Hey harshi,
Firstly, really sorry abut late late comment.. but honestly, I posted it right at the front, had to be 2nd or 3rd comment but my stupid phone.. I commented at around 4 in the morning.. read it when I woke up from sleep half way through the night.. read it & commented on it.. but somehow IF didn't register it š” hate accessing If through phones.. but sorry for keeping u waiting!!
OK!! coming to the update.. once again this was awesome!! romantic, uber cute, perfect date with perfectly romantic moments btw almost perfect couple that u have created, specially Arnav in ur FF is to die for!! š³š³
Loved the fact that u once again choose Arnav's farmhouse as their 2nd date spot!! bringing back wonderful memories for me as a reader as well as for ArHi where they felt closer than ever before for the 1st time.. awesome thought!! But more importantly, it was the warmth & the atmosphere that u created swayed me totally!! I super super super loved that u finally penned down one moment where they were both swaying in each others arms looking at the moon & brightly lit beautiful sky & feeling the closeness to their parents!! I was waiting for u to pen this moment down because I so appropriately relate to it.. though not as memories of parents but every night or whenever I feel lonely, I sit by the french doors opening up to my backyard & stare at the moon as long as my eyes doesn't shut itself, thinking of memories which are dear to me & also, building up memories of my prince charming who still hasn't entered my boundaries š³š³ but ya, I just so love it.. Thank u for using it in ur FF.. now, it gonna be more special to me!!
I'm gonna say this the zillionth time.. I just love love love Arnav in ur FF š¤ the mature, caring, sensitive Arnav which opens up only in front of Khushi is just dreamyyy!! š Love how he notices every little gesture os Khushi.. this time around, his mind registered the fact that she's turned on just by noticing Khushi caressing her hand around her neck.. but is pulling her fingers out š voila! she's nervous.. she doesn't know how to voice out the fact that she can't become his at the moment!! & his comment.. "meaningless sex" surprising choice of words but perfect to put his thoughts forward.. which even Khushi realizes that for both of them, this relation means life, bond of purity & eternity.. & so, physical closeness is just a way of showing a part of this love & not complete love.. doesn't matter if they are physical or not.. it's the strong bond, understanding & truthfulness btw them which marks their relationship!! Awesome..
Alright!! I just loveee the song u played for them.. "just a kiss" one of my favourites!! like u said Arnav's thoughts identifies to the lyrics of this song perfectly!! š super choice babe!! Also, u once again marked the fact clearly that Arnav has left behind the misunderstanding btw them long back & his mind doesn't hover over those thoughts anymore.. though I have to add, I being a little ruthless, loved that Khushi feels guilty abut it still but also, realizes Arnav's love which is to an extent that he has forgotten abut it all & has clearly moved on & cannot see tears in her eyes bcoz of it.. so, now Khushi should just forget abut it.. but remember it a little bit so that she doesn't repeat even a bit of it in future!!
Lastly, The precap!! zalim harshi!! itne romantic date ke baad aisa heart wrenching clifhanger!! š so, Arnav's anger over something Khushi did & that too making sure her touch doesn't melt him.. hmm.. something intense coming up!! I have a feeling I'm gonna enjoy this tiff.. š he he.. but really curious to know what has she done this time to wind up Arnav again!! curious, anxious, impatiently waiting for the next update!!
Okayyy!! so, this super longgg comment was to make up for my lateee comment!! hope this made u a litlle tiny winy bit happy! let me know what u thought abut it.. it took me 2 unsuccessful attempts to post comment for the last chapter.. but finally, mission successful!! š
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