Destined To Be Together...!!!(RN)Epi6/Page24

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Hello Friends...






Yes...M back again... and this time I have brought to you another story which is based on my favourite couple... Rajveer and Naina(RN)...

And for the first time I have tried a new style or writing...

And I do hope that you all like it...

Please drop in with your criticisms and comments because they are my motivation and lifeline...

Without much ado... I present to you the newest RN Fic...







Edited by PrincessFlavia - 13 years ago

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Himalaya ki god me basa hua ek chota sa sheher ' Shimla. Jo Himachal Pradesh ki rajdhani bhi hai' iss chote se hill station me humesha hi yatriyon ka tanta laga rehta hai' kuch yahan ghumne aate hain, kuch apne jagah ki garmiyon se chutkara pane aate hain, to kuch couples honey moon manane. Lekin kisi bhi irade se aaye ho logon ko Shimla itna bha jaati hai ki log uski yaad humesha ke liye apne dilon me sanjon ke le jaate hain.

Inhi pahadiyon ke bich basa hua ye bangle apni haisiyat ka danka bajata hua badi shaan se khada hai. Chahe suraj ki tapti dhup ho ya fir chandrama ki sheetal roshni, andhi ho ya tufaan isne apne aagosh me na jaane kitne hi raaz kaid kar rakhe hain.

Aisa hi ek raaz shayad aaj ki raat iske aagosh me dafan ho jayega. Amavas ki raat thi. Par aasmaan me taron ka dur dur tak koi nishan nahi tha. Badlon ne puri tarah se sheher ko apne kabze me le liya tha. Bijliyan kadak rahi thi. Barish kisi bhi waqt shuru ho sakti thi. Magar uss bangle ke andar sirf andhera hi faila hua nahi tha' balki pure maahaul me ek tarah ki shaitaniyat faili hui thi.

Pehli manzil pe ek kamre ka darwaza khula aur do log bahar aaye. Andhere ki wajah se unke chehre dikhai nahi pad rahe the. Bas itna pata chal raha the ki ek aadmi hai to ek aurat. Dono thodi der ke chup rahe aur fir ek dusre se nazren milayi. Tabhi bahar zordar bijli kadki aur unn dono ka chehra uss roshni me ek pal ke liye naha gaya. Unke chehre pe nachti shaitaniyat unke khatarnaak iradon ki kahani apne aap hi keh rahi thi. Dono ke kadam badhe uss floor ke ek room ki taraf.

Ek dusre kamre me itna andhera nahi tha. EK chote se night lamp ki roshni ne kamre ko nehla diya tha. Kidki band thi par locked nahi. Khidki ke hi paas ek aurat zamin par bekhabar so rahi thi. Usse shayad kisi khatre ka andaza nahi tha. Tabhi shayad use iss baat ka ehesaas hi nahi hua ki kab kamre ki khidki beawaaz khuli' aur kab ek aadmi badi hi savdhaani se uss kamre me dakhil hua. Usse shayad pata tha uss soti hui aurat ke bare me isliye badi chalaki se wo use paar karta hua kamre ke bich me aya. Tabhi kamre ki light chali gayi. Wo aadmi halka sa muskuraya'kismet uske saath thi. 5 min baad kab wo aadmi kamre se bahar nikalkar andheron me kho gaya kisi ko kuch pata nahi chala.

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Intro:-

Awarapan banjarapan
Ek hala hai seene mein
Har dum har pal
baichaini hai
kaun bhala hai seene mein

Pahaadi ki us sab se unchi aur sab se teekhi choti par main khadi soch rahi thi...k jo kadam main uthane ja rahi hun...voh kahan tak sahi hai...aur kahan tak galat...??? na mere aage koi hai aur na hi piche...!!! charon taraf sirf sannata...!!! na aage khushiyon ki aahat hai...aur na hi piche jitne dard sahe hain...unhe bhulne ki himmat...!!! toh phir jeeyun toh kyoun jeeyun...aur kis k liye...???'

Is dharti par
jis pal sooraj
roj savere ugta hai
Apne liye toh thik ussi pal
roj dhala hai
seene mein
Awarapan banjarapan
Ek hala hai seene mein

us pahadi k ek aur jagah par khada voh soch raha tha...'sab kuch toh hai...mere paas...phir kyoun main yeh kadam uthane ja raha hun...??? sirf jeena hi sab kuch nahi hota...par...koi toh sath ho...!!! jab koi sath hi nahi...koi rishta hi nahi... toh kyoun jeeyun main...??? vaise bhi yeh zindagi toh kabhi bhi chali jayegi...toh phir main kyoun is bandhan me khud ko taklif dun...???'

