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hershii

@Smileyface

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 13 years ago

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aww this is adorable!! i liked it!!

LOL i laughed when she spilled the wine on Lucy hahahha!! and akash smiling hahaah he is so adorable <3

nice one love!!!

xox

hershi

Edited by Smileyface - 13 years ago

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Posted: 13 years ago

this is a really fine os of jealousy, but i have to be honest it wasnt as angsty as i would have liked, but then again thats just me, lol and i'm a no1 fan of angst. ;)

i only say this cuz usually angsty writing makes my insides all funny and heart feels ...well...angsty, LOL. i cant explain. but as you said its your first piece of angst, so not bad. its a brill jealousy os.

loved khushi chucking the drink on the girl, it was total LOLz.

hope i havent offended you. i just wanted to tell you how i felt. :)

loads of love

xxx

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@-Sanjana-

Sparkler

+ 7

Posted: 13 years ago

reserveeddd! 🤗

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Omggg!!! It was simply fantabulous!!! 🤗 Absolutely adored Khushi's jelousy!😆 It was so much fun to read!!!! And then the end part!!!! romantic hug in the shower!!!!! <3 hai hai!!! *blushes* It was such a cute OS yaar! U should definately write many more!!!! Waiting for future pms from u!😉

Lots of love and hugs 🤗,

Sanju

Edited by ---Pari--- - 13 years ago