Arman And Ritzi FF DMG

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Niki

@lovculture

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hi guys.😊 I hav been a silent reader of DMG fanfics for past few months and i absolutley adore😍 all the couples in the show. ArRi,AtAn,RaMu,ShKi,AbNi. So all the fanfics i have read about DMG have inspired me to write one myself.I am new to India-Forums and i dont know how this all works but i am going to try and learn everything as quick. Also it would be great if i had all your help and support.😃

So i am starting this Fanfic but i dont know the name yet, i guess i will figure it out in time.

Well i am typing out the Character sketch and Promo, i will have it posted by today.

Please also tell me if you want me to continue then.😃

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Character Sketch: Page 1

Intro into Chapter: Page 1

Chapter 1: Page 2

Chapter 2: Page 3

Chapter 3: Page 5

Chapter 4: Page 5

Chapter 5: Page 6

Chapter 6: Page 9

Chapter 7: Page 10

IMPORTANT NOTE: Page 12

Edited by lovculture - 12 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

Waiting 4 d part.
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Niki

@lovculture

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Posted: 13 years ago

CHARACTER SKETCH

THE MALLIK'S

Anurag Mallik: (Cezanne Khan) Head of the family and a big business tycoon in India. He is very hard working, focused, yet he cares about his family a lot. He is a very cool dad and sometimes becomes a kid himself. The most important people in his life are his wife and two sons.

Prerna Mallik: (Shweta Tiwari) Wife of Anurag Mallik. She is sweet, caring and loves her kids but sometimes gets angry too because the three most important men in her life tease her and play so many pranks (lol we all know who she is talking about). She is a very famous neuro surgeon in Sanjeevani. She is very modern and a very cool mom.

☺️Arman Mallik: Eldest son of Anurag and Prerna. He is very hot and every girl is after him.(I made him a little different from DMG) He flirts only a little bit and never plays with a girls emotions. He is very serious and respectful when it comes to work but is a big prankster at the same time. Starting his internship at Sanjeevani hospital. Also, he believes in love and that that there is a soul mate for everyone.

Atul Mallik: Youngest son. Smart,cute,funny and a prankster along with his brother. Other than that he is the same as in DMG. Very bhola bhala type. He is also starting his internship at Sanjeevani along with his Bro Arman. He wants a nice girl that will understand and always love him.😊

THE GUPTA'S

Shashank Gupta: He is the head/dean of Sanjeevani, the best hospital in Bombay. He is a very respected doctor and is specialized in various areas of medicine. Loves his daughters very much and would do anything for their happiness. He is a very cool dad and lets his daughters make their own decisions as he wants them to learn for themselves.

Padma Gupta: Wife of Shashank Gupta. Is very nice and chilled, same as she was in DMG. But, she is still the head nurse of sanjeevani.

Nani: Head of the house. Loves her granddaughters equally. she is the same as in DMG.

Riddhima Gupta: Twin of anjali Gupta. A very happy go lucky girl. Opposite from DMG. She loves to prank people but she is still the sweet, kind, caring Ritzi we all love and know😃. Very open minded and modern but knows her traditional values equally well. Starting internship at sanjeevani. She wants to fall in love with her prince charming.

Anjali Gupta: Twin of Riddhima Gupta. Very different form DMG. She is modern yet traditional at the same time. She is kind, gentle and not self-centered as she was in DMG. Starting her internship along with Ritzi. She wants a nice guy that is funny, charming, yet down to earth.(kind of like Atul don't you think)😉

OTHER CHARACTERS

Rahul Grewal: Same as in DMG. He has never met Muskan or Arman before though.

Muskan Chadda: Same as in DMG( as i love her character and her acting as muskan). Again she has never met Rahul.

Dr. Keerti: Same as in DMG. Still a hitler and gabbar😆. Secretly in love with Shubhankar.

Dr. shubhankar: same as in DMG. Crazy about Keerti and gets nervous in front of her ha...Ha...

Other Characters will be added as the story goes on.

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Ok so here were the characters. Tell me what you think. I will post the promo today as well.😃

janu

Edited by lovculture - 12 years ago

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Bhavya

@Bhavya8

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey welcome to IF!

And congratulations on your first ff!!!

Good luck!

I really like the character sketch, it seems very interesting and I'm looking forward to future updates!