Janne yeh kaisi aag lagi hai
usmein dhua naa chingari
ho na ho
is baar kahi toh khwab jala hai
seene mein
Awarapan banjarapan
Ek hala hai seene mein

dono k kadam...aage badhe...pahadi ki chotiyon par se niche dekha... jahan zameen bhi nahi dikh rahi thi...!!! phir bhi unhe lag raha tha ki... niche un ka sukun hai...!!! jo ki unhe milega...un dono k kadam aage badhe...achanak hi dono k kanon me kisi k rone ki aahat sunayi di...

kuch pal baad...

Edited by PrincessFlavia - 13 years ago
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Episode : 1:

voh kareeb 3-4 saal ki thi...chup-chap baithi hui thi...!!!

us k samne do insaan kafi jhagda karr rahe the...!!! voh unhe hairani

se dekh rahi thi...kabhi us ladki ki taraf toh kabhi us ladke ki taraf...

dat boy:- "dekho...main yahan pehle aaya hun...is bachhi par pehli

nazar meri padi thi...aur ab ise main sath me le kar jayunga... samjhi...???"

dat girl:-"kya ho gaya jo aap pahle aaye hain toh..??? bachhi ro rahi thi...aur mere goad me aane k baad hi voh chup hui...!!! voh toh bichari roye ja rahi thi...aur aap chup karwa hi nahi pa rahe the...!!! maine use sambhala...isiliye voh mere sath jayegi...!!!"

dat boy:- "main use chup karwa hi leta...agar tum bich me haddi ban kar nahi ghushti toh...???"

dat girl:- "ohooo...bade aaye chup karwanewale...!!! agar itni hi himmat thi toh jab main ise chup karwa rahi thi...aap dur khade chup chup dekh kyoun rahe the...???"

dat boy:- "kyoun ki...manners kya hota hai...yeh achhe se janta hun main...!!! ek ladki k goad me se bachhe ko cheen kar le aana bad manners hota hai...!!! aur phir main kyoun tumhe samjha raha hun...jis k paas aqal ka ek gram bhi nahi hai...!!! ab main is bachhi ko sath me le kar ja raha hun...mujhe tum jaisi kamm aqal k ladki k sath koi jhik-jhik hi nahi karni...!!!"

us ne gusse se kaha:- "kya kaha...??? kamm...aqalwali ladki...??? agar yeh kam-aqalwali ladki ne apna thoda sa aqal laga liya na...toh is waqt tum jail me hoge samjhe...???"

voh sidha 'aap' se 'tum' par aa gayi...!!!"

dat boy:- "aare jayo...jayo...badi aayi mujhe jail bhejnewali...!!! tumhare jaise baht dekhe hain samjhi...???"

dat girl:- "jarur dekha hoga...lekin pala nahi pada hoga...!!! agar pala pad jata na...toh yahan khade bhi nahi hote...!!!"

voh bachhi jo thodi der pahle baht ro rahi thi...jise us ladki ne chup karwaya tha...voh chup chap baith kar un ka jhagda dekh rahi thi...!!!

pata nahi voh kya samjhi...par in dono k jhagde ko dekh kar...voh achanak zor se hass uthi...aur in-balanced hui...toh piche ki aur girnewali thi...tabhi us ladka aur ladki ne sath me use girte hue thaam liya...!!! voh bachhi un dono ko dekh kar mushkurayi...!!! us k us mushkurahat me ek jadu tha...!!! jis ki wajah se voh dono bhi chup ho gaye...aur dono k chehre par bhi mushkurahat aa gayi...!!!

tabhi ek aadmi...aage aaya aur kaha:- "kafi samay se...aap dono jhagda karr rahe the...!!! kya lagte hain aap dono is bachhi k...???"

voh ladka n ladki sath me bol pade:- "papa...mamma...!!!"

dono ne ek dushre ko dekha...hairani se...aur gusse se phir se muh jhatak diya...!!!

voh insaan bol pada:-" phir thik hai...!!! shaadi hone k baad...aur khaas kar k jab ek bachha ho jaye toh...pati patni k bich aksar aise jhagde hote hi rahte hain...!!!"

voh ladka aur ladki dono hi hairan the...

