Kriyaansh FF-YOung Love NOTE(pg 150) - Page 91

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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: _sana.Magic_

sorry for the really late reply. but it was wonderful. I just loved it.

Dats k😊
Thnxxx a lot🤗
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Posted: 13 years ago

Originally posted by: kriyansh24

comon make rey realise

very soon😉
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Posted: 13 years ago

Kria:*blushing*

Needhi: di...aapko kya hua hai...aap aise ajeeb sa behve kyu kr rhe ho?

Kria: luks @ nidhi wid a smile...n says..in a shy andaz...ajeeb?? Haan ye ajeeb to hai...par mj bht accha lag raha hai

Needhi:*self talk* lagta hai yeh poori pagal hogayi hai...hey bhagwan ji mri di ki raksha krna...

Kria starts humming song kuch to hua hai...

Needhi: makes weird face... Di aap thoda side me ajayengi...aap mri jagah pr so rahe ho...

Kria: hmmm...toh kya hua? Aaj yeh pura bed sirf mera hai...tu jake sofa pe soja

Needhi: di hato...mj apni jagah pr hi sona hai...hato...she pushes kria...

Kria rolls to hr side...

Needhi: uff aap kitni bhari ho

Kria: shut up...

Needhi:smiles... Gud ni8 di..n she sleeps

Kria: gud ni8... Hmmm... In a vry low sound she says Mai kal hi rey se jake apne dil ki baat kehdungi fir jo hoga dekha jayega... Par rey se pehle muje ye baat neha ko kehni chahiye...arrey baap re neha se yaad aya..maine to usse pucha hi nahi ki wo ghar kaise aayi kab aayi ufff sb reyansh ki wajah se...

Rey: muje mom se iss tarah se baat nahi krni chahiye thi... damn... I jst cant control my anger... gusse me kuch b boldeta hu...chey... Ab jaake mom ko manana padega...

He knocks d door of sunita's room...bt she dsnt open...

Rey: mom plzzz open d door... knocks again

Sunita shouts aap jaiye yahan se...muje apse koi baat nahi krni...*cries louder*

Rey: mom im sryy plz darwaza kholo... I beg u...plzzz mom...he keeps knocking

Sunita: in a low voice huh knock krne do..mai door nhi kholungi...

Rey: aap door kholengi ya nahi

Sunita: nahi

Rey: mom agar aapne door nhi khola to mai kahi chala jaunga...

Sunita: haan jaiye mai aapki dhamkiyo se nahi darnewali

Rey: in a low voice ye to aise nahi manengi... mai chup jata hu..to ye zarur kholengi...

Aftr 5 mins

Sunita: rey kahi sachme to nahi chale gaye... She comes running n opens d door... N in a tensed voice shouts Reyansh... Reyansh...

Rey: mom peeche mudke dekho..mai yahi khada hu...

Sunita: aap mere sath mazakh kr rahe the..? Angrily... N moves inside hr room...n tries to close d door...

Rey: *holds d door* mom door band mat karo..mri baat suno

Sunita: hame nahi sunni aapki bakwas...

Rey: sunni padegi...dekho zid mat kariye..

Sunita: mai hoti kon hu kuch krnewali...? Aapki nazar mai ek mujrim hu na

Rey: nahi mom...m sry wo mai gusse me kuch zyada bol gaya... M really vry sry

Sunita: reyansh mai aapse aur aapke papa se bht pyaar karti hu beta... Aap muje galat mat samajhna...Cries

Rey hugs his mom..n says mai b aapse bht pyaar krta hu mom... Mai bht bura hu...maine aapko hurt kiya..tears roll down his cheeks

Sunita:no beta... Wipes his tears...tum mere bht acche aur pyaare bete ho... Bas thode se khadoos aur nakchade ho...smiles...

Rey too smiles... I love u mom..

Sunita: love u too... ab toh bata dijiye k wo ladki kon thi:P

Rey: ufff...muje sona hai...n he sleeps on sunita's lap...

Sunita: *laughs* n kisses rey's forehead...