Please pm me!!!!😃

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Niki

@lovculture

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

Ok so here is a little intro/promo/teaser type of thing. Hope you like it.

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Gupta Mansion

Anjali: "Ritzi utho, aaj hamara Sanjeevani ka pehela din hai. Common get up yaar."

We see a girl getting up and stretching.

Riddhima: "Good morning Anji."

Anjali: "Good morning ki bacchi ab jaldi kar varna ham pehale din hi late ho jaaye ge. Hume 9:00AM ko report karna hai and it is already 7:00AM, aur phir tumhe tayyar hone me kitna time lagta hai."

Riddhima: "Accha, tum bhi kuch kam nahi ho, ok."😡😉

Anjali: "Hanh hanh theek hai at least maine shower toh le leya hai. Ab jaa jaldi se naha le mamma ne breakfast ke leye neche bulaya hai."

Riddhima: "Theek hai ...theek hai jaa rahi hu baba."

Ritzi goes to take a shower and Anji is getting ready. After they both are done we see them going down the stairs and talking.

Anjali: "Waah Waah aaj toh tune record hi tod diya, kya baat hai. Itne jaldi naha kar tayaar bhi ho gayi."😆

Ridhima: "Anji common yaar stop teasing me, chal waise tujhe toh mai baad me dheak loongi😉. Pehle badi bhook lagi hai."

They both sit down at the table and wish their parents good morning. We see padma setting breakfast for everyone.

Padma: "Are Riddhima, itne jaldi tayaar ho gayi."😲

Padma is shocked to see Ritzi ready already and we Anji silently laughing.😆

Riddhima: "Mom aap bhi mat shuru ho jaiye pease. Jab se Anji bhi aise keh rahi hai. Ab kya mai apne career ke pehale din hi late ho jaou. Hanh bolo?"

Shashank: "Are nahi beta yeh toh bohot hi acchi baat hai. I am proud of you. Aur woh kehte hai na first impression is the last impression."

Ritzi turns towards to Anji and gives her a take that! look.😛

Anjali: "Accha chalo chodo yeh saab baat, ab ham chale Ritzi? Already 8:10AM ho gaya hai. I don't want to be late."

They finish their breakfast quickly, take their parents aisharwad and leave for Sanjeevani.

Mallik Mansion

We see a guy all wet running after another one. There is a man sitting in the living room reading a news paper and after hearing so much noise looks up.

Anurag: "Are yeh kya kar rahe ho tum dono? Agar tumhari mom ne sunliya na toh tum dono ko itni daat padegi pata hai na. Guys ruk bhi jao."

Atul: "DAD!! Deko na is Arman pagal ne kya kiya. Mai already taayar ho gaya tha aur is gadhe ko abhi hi mazak sujha. Mujhe pura bheega diya."

Anurag looks at Arman and winks.

Anurag: "Arman! Kyu kiya tumne aisa? Pata hai na aaj tum dono ka Sanjeevani me pehla din hai."

Arman: "Dad vv..vo kya hai na, mai toh sirf mood ko light kar raha tha."

Arman tries to hide his smile because he knows that his dad is acting to pull Atuls leg.

Anurag: "Waise kash..."

Atul: "Kash kya dad?"

Anurag: "Kash ki mai tumhara reaction dekne ke liye waha hota."

Anurag and Arman both start laughing.

Atul: KYA papa!!!

Voice: "Kya ho raha hai yaha"???

Atul: "MOM deko na... Arman ne mere pure kapde geele kar diye ,aur ab papa bhi bro ka saath de rahe hai."

Prerna: "Kyu saata rahe ho mere bachhe ko? Aur Arman maine tum se kal kitni baar kaha tha ki aaj mujhe koi sharat nai chahiye. Aur Anurag aap ko toh samaj na chahiye na. Ab ja kar chup chap nashta kar lo."

Arman: "Par mom..."

Prerna: "Chup! Mai kuch nahi sunna chati. Atul tum jaa kar change kar lo. Tab tak mai tumhare liye aloo ke parathe lati hu."

Arman: "Par maa ham..."

Arman shuts up as he sees his mothers angry expression.

Arman: (Kya yaar aaj mere favorite parathe nahi milege.)

After the whole fiasco and breakfast is done, Atul and Arman get up to leave.

Atul: "Bye mom and dad hame ab nikal na chaheye 9:00AM ko report karna hai."

They bend down and take their parents aisharwad.