dat boy:-"pati...aur...patni...???"

dat girl:-"koun pati...aur patni...???"

voh insan:- "toh kya aap dono...husband-wife nahi ho...??? toh phir yeh bachha kis ka hai...???"

voh ladka turant bol pada:-"jee haan...aap ne sahi pahchana... hum pati-patni hi hain...!!! aur yeh hamari pyari si...bachhi hai...!!! meri patni ko gussa thoda jyada aata hai...isiliye yeh jhagda ho gaya...!!! hum aapas me ise suljha lenge...!!!"

voh ladki turant bol padi:- "kya bakk rahe ho...???"

us ladke ne dhire se us ladki k kanon me kaha:- "agar is aadmi ko pata chal gaya ki is bachhi k hum kuch nahi lagte ...toh voh is bachhi ko le kar police station chala jayega...ya phir kisi orphanage me...is se behtar hai ki hum aapas me baad me settle kar lenge...!!!"

voh ladki kuch nahi boli...apni badi badi ankhon se use dekhne lagi...

voh aadmi:- "kya hua madam...??? kya yeh aap k pati nahi hai...???"

dat girl:- "kahe ka pati...??? yeh mere kuch bhi nahi lagte...!!!"

voh ladka thoda disappointed hua ki...is ladki ne us ki baat nahi maani...

us ladki ne phir se kaha;- "puchiye in se...kabhi inhone pati hone ka koi farz nibhaya hai...???

voh aadmi:- "dekhiye...yeh aap dono ka aapsi jhagda hai...ghar me ja kar suljhayiye...!!! is tarah se bahr...yeh sab aap ko sobha nahi deta...!!!"

voh ladki:- "Sobha ho ya phir un ki beti Ekta ho...mujhe koi farq nahi padta...!!! inhe sabak sikhana tha...tabhi toh inhe le kar main yahan par aayi thi...!!! taki hum dono dil khol kar jhagda kar saken...!!! aap ko pata hai...ghar me kitne kaam hote hain...thik se jhagda karne k liye bhi tym nahi milta...!!! aur hum ne aaj baht dino baad plan banaya tha ki...chalo aaj bahar chalte hain...dil khol kar jhagda karenge...!!! par nahi...yahan par bhi aap tapak pade...!!! vaise aap hain koun...???"

voh aadmi:- "main ins Arjun singh...!!! bass...yahan par ghumne aaya tha...aur aap dono ka jhagda aur is bachhi k rone ki awaz se...yahan par aa gaya...!!!"

Police ka naam sunte hi dono...thoda sa chup hue...voh ladka bola:- "sorry sir...hum apna jhagde ka session ghar me hi complite kar lenge...!!!"

us ladke ne us bachhi ko apne goad me uthaya...aur kaha:- "chalo Bhaagwaan ...ghar chalte hain...!!!"

ladki ne us bachhi ko us ladke k hathon se khinch kar apne goad me le kar aayi...!!! us ladke ne kuch nahi kaha...voh bachhi bhi chup ho gayi thi...aur mushkura rahi thi...!!!

kuch pal baad...dono ek park me baithe hue the...!!! ek bade se paid k niche...!!! voh ladki us bachhi ko biscuits khila rahi thi...thodi der baad...us ne khane se mana kiya...toh us ne use pani peelaya...voh peene ke baad...dono ko dekhne lagi...!!!

un dono ko hassi aayi...dono ne mushkura diya...toh voh bachhi bhi hass padi...!!! us ladke ne use goad me liya...aur us ladki se pucha:- "main ise thoda sa ghuma-phira kar sula deta hun...!!! phir hum dono baat karenge...!!! aap mujh par yakeen kar sakti hain...varna...ins Arjun singh toh hain hi...!!!"

voh ladki mushkurayi...!!! voh ladka us bachhi ko goad me liye...thodi hi duri par ghumne laga...sayad kuch gunguna raha tha...!!! thodi der baad...voh bachhi jab so gayi...toh voh us ladki k kareeb aaya...!!! us ladki k goad me use sulaya...!!! aur us k kareeb ja kar baitha...!!!

sab se pahle us ladke ne baat suru ki...:- "mera naam...rajeev hai...Rajeev Kapoor...aur aap...???"

voh ladki:- "Naina

Rajeev:- "Naina...baht khubshurat naam hai...!!! pura naam...???"