Kria calls up neha

Neha: hello

Kria: hey sweety...kaisi hai?

Neha: mai to thik hu...

Kria: accha... So rahi thi?

Neha: raat ko insan sote hai kria...

Kria: hmmm... Tu ghar kab aayi aur kaise..??

Neha: mai 5 baje ghar aayi aur vicky ne drop kiya?

Kria: *shockd* kya vicky ne?? Par wo to chala gaya tha

Neha: wo tri bike garage me chodke wapas aaya colg k paas aur mre wait kr raha tha... Mai to shock hogayi thi usse dekh kr... Ha ha

Kria: OMG sacchi... How sweet...

Neha: hmmm fir jab maine usse pucha k yaha kya kar rhe ho? To bola tumhara wait..ab chalo...mj bhi ghar jana hai..m gettng late...

Kria: ha ha... Dekha...tu usse bekaar me ladti hai...kitna accha hai mera dost...

Neha: bas ek cheez hi usne acchi ki...fir to dnt ask raaste me itna pareshan kiya na muje...mera toh mann kr raha tha k mai uski bike se kood jaun

Kria: *laughs* pagal... Ha ha ha... Sun mj tjse kuch kehna hai...

Neha: haan bolna...

Kria: wo mai keh rhi thi k...

Padma knocks d door

Kria: oye mamma agayi kal subah baat karte hai gud ni8...

Neha: gud ni8

kria opens d door

Padma: tu abhi tak soyi nahi...kissse batein kr rhi thi

Kria: kissi se nahi mamma..

Padma: jhut mat bol phone pe baat kr rhi thi na...maine tj kitni baar kaha raat ko cell use nahi karte..she holds kria's ear

Kria: sryyy mamma ouch...

Padma: chup chap soja...

Kria:ok...


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Posted: 13 years ago
*edited*

I REALLY LOVED SITER SISTER KA PYAAR🤣😍

hayee❤️ beautiful!!!!!!😉😳


kria soo lost😉 hayeee😳 soo cute😆... kria FINALLY REALISED SHE IS IN LUV😆 wooowww🤣 bagwaan ne itni jaldi acche dimaag infact super fast dimaag dedi usse😆 THNK U🤗 UNIVERSE JI🤣🤣

REY Consols his mother!!😛 OMG that was soo affectional!!👍🏼

n then he sleeps on her laps!! ahww😳 ahww😳 ahwww😳😳... HOW he manaofys his mom ahwww😃 tat ws sooo sweet!!!

bas ab Mr.Bhuddu🤣 jaldi kria ke liye apne pyaar ko realise karde toh bada maza ayega...😆😆

AMAZING UPDT one AGAIn
THE GREAT WRITTER🤗 WID AGAIN GREAT UPDT😍

LOVED IT😳

suzi one again gud job👏 lov u🤗

jaldi jaldi updt kia kar plzz intezaar nhi ho rha hai😕


Edited by nams_arsha - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
nice update...
kria already fultoo lattoo ovr Rey...
par Rey par to koi asar hi nahi hua...to kaise hoga...
m loving this track nw...
par Rey ko v jaldi realise karwao...aftrall tumhare suru k updates mein tumne yehi to dikhaye the...dat Rey goes to the party bcoz Kria is goin...
so y changing dat track nw...
plzzz kuch karo...Rey ko firse realize karwao...
n do update the nxt part sssooonnn...
😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
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Posted: 13 years ago
plzz..rey ko bhi kria ke liye love realize karava do...
waiting for your next update...
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Posted: 13 years ago
wow i loved the way u made rey apologise n kriya going to confess wow
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Posted: 13 years ago
Plz plz plz rey ko jaldi realize karvao. N btw its as usual gr8 . Kria is toh completly latoo over rey. Plz update the nxt part soon. N thanx 4 d pm...
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Posted: 13 years ago
Awesome as always...hope ki rey ko bhi kriya k liye feelings ealize ho jaye...well update the next part soon...
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Posted: 13 years ago
waiting desperately for your next part!!! jaldi update karo na!!!😊 this part was awesome as always!!!👍🏼

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