Prerna: "Bye baccho. Dhyan se kaam karna aur mai tumhe hospital me milti hu."

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so this is it an intro into our characters lives. Hope you all liked it.😃 Please comment. Thanks.

Edited by lovculture - 12 years ago

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Niki

@lovculture

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Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys I will be posting first chapter soon.

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Niki

@lovculture

Beginner

Posted: 13 years ago

Hey guys finally my first Chapter is here.😃CHAPTER 1

SANJEEVANI

Anjali and Riddhima have arrived in Sanjeevani and as they are walking, a guy in front of them slips turns and falls over Anjali.😲They are both down on the floor in the lobby and they see each others eyes😍. Anjali is mesmarized by the handsom looking guy and is just staring away into his eyes. The guy is feeling the same thing. But they are both snapped out of it when Riddhima starts helping them up. They start blushing which does not go unnoticed by Riddhima.☺️

Ri: oh my gosh are you guys ok?

An: ya Ritzi i am fine.

Guy: i am so sorry pata nahi kaise pair phisal gaya. Tum teek to ho na.😊

An: Hah mai bilkul teek hu. Dont worry about it.

Guy:By the way mera naam Atul hai.😊

An: Hi i am Anjali.

At:(Wah kitna pyara😃 naam hai bilkul uss hi ki tarha)

Ri: Hi aur mai hu Riddhima. Anjali ki twin sister. Atul kya hai na, ab hame chalna cahiye, hamra internship ka pehla din hai.

Riddhima noticed that Anji looked sad when she said this😔.

Ri:(hummm... ye kya chakkar hai pata karna pade ga)

At: really guys aaj mera aur mere bro ka bhi internship ka pehla din hai.

An: oh wow sacchi yeh to kitna achha hua.😃😳

Anjali blurted out and then blushed. Which atul thought was so cute.😃

Ri:(NO WAY Anji likes him Yeeeppp, aab to kuch na kuch karna pade ga)

Ri: hey kyu na haam andar locker room me chale. Hame waise bhi 9:00AM baje report karna hai.

At: why dom't you both go. Mai mere bro ke saath aata hu.

An: ok then see you Atul.

Atul is just lost in his Anjali's thoughts😍 when Arman enters.

Ar: hey champ kaha kho gaya hai, chal chalna nahi hai kya. Champ...Champ...CHAMP...

At:oh sorry yaar chal.

Ar:(isse kya ho gya hai, chal chod Arman tu bhi na)

They reach the locker room and we see Riddhima and Anjali laughing at something. Then Arman suddnley halts on his way.

Ar:(Wow yeh kitne khoobsurat ladki hai. Lambe baal aur kitni deep green eyes. Haiii... kitni beautiful hai.Oh shit! yaar yeh kya keha raha hu mai. Common Arman be a dude aisi sab baate kahna band kar. Focus dude focus)

Ri: Are Atul tum ah gaye.

Ar:(yeh Atul kab se isshey janta hai)

At: Hah bas bro ka wait kar raha tha. To yeh hai mere bro Arman.

Ar and Ri: Hi Arman.

Ar: Hi girls(oh to yeh baat hai, atul ense abhi mila)

Ri: I am Riddhima aur yeh hai meri twin sis Anjali.

Riddhima stiks out her hand as a greeting and Arman moves forward to shake her hand. But as soon as they look into eachothers eyes they get lost.😍

Ri:(hey bhagwan itne gorgous eyes. kitne grey hai.)

Atul and Anjali come next to each other and are just looking at their respectiv bro/sis with shock.

An:(wispers) tumhe pata hai Atul Ridzi ne kabi kisi ladke par itna intrest nahi dala jisme woh apne hosh he gwa baithe.

At:(wispers back) pata hai aisa to Armaan ne bhi kbhi nahi kiya. Chalo maza ayega. ab inke faces dekna.

At: Ahem ahem...

Arman and Ridhimma snap out of their la la land.

Ri: Arman mera haat...

Ar: huh... oh sorry.

They both blush and go towards their respective lockers and you see Atul and Anjali just laughing in the background.😃

Ar and Ri:(tuje to mai choduga nahi Atul/Anjali ke/ki bacche/i.)😵

At: Kya mast hospital hai na guys.

He takes a look around and ends up in front of the door, when suddenly the door opens really hard and hits Atul which makes him fall down.