Naina:- "sirf...Naina...aur kuch nahi...!!! main ek orphanage me pali badhi hun...!!! aur yehi vajah thi ki main is bachhi ko dekh kar khud ko sambhal nahi payi...aur...

rajeev:- "aap vahan suicide karne gayi thi na...???"

maine kuch nahi kaha...saar jhuka diya...us bachhi k sar par apna hath rakha...mujhe kuch thik se dikhayi nahi de raha tha...sayad ankhon me anshun the...!!!

rajeev ne sayad samjha us ne kaha:- "aap ko pata hai...main bhi vahan par suiside karne hi gaya tha...!!!"

Naina hassi aur kaha:- "janti hun...!!!"

rajeev:- "kaise...???"

Naina:- "ek hi biradari k hain na...isiliye pahchan gayi...!!!"

rajeev:- "matlab...'suiside biradari k'...

Naina:- "haan...

dono hi hassne lage...!!! kuch der pahle jo zindagi unhe bojh lag rahi thi...ab unhe us zindagi me mushkurahat bhi mil gaye the...!!!

rajeev:- "aap rahti kahan hain...???"

Naina:- "main ek 'working women's hostel' me rahti thi...!!!"

rajeev:- "rahti thi matlab...???"

Naina ne aage kuch nahi kaha...sayad voh apne atit k panne itni jaldi kisi ajnabi k samne kholna nahi chahti thi...!!!

Rajeev:- "tum toh mera naam janti hi ho na...???(voh thoda ruka...phir pucha...)...ahh...'tum' kah sakta hun...???"

Naina mushkurayi aur 'haan'...kaha...

rajeev:- "kal tak mere ghar par sabhi the...!!! do hafte pahle...mere parents ki ek accident me death ho gayi...!!! phir...

rajeev kuch kahte hue ruka...!!! baat ko badalte hue us ne kaha:- "main khud ko kafi akela feel karr raha tha...isiliye vahan par gaya tha...!!! aisa laga ki zindagi k aur kuch mayne bache hi nahi hai...!!! par jab is bachhi ko us halat me dekha...toh achanak jeene ki ek chah uthi...aur main...

Naina...ne samjaha...Rajeev ki baat...aur voh yeh bhi jaan gayi ki Rajeev bhi us se kuch chupa raha hai...!!!

rajeev:- "abhi kahan jayogi tum...???"

Naina:- "pata nahi...!!! usi hostel me phir se jayungi...!!! par mujhe chinta is bachhi ki hai...!!!"

rajeev:- "tum kahin job karti ho...???"

Naina:- "kal tak karti thi...par aaj mere paas koi job nahi hai...!!! lagta hai phir se job dhundhni padegi...!!!"

rajeev:- "mere paas...ek idea hai...agar tum chaho toh...???"

Naina:- "kahiye...

Rajeev:- "tum is bachhi k sath mere ghar chal sakti ho...!!!"

Naina ne hairani se dekha:-

rajeev us k dil ki baat samajh raha tha...:-"darne ki koi baat nahi hai...!!! mere ghar par mere alawa aur koi nahi rahta...aur yeh baat sayad tumhe ajeeb lage...!!! par main jo kah raha hun...voh pahle sun lo...!!! main ek call center me manager hun...isiliye mujhe raat bhar bahar rahna padta hai...!!! aur subah 8 baje main wapas aata hun...!!! tum apni job k liye subah chali jayogi...toh subah main is ka khayal rakh liya karuga...aur raat ko tum...!!!"

Naina ko idea achha laga...!!! ab tak jitna bhi us ne rajeev ko pahchana hai...aaj tak mile hue sare insano me toh achha hi hai...!!! us k dil ne kaha ki voh ek baar is par bhi bharosha kar k dekh sakti hai...!!! Aur waise bhi use sar chupane ki ek jagah to chahiye hi thi' uske paas option kuch tha hi kahan'!!

Rajeev:- "parrr...

Naina:- "par...kya...???"

rajeev:- "Sunday ko meri chutti hoti hai...!!! aur main din bhar ghar me rahta hun...!!!"

Naina:- "achha hai...!!! us din hum is k sath baht sara waqt bita sakte hain...!!!"

rajeev:- "tumhe koi prob nahi hai...???"

Naina:- "nahi...

rajeev:- "gr888888...!!! ahh...ek aur baat...!!!"

Naina:- "haan...kahiye na...???"

