Aap mujhe ache lagne lage-ff 4 Jai-Bani

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Posted: 19 years ago
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Part-1…Bani is an orphan who is in an orphanage.18 yrs old.Just finished 12th with distinction.
All r very happy.The mother of the orphanage calls Bani 2 room:there is a happy news.ur admission is ready in mumbai college.u can stay in the hostel
Bani is very happy:thanku mother
M:ur thanks shud b 2 God & ur uncle
B smiles & goes.
Another nu asks mother:why did'nt u tell her that her uncle is no more & now its his son who is sponsoring
M:I did'nt want 2 make her upset

Bani prays:Jesus..thanx a lot 4 giving me a sweet uncle.Actually uncle is not related 2 me.i dunno who he is.i have'nt seen him yet.i dunno his name.But still he has been helping me since childhood.without his sponsership,I wud'nt hav reached this level

B writes a letter 2 the uncle:Dear uncle,bcoz of ur help,I'm coming 2 mumbai 2 join college.Thanx a lot.i hope atleast in mumbai I'l b able 2 see u
B gives the letter 2 mother.
M:I'l send this letter 2 ur uncle
She gives a watch 2 her:this watch is sent by ur uncle 4 u
B smiles.
M:being a mother,I'm not supposed 2 make u lie.but I've no other option.u shud'nt tell any1 that u r an orphan.u tell that ur parents r in states
B:yes mother

Jai Walia is a rich businessman.He gets a letter.His sister Jigyasa asks:whose letter is this bayya?
J:did'nt I tell u that I've taken the responsibility 2 sponser an orphan who used 2 b sponsored by our dad till his death?that girl's letter
Jig smiles.

Bani joins college.While B was walking,by mistake sum1 hits her.her books fal down.B becomes angry:cant u see?my books…
He:sorry
He helps her 2 take books from the floor.He smiles at her.B was serious.
He extends his arm:hi,I'm Saahil
B:so what shud I do?
S gets embarrassed.B goes.S smiles.

B is in the classroom.B is tensed:I feel very strange.new city.rich students.i feel lonely

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Muskan09 thumbnail
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Posted: 19 years ago
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I am the first u read 😃
plz continue soon
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 Wow nice story please continue soon 😛
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thtz was wicked hun 👏 👏 👏
keep it up!! 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 19 years ago
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totally awesome 👏
can't wait for the next part
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Posted: 19 years ago
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wow hun!! fab start!!😛

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nice start jas
please continue soon 😛
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😛 can't wait till the next part.....!!!that was awesome
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Posted: 19 years ago
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Oye ... Pleaze contunue .. this sounds like another serial besides ekta's yaar . So it wasnt pushkar in college But Sahil ...? hmmm Irada Kya Hai .. Bani walia mansion mien Nahi rehti ...?
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Posted: 19 years ago
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👏 👏 👏 awesome start!! lyke da way u started it 😃
continue soon! 😃

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