At: Hai mar gya, puri kamar ka satya nash kar diya is kalmuhi ne. Aye hai keede padi teri muuh me karam jali.🤣

An: Tum teek to ho na Atul kahi gir ke tumhe apne sir par chott to nahi aah gaye.

Girl: Kya kaha tumne kalmuhi and karam jali. himmat kaise hui tumhari macchar kahi ke.

Ar: hey chill yaar yeh to sirf nautanki baaz hai mom ke saath serials deakh deakh kar iss ka sir ghoom gaya hai.

At: ya yaar jast chill i was kidding, mai to sirf serials ki Vamp ki tarha acting kar raha tha. you know jab herion vamp ko girati hai tab. kaise lagi meri acting sabko, ha Anjali?

An: tum bhi na Atul ek second ke liye dara hi diya tha.

Girl: oh to yeh kaho na. thodi acting schating to mare ko bhi andi hai.(sorry guys i really dont know much punjabi but i am trying). waise chaddo ji mara naam hai Muskan.

As soon as Musk introduced herself a guy opened the door in a hurry and again the door hit Musk.

Mu: uui maa, maargai re. Hai rabba kitne joor se laag gai.

She gets up and looks at the guys very angrily.😡

Mu: Khotte de puttaar. Dheak ke nahi chal sakta tha kya. Tere koi train to nahi chuti ga rahi hai.

Guy: Look i am really really sorry. I am Rahul.

Mu: tu kya karu aarti utaru teri.😛

Ra:(are aajib ladki hai ek to mai sorry kah raha hu aur yeh hai ki, abhi bata ta hu isko) aye taamiz se baat kar chipkalli kahi ki, jab se jo man me aya bole ja rahi hai.

Mu:kya kaha tune tuje to mai mar dalugi bandar😃 kahi ka.

Muskan charges towards Rahul but atul and Anjali hold her back..

Rd: chill yaar guys.

Ar: yah tumlog itni se baato me ladd kyu rahe ho. This is our first day so just chill.

INTERCOM: sabhi interns abhi room 101 me Dr. Keerti ko report kare.

An: chalo guys chlte hai tum log na baad me laad le na, agar pahle hi din late ho gye to kaisa impression pade ga. Chlo chale.

ALL: yah lets go.

DR. KEERTI'S OFFICE RM. 101

Dr. K: Welcome to Sanjeevani doctors. Mai hu Dr.Keerti aap logo ki incharge aur senior Dr. Yaha aap log apna pehla padhav shuru karne ja rahi ha as internes. Mai yah aaj kuch baate clear kar do aap logo ke liye. Sanjeevani is a very prestigious medical institute aur yah aaj aap log Sanjeevani ka naam raushan karne aaye hai. Muje yaha koi galti nahi chahiye. Understood.😳

ALL: yes Dr. Keerti.

Dr. K: to teek hai mai aap logo ko kuch rules batana chahugi. Pehala no cell phones allowed, aur agar aap la te hai to woh jab tak ki aap logo ki duties khatam nahi ho jati, aapke lockers me rahege. Aap log duty hours me mujhe ya koi senior doctors ko bina bataye kahi nahi jaa sakte. Is that clear.

ALL: yes mam.

Dr. K: Aur ha yaha Sanjeevani me every month ek intern chuna jata hai jise Intern of the Month ka kitab milega. aur iske points aap apni duties me kitna accha karte hai uss se aayege. Now mai aap logo ko aapne duties bata deti hu. Dr. Arman and Dr. Rahul aap logo ki duti OPD me saath me hai. Dr. Atul and Dr. Riddhima app logo ki duties General ward mei hai.

At and Ri: yes mam.

Dr K: aur Dr. Muskan aur Dr. Anjali aap logo ki duties cancer ward me hai. Around 2:00PM aap logo ka 40 min ka break hoga aur fir aap apne duties 6:00PM tak resume karege. aur beech me aap logo ko aapne marzi ka 10 min break milega. Any questions.

ALL: No Dr.Keerti.

Dr.K: ok to aap loog apne apne lab coat,pagers,or id cards le legiye aur kaam suru kigiye.

All of them quickly go and take their things excited to start their journey ino becoming a Dr.😃

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Well here it was Chapter 1 and sorry for any mistakes. Please tell me how you all liked it.😃 and also do comment as it gives me motivation and i know if i am doing it right or wrong. Thanks.Bye for now.