bua's butter chicken as ultra-delicious. Bua, in Hindi means your father's sister and although Bua wasn't mine or Anjali's in the true sense, we had heard her real life niece calling her so when we were kids and we repeated them on her without any knowledge of what it meant. And Bua never bothered to correct us and so today even after all these years, we still addressed her 'Bua'.

As though to live a century, Bua walked into our room.

"You kids wash up soon. I will lay the dinner. Others have already gone to bed. Come soon. Kay," she said, folding my jeans and racking it into my wardrobe.

"Bua, you go to sleep. It's already so late. We will eat and wash up ourselves," I said and Anjali nodded vigorously, her butter chicken still melting her mouth.

"Nah! I know you both. You will eat little as long as I don't serve it for you. Nope, come soon," Bua said with finality waving off all our protests. She had her own set of rights upon us and we had learnt long ago that we would rather keep her to them. So I bucked up and quickly took my shower, while Anjali cleansed her face on the other side with the shower curtain parting us. Like me, Anjali too had just returned from work.

Anjali was a doctor by degree but a scientist by actual profession. She had acquired a soft heart for kids with AIDs for no fault of their when she went for training in her 4th year. Ever since, she has been raving about how she will be the first to find a cure for them. If not completely, at least to prolong their lives healthily rather than just painlessly. I admired her for her belief i reaching something as far as that and secretly kept the fulfilment of her success in my prayers.

Quarter an hour later, we were down in our kitchen. Although we had a dining room at 'The Nest' to accommodate its 26 occupants, Anjali's and my favourite place remained loyal to the cosy 4 chaired breakfast table in the kitchen. It was old and it was rusty but we loved it for the memories attached to it. It was there where Bua fed us both long before the dinner table was brought in. And now seated on the creaky chairs, playing with our hands as the smell of the delicious parathas reached our noses, we grew impatient. And Bua never brought items one by one. She liked bringing in everything together.

Anjali and I began our professional conversation in the meantime.

"I don't know, Khushi. We are still stuck on almost the same position for 2 months. All the new proportions we are trying out are just not working. It's beginning to show on all of us," she said, her features drooping.

I smacked her for being ridiculous. "Oye! You have reached this far. You just need to give it some time and think over from the beginning. There are chances you will find the flow smoother," I said, clouded with heavy doubt as to what I was saying. I wondered if connecting management with science especially medicine related was a taboo. Nevertheless, since I received a lovely nod from Anjali, I halted my thoughts.

"Bua, enough. I am bursting," I whined as Bua placed the 5th paratha on my plate.

"Eat now, it's ages since you have had a full dinner. Whenever I see you, you are either hooked onto a file or killing your ears with that cell of yours," Bua complained nonchalantly.

I made a face and placed the paratha myself just so that I would not have to fight another battle of words with Bua on my hectic schedule. Anjali, on the other hand, never received any of Bua's eat-or-die threats because she was always one paratha ahead. Anjie's bottomless tummy always took me by surprise and although I am a foodie, my limits were limits and hers would astonish anyone. Anjie helped herself with her 7th paratha while I obliged Bua my 5th, much to my Bua's satisfaction.

A few hours later, we tucked ourselves to bed after I dragged my heavy body right past the stairs. Anjie and I shared a bed and although we begun a conversation fighting over the crankiest topics, sleep overtook our overworked bodies instantly.

Edited by SmokingDreams - 13 years ago
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Author's Note : Since readers for MG version are new, just a short intro. I am Amal. Yet Another Sunset aka YAS is my baby and its the FF that brought me love and so many loyal readers. This FF has quite a history because I had written this twice and abandoned like a cruel witch both the times. But now, I am sticking to this FF because its difficult resisting the temptation to write this story. And the major factor, my readers. I was touched by how they brought YAS to everything even when its no where and I have decided to write it now itself rather than leave till my Boards are done. Which brings me to the fact that I am a pathetic writer in terms of regular updates. I suck at it and with my hectic schedule things are worse now. That's it for my blabber. As for the story, the first part tells nothing about the core of the story. You will have to wait for that in the second/third part. So do stay by till the second/third part is up and then you are free to decide upon your choice to continue or not. Love ya all and hope YAS is accepted with the Maaneetians.

As the story proceeds, the following styles will be used :

Black - For Ridhima's/Khushi's/Geet's point of view.

Grey - For Armaan's/Arnav's/Maan's point of view.

Bold Grey - For narrations, if any.

So here we go. A short chapter. But that's all I could manage tonight.


y e t a n o t h e r s u n s e t


Based on Maan & Geet


c h a p t e r #1


"You need to get some rest ma'am," I heard Saro tell me.