Rajeev:- "kab tak hum is bachhi ko aise hi bulate rahenge...!!! is bachhi ko koi naam bhi toh dena chahiye na...???"

Naina:- "haan...main ek naam kahun...???"

rajeev:- "haan...kaho na...???"

Naina:- "...PRIYA...

rajeev:- "baht khubshurat naam hai...!!!"

achank rajeev ki nazar padi...us bachhi k frock me chote se pocket me rakhe hue ek paper par...!!!

rajeev:- "yeh kya hai...???

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Edited by PrincessFlavia - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Hi Doston...

Lo mai fir se aa gayi aap sabko pakane ke liye... well ab shuru kar hi diya hai to ant tak to jhelna hi padega...kya karen...

Sabse pehle iss plot ke liye ek bada sa thanks ek khaas insaan ko... PRIYA...!!!





Aur ab baari hai aap sab logon ki... to ab chuki ye pehla part hai to mere paas kehne ko kuch khaas hai nahi...

To aap log isse padhiye aur comments karna mat bhuliyega...

Aur na hi LIKE button ko use karna...

Bye...!!!


Edited by PrincessFlavia - 13 years ago
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Hiee Guglu🤗

Intro kafi acha laga hmm so story mein suspense hai maza ayega...👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼


Wah..!!! RN ki mulakat kya jhakkas tarike se hui 😆 😉. Dono ko jab pata jala woh admi Police wala hai toh kaise sitti pitti goom.😆😆😆. Kya dialogue tha Raj ka
chalo Bhaagwaan ...ghar chalte hain...!!!"🤣🤣🤣


So Raj aur N aina ka koi past hain jise woh ek dusre se chupa rahe hain...🤔🤔🤔. akir dono ek hi biradri ke jo nikle😆😆😆.


Chalo dono ki mulakat hui toh ek bachi ki wajah se acha hai 😃😃😃 aur mujhe lag raha hai ke jo story mein suspense hain woh shayad iss bachi se jude huye hain.😉😉😉


Chalo kam se kam in dono ka jhagda toh band hua aur kisi nateeje par pahuche raat mein Naina bacchi ko sambhale gi aur din mein Raj good but Sunday ke dono ko sath hi rehna hoga acha hi hai sath hona bhi chahiye beshak ek hi din kyoun na ho...😉😉😉


Aur yeh bachi Priya zaroor shararti hogi akhir iska naam Priya jo hai 🤣 🤣🤣 first part mein hi pata chal gya..

con't soon
Thanx for the PM Priya (Guglu mujhe PM zarooor karna😉)
Ayushi.⭐️



Edited by sainiayshi14 - 13 years ago
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Wow...lovely story!! 👏 Kitne dino baad maine ek UD read kiya...wahh!! Maza aa gaya!! Actually PM dekha new fic ka to socha padh leti hu...and its such a beautiful concept. Agar iska shrey Priya ko jata hai to thank you Priya ji...😃😃

Mujhe bahut hi achha lag raha tha ye padhke...Guglu you have described the scenes so beautifully...👏👏...Rajeev and Naina to achhe lagne hi hai...lekin choti si stint me Arjun Singh bhi achha laga mujhe...😉...aur haan...Priya ji ki lovely concept wali iss story me ek lil Priya ko dekh kar main bahut khush hu...mujhe waise bhi badi wali se aaj kal darr lagta hai..😆😆

Khair...will be looking forward to this fic...and guess I dont need to say...PM me!! 😃😉

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Hum RESERVED Karr chuke sanam...😆
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Posted: 13 years ago
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firstly thnk u for yet another fic...👏👏

Intro was very beautiful...👏👏😳

Njoyed d way it began and d convos betwn RN was awesome...👏

gr8 updt...
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hi
the up is good
its really different story
so naina and raj both saw a girl who was crying
they both started fighting as who is to take this girl
during their quarellel a man came and adviced them that quarelling infornt of the road doesnt suit them
they should go to their house with their baby and sort out their problem
by hearing that person calling them husband and wife
both rajeev and naina got shocked
naina wanted to clear his doubt but rajeev stopped her by saying that if she tells him that they are not the parents of that girl
then he will surely take the girl either to police station or to any orphane
by hearing this naina kept silent and flows with what rajeev is saying
as the person left
they both took the girl with them
and by making her sleep they both decussed about the life
rajeev and naina both said that they both went their to commit suiside
as they both are alone in this world
plz cont soon and pm me

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