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Posted: 13 years ago
#91
nice ss...

do add me to ur PM list...

sent u request...
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Posted: 13 years ago
#92
POOR GEET, MAAN THREW HER OUT AT THE WORST TIME AND NOW HE CANT FORGET HER
BUT GEET HAS SUCH GOOD FRIENDS TO TAKE CARE
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Posted: 13 years ago
#93
atleast try to update this atleast once in a week if you can 😊

poor geet 😭

oh precap maan is going to wild again
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Posted: 13 years ago
#94
anybody interested for an update?
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Posted: 13 years ago
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Part 2

"We have to go shopping...!" Yash chorused loudly.

"Hmmm'...what?" Pinky asked.

"Come on'...guys'...I am in a good mood! My boss didn't catch my lie'and in this occasion we are all going shopping", Yash giggled.

Pinky chuckled. "I go and fetch Geet" Pinky said.

"I am waiting for you all'...only five minutes to get ready"

Pinky shook her head; Yash and his conditions...'she ran inside the house.

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Geet sat on her bed. She looked at Maan's photo. She was crying. "Maan'please'" she begged as tears rolled down her cheeks. She patted her tummy and looked at the photo again. "What did the baby do? It was me at fault, not the baby'"

Pinky stood at the door; watching Geet sadly.

"Geet, come on, Yash will take us for shopping?" Pinky said brightly.

Geet faked a smile. "No, I'm not in a mood" Geet said.

"You're never in a good mood since you've come here" Pinky pointed out. "Come on'we got to go" Pinky said and took Geet by the arm gently.

"Pinks'nobody can win in arguing with you" Geet laughed brushing away her tears.

"For instance only you can't" Pinky laughed. Geet smiled.

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"This car had to stop only now" Maan said irritated. The engine coughed a little and died away. "Hell" Maan said punching his fists in the car seat.

"Maybe I'll find some help here" he looked around the shopping precinct. "Stupid thing!" Maan muttered and stormed inside.

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"We're here!" Yash said happily.

"Lovely" Pinky said.

"Hmmm" Geet said absent-minded.

+++++

Maan pointed his car to the man. "How much time will you take?" Maan asked. "Approximately; one hour, sir" the man said. "What? One hour? I am not going to waste my precious time" Maan said. The man shrugged.

Maan looked at the area and the mall. "Well, let's do some shopping, Maan Singh Khurana" Maan said sarcastically and walked inside, cursing his luck.

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"Geet, is this beautiful?" Pinky asked.

Geet nodded.

"I am going to try it" Pinky said and disappeared inside.

Geet looked around the varieties of clothes. She didn't want to buy anything. Her sight caught with a white sari'.

Flashback starts

"Geet'...you look amazing in this white sari" Maan said as he danced with the beat of the music. Geet flushed. "Did I say you too looked hot in the black suit?" Geet winked. Maan chuckled and said "Oh really!" and brought Geet closer to him, tightening his grip making Geet blushingly red!

Flashback ends

Geet had tears in her eyes.

Yash sighed. "In which memories you got lost?" Yash asked shaking her. Geet nodded for a 'no' when Yash interrupted "are you lying to me?" Geet didn't say anything while Yash brushed off her tears. "They don't suit you" Yash said making Geet smiled.

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Maan stared at the scene his mouth hanging open. "How dare my employee touch my wife?"

"He'll regret it" was his second thought.

"He'll pay for it" was his third thought.

"I'll kill him" was his fourth thought.

"She is my Geet"

Maan thought and brushed off the fact that he had told Geet to go away from his life. He crept silently and peered to watch Geet and Yash though the selves.

Come on, stop standing like the statue of liberty here'we come for shopping'so shop like normal women" Yash chuckled.

Maan gritted his teeth.

"Shut up" Geet laughed smacking him on the arm.

Maan clenched his fists.

"Geet Didi'...why don't you try this?" Yash asked waving a green salwar kameez to Geet.

"What? Didi? What? Did I hear well?"

love you all...
Edited by music_girl - 12 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#96

loved it... happy to be first at your post

Edited by maansee - 13 years ago
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Posted: 13 years ago
#97

awesome updt

lovely

yash n pinky r so supporting to geet

poor geet is so sad and hurt poor baby

omg maan possessive n thinking of killing yash lol!

ha ha maan shocked n look at his guts he kicked her out still he says she is mine!

cont soon!

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Posted: 13 years ago
#98
awesome
loved it
so yash called geet as didi so maa confusion is clear
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Posted: 13 years ago
#99
oh jeez!
Luvd maan's jealousy..
Waiting for maneet to meet..
whether maan noes dat geet s pregnant?
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Posted: 13 years ago
J maan...lovely...😆

finally he got to know the relation between geet n yash...otherwise pata nahi yash ka kya hota...

continue soon...

thnx for PM...

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