I responded nothing and simply checked my watch for the time. Past 11 p.m. I pondered upon it for a moment before I decided that Saro was right. I nodded. She saw me getting up and I noticed a smile forming on her face. Positively content of my choice of employee, I wordlessly left my cabin and trotted off to my scooter.

"How was your day," I heard my friend, talking chirpily with her mouth full of her food. If it wasn't for my 19 year old friendship with Muskaan, all I would have been able to make out was a bunch of uncategorized guttural sounds.

"Nothing extraordinary," I told her.

"Kies. Come, try this. Bua made it. It's so amazing," Muskaan said, happily shoving the plate towards me. I chuckled at her excitement and took a bit not to disappoint her.

"Mmm," I pronounced Bua's butter chicken as ultra-delicious. Bua, in Hindi means your father's sister and although Bua wasn't mine or Muskaan's in the true sense, we had heard her real life niece calling her so when we were kids and we repeated them on her without any knowledge of what it meant. And Bua never bothered to correct us and so today even after all these years, we still addressed her 'Bua'.

As though to live a century, Bua walked into our room.

"You kids wash up soon. I will lay the dinner. Others have already gone to bed. Come soon. Kay," she said, folding my jeans and racking it into my wardrobe.

"Bua, you go to sleep. It's already so late. We will eat and wash up ourselves," I said and Muskaan nodded vigorously, her butter chicken still melting her mouth.

"Nah! I know you both. You will eat little as long as I don't serve it for you. Nope, come soon," Bua said with finality waving off all our protests. She had her own set of rights upon us and we had learnt long ago that we would rather keep her to them. So I bucked up and quickly took my shower, while Muskaan cleansed her face on the other side with the shower curtain parting us. Like me, Muskaan too had just returned from work.

Muskaan was a doctor by degree but a scientist by actual profession. She had acquired a soft heart for kids with AIDs for no fault of their when she went for training in her 4th year. Ever since, she has been raving about how she will be the first to find a cure for them. If not completely, at least to prolong their lives healthily rather than just painlessly. I admired her for her belief i reaching something as far as that and secretly kept the fulfilment of her success in my prayers.

Quarter an hour later, we were down in our kitchen. Although we had a dining room at 'The Nest' to accommodate its 26 occupants, Muskaan's and my favourite place remained loyal to the cosy 4 chaired breakfast table in the kitchen. It was old and it was rusty but we loved it for the memories attached to it. It was there where Bua fed us both long before the dinner table was brought in. And now seated on the creaky chairs, playing with our hands as the smell of the delicious parathas reached our noses, we grew impatient. And Bua never brought items one by one. She liked bringing in everything together.

Muski and I began our professional conversation in the meantime.

"I don't know, Geet. We are still stuck on almost the same position for 2 months. All the new proportions we are trying out are just not working. It's beginning to show on all of us," she said, her features drooping.

I smacked her for being ridiculous. "Oye! You have reached this far. You just need to give it some time and think over from the beginning. There are chances you will find the flow smoother," I said, clouded with heavy doubt as to what I was saying. I wondered if connecting management with science especially medicine related was a taboo. Nevertheless, since I received a lovely nod from Muskaan, I halted my thoughts.

"Bua, enough. I am bursting," I whined as Bua placed the 5th paratha on my plate.

"Eat now, it's ages since you have had a full dinner. Whenever I see you, you are either hooked onto a file or killing your ears with that cell of yours," Bua complained nonchalantly.

I made a face and placed the paratha myself just so that I would not have to fight another battle of words with Bua on my hectic schedule. Muskaan, on the other hand, never received any of Bua's eat-or-die threats because she was always one paratha ahead. Muski's bottomless tummy always took me by surprise and although I am a foodie, my limits were limits and hers would astonish anyone. Muski helped herself with her 7th paratha while I obliged Bua my 5th, much to my Bua's satisfaction.

A few hours later, we tucked ourselves to bed after I dragged my heavy body right past the stairs. Muski and I shared a bed and although we begun a conversation fighting over the crankiest topics, sleep overtook our overworked bodies instantly.

Edited by SmokingDreams - 13 years ago
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OMG! I'm first! Yayyy! 😃 Okay. So the part, as usual, was A-W-E-S-O-M-E! I loved it a lot! But it was soo small. 😭 Listen. The next one better be longer! 😆 Okay back to the part now. As usual, I just loved the friendship between Riddhima and Muskaan. It's just amazing. I always admire it, especially in this FF. 😃 And truth to be told, I had actually thought you're gonna post the same parts from the other threads. 😆 Oh well. Let's see what happens now. :) Please update super soon and thanks for the PM jaan-e-man. 😃 🤗


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Nope. I am editing the reserve now itself, Ma'am. 😎
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I love you too my Medzi gal. <3 5 minutes aur do mujhe, pls.
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Are you posting the COMPLETE YAS? :O

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